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918 of my comments have received 937 Great Feedback votes

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now I'm enjoying this! I like

Posted on Thu, 11 Feb 2016

now I'm enjoying this! I like the ambiguity of the relationship between the two men - the way it seems to have more depth than in the previous parts. I think there's more balance in this part too, between action and backstory, although I...

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hahah - Bee they are

Posted on Mon, 08 Feb 2016

hahah - Bee they are brilliant! I think I've come across photos of them while searching for pictures for your Journey series. I do hope you're going to write the knitter a thank you poem and direct her to ABCTales to read it? (and the rest of...

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Posted in Knitted Knockers

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sometimes all the 'we's are a

Posted on Thu, 04 Feb 2016

sometimes all the 'we's are a bit confusing, but mainly this is well written, with humour, dignity and refreshing honesty. Thank you for posting it

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I enjoyed this thoughtful

Posted on Wed, 03 Feb 2016

I enjoyed this thoughtful piece ice. You might be interested to read Bee's journey - we have it on our front page.

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it's 'affect' both times

it should be who, not whom all the times you've used it here

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Me too! You might want to

Posted on Mon, 01 Feb 2016

Me too! You might want to remove one of the two consequentlys here:

Consequently, a young gentleman was often judged on the size of his folly. Consequently, any young unmarried gentleman who never displayed his ha-ha to his intended was...

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Prologues are definitely not

Posted on Mon, 18 Jan 2016

Prologues are definitely not old hat when they're as good as this one. I'll leave the pork pie and dinner date for someone else but will just highlight the tiny bit of comic genius that made me snigger:

'St Diodatis, patron saint of...

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Posted in Highly Strung

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A nice start. I like the slow

Posted on Sun, 17 Jan 2016

A nice start. I like the slow introduction of the typical English beach stuff, and then all the gradual clues that it's far from typical. I'd definitely like to read more and find out what happens!

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Posted in Bullets Over Broadstairs

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Very funny - I see problems

Posted on Wed, 13 Jan 2016

Very funny - I see problems ahead! 

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Posted in Bring Out Your Dead - Part 1

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how about keeping the

Posted on Tue, 12 Jan 2016

how about keeping the kamikaze mention on the TV documentary, then have dead german pilots/bombers in the man's memories. I think the Japanese only operated in the East and against the Us forces. You'd really lose something if you had to do away...

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A well-painted authentic

Posted on Thu, 07 Jan 2016

A well-painted authentic picture albeit a grim one. There are a couple of places where the present tense shouldn't be.

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