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What a super piece. Dark and
Posted on Tue, 27 Oct 2015
What a super piece. Dark and light.
Read full commentPosted in Some days begin with a swim
This is really sweet. I feel
Posted on Wed, 21 Oct 2015
This is really sweet. I feel the ending needs more welly... that last line feels it should be a crescendo ending rather than a fine one but that may be my impression.
Read full commentPosted in discord to harmony (revised)
I really like how this
Posted on Tue, 20 Oct 2015
I really like how this condenses so much and doesn't lose depth in the economy. The narrative voice has the hindsight of maturity in it - and gets more cynical towards sister as you go.
Read full commentPosted in 'Go Now'
Mythical and gorgeous
Posted on Sun, 18 Oct 2015
Mythical and gorgeous escapism
Read full commentPosted in Oyster Bay
Deeply moving. It must have
Posted on Thu, 08 Oct 2015
Deeply moving. It must have been painful to write. The time - a true gift - and ways it will be spent precious.Beautifully conveyed.
Read full commentPosted in “The joy of an Indian summer*”
A Russian Doll journey within
Posted on Wed, 07 Oct 2015
A Russian Doll journey within a journey. Told with such love and bold colour.
Read full commentPosted in Stepping Stones (Poetry Monthly)
Some interesting descriptions
Posted on Tue, 06 Oct 2015
Some interesting descriptions. The formal language is distancing though - seems some grammatical errors in the translation.
Read full commentPosted in Fun Filled Days (Revised)
Beautiful simplicity worked
Posted on Sat, 03 Oct 2015
Beautiful simplicity worked in to this story. Particularly love the lines: cradled her weightless corpse upstairs, undid her dress... It feels very personal as though we are voyeurs to this intimate confession.
Read full commentPosted in Clocking In
Autumn days when the grass is
Posted on Thu, 01 Oct 2015
Autumn days when the grass is jewelled...A gorgeous piece full of the colours of fall and putting summer to bed. Is it meant to be 'silvered.'
Read full commentPosted in Come October
A weak child rehabilitating..
Posted on Sat, 26 Sep 2015
A weak child rehabilitating.. Echoes of the sickness that ravaged her immune system still there and the burn conveys how virus / disease feasts on the weakest. A slow burn to the poem - your pauses and breaths used to striking affect. Her...
Read full commentPosted in Slow Burn
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