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Assorted writers' groups, the odd anthology, occasional readings. Lots of looking out of the window. Hello, and thanks for dropping by.
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Readings of Episodes One and Two of the Pad Life Journals are now available on Sound Cloud: https://soundcloud.com/user-968566758 More to follow!
This is great - the sense of
Posted on Fri, 19 Aug 2016
This is great - the sense of unease is beautifully maintained, with Weasley giving the reader shudders and our concern for Kit growing all the time. Excellent cliffhanger ending. Please do keep posting more of this, it's so good.
Read full commentPosted in The Crimson Wake ii the awkward meetings
Nice start to this. I like
Posted on Thu, 18 Aug 2016
Nice start to this. I like the characters and the questions raised by the arrival of the 'cursed' ship. The set up really holds together.
Read full commentPosted in The Crimson Wake i arrival
This brilliant poem is our
Posted on Sat, 30 Jul 2016
This brilliant poem is our Facebook and Twitter Pick of the Day! Please share/retweet!
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Read full commentPosted in District Line ( London competition)
Not remotely a bit rubbish,
Posted on Mon, 01 Aug 2016
Not remotely a bit rubbish, but it does feel as though the ideas come tumbling out, and much better that way than the other. In the end we all write for ourselves, or we should, because otherwise it isn't our true voice. You have it harder than...
Read full commentPosted in The Cobbe house ii the Flunky club
Hello! Welcome to ABC Tales.
Posted on Mon, 01 Aug 2016
Hello! Welcome to ABC Tales. I very much liked the rhythm of this, and the contrast between the sound that seemed to be soothing and then became so frightening. It felt like part of something longer - have you got any plans to expand it? ...
Read full commentPosted in 1. The Fear Looming
Lots of strange and
Posted on Tue, 26 Jul 2016
Lots of strange and fantastical things here, with a fluidity between dreams and reality. I was wondering if it might help with the pacing if you used the dialogue to push the story forward - eg if, in the conversation between the narrator and...
Read full commentPosted in The Spectator, chapters 6 and 7
Hello! I enjoyed this very
Posted on Mon, 25 Jul 2016
Hello! I enjoyed this very much. Beautifully constructed, and some lovely strong phrases like 'the yoghurty morning light'. A mysterious and unsettling atmosphere with underlying humour. A rewarding read.
Read full commentPosted in Witnesses
Very perceptive, Luigi - an
Posted on Mon, 25 Jul 2016
Very perceptive, Luigi - an acronym to sum up someone who lived by the soundbite and image manipulation. I never really took to him personally but I both voted for him and, later on, marched in protest against him. The early years of his...
Read full commentPosted in Undercurrent
I don't know what you're
Posted on Sat, 16 Jul 2016
I don't know what you're worrying about, Ewan. Thousands will march, sweeping all opposition aside, in their quest. Pikachu will save the world. #WTF
Read full commentPosted in More Trouble Every Day
I don't share your Christian
Posted on Mon, 11 Jul 2016
I don't share your Christian faith, but I admire your honesty and ability for self reflection. This struck a real chord with me because of what I have been calling a lot of demands on my time recently from people who need support, and it's easy...
Read full commentPosted in Reocurring Dream
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