w.w.j.abercrombie

Primary tabs

I have 44 stories published in one collection on the site.
My stories have been read 37913 times and 48 of my stories have been cherry picked.
49 of my 159 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 60 votes

w.w.j.abercrombie's picture
Nick Austin

 

My stories

Cherry

Ghigau 18

Sunday 16th July Alan Terence O’Donnell lived in Dongola Road, Plaistow, in a small, two-up-two-down, pebble-dashed house, probably built around 1900...
1 likes
Cherry

Ghigau 17

Sunday 16th July Catherine Booth was at home and bored. It was another scorching day. The thermometer read 27 degrees and it wasn’t yet 10am. The air...
Cherry

Ghigau 16

Sunday 16th July Sam Tate could sense this case was going to become big news. After the press conference, and Lenny’s outburst, when he'd found out...
1 likes
Cherry

Ghigau 15

Saturday 15th July Hermione’s eyes were closed and she bit her lip in an effort to stifle a groan. The sheets beneath her were soaked with...
1 likes
Cherry

Ghigau 14

Saturday 14th July Lenny woke with a start. Somehow, another night had passed. Sunlight streamed through the open curtains that he hadn’t bothered to...

Pages

49 of my comments have received 60 Great Feedback votes

1 Vote

Thank you very much for the

Posted on Mon, 18 Aug 2025

Thank you very much for the encouragement and the cherries, I hope to add more later this month.

Read full comment

Posted in Ghigau 12

1 Vote

Insights

Posted on Fri, 04 Jul 2025

Others have pointed out a few inconsistencies - nothing that a quick edit wouldn't fix I'm sure - and I take their points, but the tone and the characterization is so good. I think the author is female, which makes the male lead even more...

Read full comment

Posted in The Vale - Part 1 (c)

1 Vote

Good ending

Posted on Sat, 05 Jul 2025

I love a twist, nice story.

Read full comment

Posted in The lisping god of small things

1 Vote

Nicely paced

Posted on Fri, 04 Jul 2025

I could see them in my minds eye - always the indicator of a good story for me. Nice one.

Read full comment

Posted in Born on the 4th of July

1 Vote

Damn those rogue apostrophes

Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2025

Thank you very much for the cherries and damn those rogue apostrophes!

Read full comment

Posted in Ghigau 5

1 Vote

Some really great lines in this

Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2025

Some great lines in this - I particularly liked 'A flicker of discomfort crossed her face as if my crumbling resolve unsettled her.'

 

Read full comment

Posted in Snake Eyes May Cry

1 Vote

Wow, thank you very much -

Posted on Thu, 26 Jun 2025

Wow, thank you very much - that means a lot.

Read full comment

Posted in Ghigau 4

1 Vote

All too familiar

Posted on Thu, 26 Apr 2018

Devastatingly observant. Enjoyed it greatly, although very glad not to be living it. 

Read full comment

Posted in Something Hard Inside Him (Part 2)

Pages