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I'm so sorry you still aren't
Posted on Sun, 07 Aug 2016
I'm so sorry you still aren't getting email notifications Alphadog. Lluis the techie is working on it. Is there any other possible reason why they mightn't work for you? Could you check the email address on your account is still current? Have you...Read full comment
I had to read back at one
Posted on Thu, 21 Jul 2016
I had to read back at one point to work out how many people there were and who was who, but apart from that this is great. The dialogue feels very authentic - really nice to see some prose from you!
One typo - discrete should be discreet...Read full comment
Posted in Dogs
Very nicely done. Fantasy is
Posted on Mon, 27 Jun 2016
Very nicely done. Fantasy is not my thing but you kept my attention. A good balance of description and action.
A couple of suggestions for you:
Feeling the warmth of his hands she smiled and opened her eyes and looked into his. Her...Read full comment
Posted in Goodbye