Delved. I commented earlier that the narrative and dialogue had kind of settled. More natural and relaxed in the telling. Very noticable reading through the sections.
Interesting point. Britain doesn’t help in this either. There's been an obsession with Russian expansionism since Tsarist times, and greatly exacerbated during and after the Bolshevic revolution to the extent that Britain became militarily...
Really enjoyed the mood of this. A trivial point: I wondered whether the crows might be looking "along" the street and up the slope. Great piece on state of mind and forgetfulness. I'm trying to connect the initially squealing...
Wonderful.
Posted on Sat, 15 Jul 2017
Wonderful.
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So much feeling in so few
Posted on Mon, 10 Jul 2017
So much feeling in so few words. Lovely.
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Stoic.
Posted on Sat, 01 Jul 2017
Stoic.
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Oh, Penny4athought, I so
Posted on Sat, 03 Jun 2017
Oh, Penny4athought, I so dearly hope so. Let's keep trying to spread the love. Great piece. Delicate treatment of a dreadful topic. Well done.
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Delved. I commented earlier
Posted on Fri, 02 Jun 2017
Delved. I commented earlier that the narrative and dialogue had kind of settled. More natural and relaxed in the telling. Very noticable reading through the sections.
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This story of your father's
Posted on Mon, 01 May 2017
This story of your father's is one of those priceless reminders of a time and a mentality that we know we must never return to, but sometimes forget.
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The ever-changing sea. Nice
Posted on Wed, 26 Apr 2017
The ever-changing sea. Nice contrast, Rhiannon.
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Interesting point. Britain
Posted on Thu, 30 Mar 2017
Interesting point. Britain doesn’t help in this either. There's been an obsession with Russian expansionism since Tsarist times, and greatly exacerbated during and after the Bolshevic revolution to the extent that Britain became militarily...
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Says something about the
Posted on Sat, 04 Mar 2017
Says something about the anonymity and alienation of the daily commute. Nicely done.
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Hi Ewan.
Posted on Wed, 22 Feb 2017
Hi Ewan.
Really enjoyed the mood of this. A trivial point: I wondered whether the crows might be looking "along" the street and up the slope. Great piece on state of mind and forgetfulness. I'm trying to connect the initially squealing...
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