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318 of my comments have received 323 Great Feedback votes

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You've given me a tremendous

Posted on Fri, 14 Mar 2014

You've given me a tremendous laugh and funny or not, there's a real injection of suffering in there, too. This is fabulous and would love to hear it performed.

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Posted in Shorty

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Really liked the description

Posted on Wed, 12 Mar 2014

Really liked the description in this, could see it all, very well-drawn, Neil. Wasn't sure about soporific in the opening line - mainly because I had to google it. Have changed my mind now - it fits well. A good chapter.

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Posted in Surface Tension - Chapter 20

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This is vivid and

Posted on Sat, 22 Feb 2014

This is vivid and transporting with its hint of darkness. Really enjoyed.

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Posted in That Field

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Loved this. A healthy dose of

Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2014

Loved this. A healthy dose of sense-making nonsense with a splash of slapstick.

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Posted in Sar-chasm

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Really liked this MrChapper

Posted on Mon, 17 Feb 2014

Really liked this MrChapper Engaging from the opening. The gift itself is incredibly sad and your references to time slipping away, then the elderly parent's house upkeep gives a strong message. It's a universal story because we all face it or...

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Posted in The Waiting Room

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Wi-fi has a walking stick

Posted on Sat, 15 Feb 2014

Wi-fi has a walking stick -Brilliant. Thoroughly enjoyed this.Unique perspective, as ever.

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Posted in I love this storm

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This feels so tender and real

Posted on Thu, 13 Feb 2014

This feels so tender and real, the characters are vividly drawn with such care. Looking forward to more.

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Posted in Grandad's Party - Chapter 1 of 3

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Hello, more to chew on here.

Posted on Wed, 05 Feb 2014

Hello, more to chew on here. Gruesome stuff. Grrrh, I think I'd be tempted to start at 'I must've been studying her for weeks' because it starts straight at the point of intrigue. Keep going!

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Posted in Souvenir (part 2 of ?) [considerably longer than the last part..]

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Yes, some lovely descriptions

Posted on Sat, 01 Feb 2014

Yes, some lovely descriptions in this.Would love to read more.There's a deep consideration of language which makes the stillness intense.

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Posted in Memoirs Of Desolation

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The way your character zones

Posted on Thu, 30 Jan 2014

The way your character zones in on minutaie in the shower is good, lots of fine detail, her inner monologue draws you in. Only bit I wasn't sure about was the pouffe string, it trivialises the seriousness of the mood somewhat. The cutting end is...

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Posted in Seven-Eighths

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