VeraClark

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323 of my comments have received 328 Great Feedback votes

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Posted on Fri, 12 Aug 2016

 I love this,but feel you repeat the same sounds from verse one to three.Feel it reduces impact. Do say if it is deliberate.

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Posted in Coffee Moon Haiku Set

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A powerful piece, Lev. Some

Posted on Wed, 10 Aug 2016

A powerful piece, Lev. Some of the dialogue feels expository, perhaps some backstory could reduce the need to give reason for ending it via the incident.Actions rather than words. See what you think.

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Posted in End of the line

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Some strong description of

Posted on Sat, 30 Jul 2016

Some strong description of texture and setting. In places the colloquial voice felt at odds with the rather formal description, perhaps keep an eye on that.

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Posted in A Midsummer Night's Blitz (London)

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Vivid, authentic, specific

Posted on Thu, 28 Jul 2016

Vivid, authentic, specific characterisation and your detail is a treat

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Posted in Strictly, The Last Supper

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This feels like a meeting

Posted on Tue, 26 Jul 2016

This feels like a meeting place, with its musings and the life' philosophies you've nailed. In fact, I thoroughly look forward to reading your work when I see your new posts. This is a really special piece, it has clarity and power with a casual...

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Posted in reflections and miscellany

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It feels monumental, looking

Posted on Tue, 05 Jul 2016

It feels monumental, looking out both bodily and visually as though the head is turned inside out. A striking sensation on reading it.

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Posted in Eriksay

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I like the inner monologue

Posted on Tue, 28 Jun 2016

I like the inner monologue here, sounds a gorgeous place,there are lots of exclamation marks which lose their impact by the finish, perhaps you could scale back on them a little.Just a thought.

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Posted in Torremolinos 2

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Sharp description takes you

Posted on Mon, 27 Jun 2016

Sharp description takes you down with it.Gritty derelict brooding.

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Posted in Berrylands

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A bold move to blog and I

Posted on Sat, 25 Jun 2016

A bold move to blog and I hope it helps many. You have nailed that emotional complexity with clarity and confidence,the cyclical nature of DV being so poorly misunderstood by outsiders and that makes your theoretical introduction to it a more...

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Posted in The First Step

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This made me long for things

Posted on Thu, 16 Jun 2016

This made me long for things in my past, such a stunningly conveyed snatch of lost things just out of reach and an injection of the now always moving us on and out of ourselves. Hypnotic. Lovely to read you again, fb.

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Posted in Gloaming

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