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This is so film like - the

Posted on Sat, 15 Oct 2016

This is so film like - the mise-en-scène manages to sequence the internal and external aspects of mental health and addiction with a colourful brevity. It's such a striking piece of work.

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Posted in Branwell Clinic

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A lovely adaptation with a

Posted on Fri, 21 Oct 2016

A lovely adaptation with a gentle humour.

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Posted in Owl and the Pussycat

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This is so moving with its

Posted on Wed, 31 Aug 2016

This is so moving with its collision of colour against horror.

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Posted in The Grief of Gaziantep.

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Posted on Fri, 12 Aug 2016

 I love this,but feel you repeat the same sounds from verse one to three.Feel it reduces impact. Do say if it is deliberate.

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Posted in Coffee Moon Haiku Set

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A powerful piece, Lev. Some

Posted on Wed, 10 Aug 2016

A powerful piece, Lev. Some of the dialogue feels expository, perhaps some backstory could reduce the need to give reason for ending it via the incident.Actions rather than words. See what you think.

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Posted in End of the line

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Some strong description of

Posted on Sat, 30 Jul 2016

Some strong description of texture and setting. In places the colloquial voice felt at odds with the rather formal description, perhaps keep an eye on that.

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Posted in A Midsummer Night's Blitz (London)

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Vivid, authentic, specific

Posted on Thu, 28 Jul 2016

Vivid, authentic, specific characterisation and your detail is a treat

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Posted in Strictly, The Last Supper

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This feels like a meeting

Posted on Tue, 26 Jul 2016

This feels like a meeting place, with its musings and the life' philosophies you've nailed. In fact, I thoroughly look forward to reading your work when I see your new posts. This is a really special piece, it has clarity and power with a casual...

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Posted in reflections and miscellany

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Simple and far reaching with

Posted on Mon, 11 Jul 2016

Simple and far reaching with the childlike balloon metaphor. The cord's a powerful visual for the disassociation mental health can bring. Apostrophe missing from anyone's.I think you could safely lose the closing question mark because it feels...

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Posted in Balloon

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It feels monumental, looking

Posted on Tue, 05 Jul 2016

It feels monumental, looking out both bodily and visually as though the head is turned inside out. A striking sensation on reading it.

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Posted in Eriksay

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