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 I found this very readable -

Posted on Thu, 23 Oct 2014

 I found this very readable - liked the gentle humour, the main character. Although it kept my attention to the end, it could really do with being a bit less ponderous, and - i don't know if this is to be continued - would definitely enjoy...

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A very enjoyable read - I

Posted on Sat, 04 Oct 2014

A very enjoyable read - I look forward to more of this. Welcome to ABC!

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Splendidly surreal! (either

Posted on Sat, 04 Oct 2014

Splendidly surreal! (either that or you've taken a LOT of drugs recently)

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I enjoyed this very much -

Posted on Sat, 27 Sep 2014

I enjoyed this very much - you have created a strong narrative voice. A couple of suggestions: you could possibly quicken the pace a little, also the ending is a bit weak and finally in the second paragraph I think you need to switch high and low...

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I really like this too - you

Posted on Sat, 13 Sep 2014

I really like this too - you've really brought the characters to life - hopefully not so much as they'd notice!

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Another compelling piece -

Posted on Mon, 08 Sep 2014

Another compelling piece - again I think you could have done a bit more with the ending. Do keep going. 

Although this is rated 18, which is fine, the title appears on the home page so must be a U rating. It needs to be either changed, or...

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Thoroughly agree with the

Posted on Fri, 05 Sep 2014

Thoroughly agree with the above. A fascinating picture of both modern America, and mental health. I don't know if you plan to develop this further, but if you do, perhaps take it a bit slower, try not to jump from one thing to another

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Posted in The Science of Fiction

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this kept me glued to the

Posted on Wed, 27 Aug 2014

this kept me glued to the screen - what a fantastic piece of writing!

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I think the sparrows theme

Posted on Wed, 13 Aug 2014

I think the sparrows theme works beautifully - a very good piece of writing

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I love this poem, but please

Posted on Tue, 01 Jul 2014

I love this poem, but please tell me what a gont is - I have no idea and neither does google!

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