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Some very detailed scene

Posted on Sun, 17 Jan 2016

Some very detailed scene setting.Welcome to ABCTales, hope you write some more of your story.

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Posted in First date story extract 1

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Why, you robbing scounderel.

Posted on Fri, 15 Jan 2016

Why, you robbing scounderel.

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Posted in I stole this poem from Vera

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I love the Russian doll style

Posted on Sat, 09 Jan 2016

I love the Russian doll style of this, the inside- outness that takes you to that haunting. It works even better for the compact run-on structure - no stanzas or white space. A very novel way of telling history via landmarks. 

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Posted in 'The Way Through the Woods'

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Richly animated and original

Posted on Sun, 27 Dec 2015

Richly animated and original writing

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Posted in The Serene Fellowship 1 The Green Serene Part Two

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This is lovely. Seemingly

Posted on Sat, 26 Dec 2015

This is lovely. Seemingly light, an expert of his trade and yet the vulnerability rarely seen. Homelessness is the main political issue that I get on my soapbox about and have to be carried off still yelling about it. Social attitudes in the UK...

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Posted in The Guy Pushing Big Issue

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And still the world turns.

Posted on Wed, 23 Dec 2015

And still the world turns. Tilts, to be precise. This is a feast of unexpected imagery and surprising new perspectives on things we know. Deeply sad but has a keen sense of restoration with it.

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Posted in Stars of Wonder

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The visuals scaffold the

Posted on Wed, 23 Dec 2015

The visuals scaffold the transitory nature of time with delicacy. A very pretty piece with a Romanticist feel to it.

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Posted in Reprise (Poetry Monthly)

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I really liked the strange

Posted on Mon, 21 Dec 2015

I really liked the strange clean lines of this nostalgia.

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Posted in Iggy Pop's Eyes, Manchester Apollo 1977

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The antibiotic tee full of

Posted on Sun, 13 Dec 2015

The antibiotic tea full of mould, the apologetic phonecall, the up before the down - seemingly unrelated until the close. Very well done. We (collectively) join the dots post suicide. A very true piece that does much deeper work than apologies....

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Posted in Life is a Book of Apologies

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It's a feast for the eyes. It

Posted on Tue, 08 Dec 2015

It's a feast for the eyes. It must have taken some arranging. Has real impact and I like how you've clustered words too. 

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Posted in Sprayed Words (Poetry Monthly)

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