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1563 of my comments have received 1584 Great Feedback votes

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Writing is an inexact science

Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2020

Writing is an inexact science and does seem linked to many things. Think you captured it nicely with a seasonal theme

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I have always used "mom"

Posted on Thu, 03 Dec 2020

I have always used "mom" Maybe it's a Brummie thing

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A lovely tribute. I have not

Posted on Wed, 25 Nov 2020

A lovely tribute. I have not one but four of the little perishers!

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To be honest, I thought you

Posted on Tue, 24 Nov 2020

To be honest, I thought you were being descriptive as opposed to Glass Octupii being a species. What do I know?!

Agreed, I enjoyed the reply as well :)

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"A glass octopus" - unique

Posted on Tue, 24 Nov 2020

"A glass octopus" - unique imagery all over again :)

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*I am grateful to other folks

Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2020

*I am grateful to other folks who also gave me very detailed comments including airyfairy

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Cheers Drew. It was your

Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2020

Cheers Drew. It was your feedback that pushed me to think bigger. Thanks for the inspiration to aim higher. Paul

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I wish I flowed with prose

Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2020

I wish I flowed with prose like that. So fluent, so rhythmic

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Oh yes - Barnstaple it is. I

Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2020

Oh yes - Barnstaple it is. I've been there a few times as well. Thanks for spotting that and duly edited. There is a Barnstable in the US which would throw the geography out a tad! Yes, there is a part 2 at...

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Ah. Not so good. On that word

Posted on Wed, 18 Nov 2020

Ah. Not so good. On that word pivots the emotion of this poem. Moving and now even more personal. Paul

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