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324 of my comments have received 329 Great Feedback votes

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Made me cry. You are the best

Posted on Fri, 24 Jul 2015

Made me cry. You are the best flasher I've ever read.

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Posted in Lost

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They're not just things,

Posted on Mon, 20 Jul 2015

They're not just things, though. Can't think that! Unscientifically speaking, surely physical things hold on to aspects of personality, keep memory traces inside their physical structure, echoes of times past, a resonance of something you can't...

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Posted in The Poetry of Porcelain

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An interesting and

Posted on Wed, 15 Jul 2015

An interesting and specialised topic makes for a good read. This sentence: ' On taking on this role' might sound better starting with 'In' to reduce the ons! A strong narrative voice that could be even more powerful if you tightened your gargoyle...

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Posted in Gargoyles

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Modern, colloquial, has a

Posted on Sat, 11 Jul 2015

Modern, colloquial, has a tang of people's moral advice in it and most of all, nails council estate life and is refreshingly upfront.

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Posted in Up to Here with the Weather...

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I used to love Little Ted. It

Posted on Wed, 08 Jul 2015

I used to love Little Ted. It's really powerful, this, a real spare and poignant pinning down of neglect. Your windows - well, their windows - offer a place of hope, a sense of child normality and it taunts the child with what he has to face.

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Posted in "Get Ready To Play. It's..." ( Poetry Monthly)

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Such unusual touches to

Posted on Wed, 08 Jul 2015

Such unusual touches to describing the scenes - cabbage leaf crinkles and cawing Lords. It's visually rewarding but full of sound, too. A charming piece.

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Posted in 'You've Been Framed!' (Poetry Monthly)

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Love's rarely permanent and

Posted on Sun, 05 Jul 2015

Love's rarely permanent and it shape shifts - this poem nails that through memory and the structures of the house - fragility, repair, age, youth. It's such a beautiful piece.

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Posted in The Old House By The Sea

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Wistful and touching,

Posted on Tue, 30 Jun 2015

Wistful and touching, captures that hard to pin down longing and strangeness of strangers so well. Could the 'but' before 'once' go or are you attached to it? Is it more impact without? A dreamy piece.

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Posted in Madame Maserati - Reprise

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The perspective of this

Posted on Thu, 25 Jun 2015

The perspective of this delivers and the imagery so powerful. 'trauma in your daughter's hair' is my favourite line. Says so much.

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Posted in ‘What Say You?’

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Go on! Go for it.

Posted on Thu, 25 Jun 2015

Go on! Go for it.

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Posted in Another poem for my boyfreind

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