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Underneath the polite,
Posted on Sun, 06 Dec 2020
Underneath the polite, measured reflections, there’s something deliciously weird and off-kilter going on in this story, which is why it is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day. Please share!
No worries -- I think it conveys this idea of there being a kind of beauty in how existence and suffering are intertwined. However, that could just be my mindset on a Monday morning before a 3-hour meeting.
I genuinely don't know how you keep control of that final stanza, but it's seriously impressive -- it reads like a wave, if that makes sense (probably not!). Anyway, nice one.
Underneath the polite,
Posted on Sun, 06 Dec 2020
Underneath the polite, measured reflections, there’s something deliciously weird and off-kilter going on in this story, which is why it is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day. Please share!
Read full commentPosted in Friendship
Beautufully done.
Posted on Mon, 07 Dec 2020
Beautifully done.
And I want one for Christmas.
Read full commentPosted in Darwin’s Creatures
Haha! I really am!
Posted on Sun, 06 Dec 2020
Haha! I really am!
Posted in Friendship
No problem, Grace. Good to
Posted on Fri, 04 Dec 2020
No problem, Grace. Good to have some nice plans for a happier year ahead!
Read full commentPosted in The Three Gardens. Part Five.
Sounds like a very nice plan.
Posted on Fri, 04 Dec 2020
Sounds like a very nice plan.
Read full commentPosted in The Three Gardens. Part Five.
This has the feeling of a Tom
Posted on Mon, 09 Nov 2020
This has the feeling of a Tom Waits song. The unevenly labelled Tsingtao is a brilliant detail. I want to steal that.
Nice work.
Read full commentPosted in At The East Lake Where I'm Often Drunk, Thoroughly
Really admire how you blend
Posted on Mon, 02 Nov 2020
Really admire how you blend the imagery of animals with the impermanence of consciousness.
Read full commentPosted in Screech
Really impressive, Mark --
Posted on Sun, 06 Sep 2020
Really impressive, Mark -- well done.
Read full commentPosted in Brewster's Way 4
No worries -- I think it
Posted on Sun, 06 Sep 2020
No worries -- I think it conveys this idea of there being a kind of beauty in how existence and suffering are intertwined. However, that could just be my mindset on a Monday morning before a 3-hour meeting.
Posted in The Death of a Star
Really enjoyed the elemental
Posted on Sun, 06 Sep 2020
Really enjoyed the elemental feel of this.
I genuinely don't know how you keep control of that final stanza, but it's seriously impressive -- it reads like a wave, if that makes sense (probably not!). Anyway, nice one.
Read full commentPosted in The Death of a Star
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