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Oh it's lovely Marcia. Your
Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2015
Oh it's lovely Marcia. Your language is delicate, very soothing to see, too. Really excited you've had a go. The repetition in this strikes me - the gulls gulls gulls. My favourite is the use of brackets - rays of sun? I think so. If you tag it...
Read full commentPosted in look away ..... .... ... .. . . . . . ."Poetry Monthly"
Horridly painful, an
Posted on Fri, 04 Dec 2015
Horridly painful, an unbearable device to use before and after in that interchangeable way which we know isnt so. A powerful, well drawn piece.
Read full commentPosted in Preparing to Meet Your Goliath
This is simply put but has
Posted on Wed, 02 Dec 2015
This is simply put but has universal connections. I like how it ends unfixed.
Read full commentPosted in Dark Places
Welcome to ABCTales, Ken. I
Posted on Wed, 02 Dec 2015
Welcome to ABCTales, Ken. An interesting ntroduction, perhaps the formatting could be adjusted to set your text in bigger paragraph blocks so you can fit more per page.
Read full commentPosted in Lamar Theater - Chapter 1
Some innovative word play and
Posted on Tue, 01 Dec 2015
Some innovative word play and original imagery.
Read full commentPosted in Muse
This is sweetly nostalgic. It
Posted on Mon, 30 Nov 2015
This is sweetly nostalgic. It reminds me of wolves in the mountains even though it's people based.
Read full commentPosted in The Blessed Skin
What a gorgeous concept.
Posted on Fri, 27 Nov 2015
What a gorgeous concept.
Read full commentPosted in The Snowflake Collector – 7: Every Day Brought New Gifts Now
This was such fun!
Posted on Tue, 24 Nov 2015
This was such fun!
Read full commentPosted in A skeuomorphic diet for … (Poetry Monthly)
It's a very well realised
Posted on Wed, 25 Nov 2015
It's a very well realised story with very sharp observations which contribute significantly to the tension. It was reassuring at the close - a satisfactory ending that gives your reader something to take away in a restorative fuzzy way.
Read full commentPosted in The Station
Agreed, Tina. Barbaric.
Posted on Mon, 23 Nov 2015
Agreed, Tina. Barbaric. Numbering the badger has a powerful reverse psychology here. Second person shift is unusual and destabilising - it works really well to distance yourself from the emotion and place your reader central to it. Plus it has...
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