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I have 1187 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2870392 times and 1215 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1693 of my 15,695 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1727 votes

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Cherry

Grimms81

Lizzie is as lovely as Jaz remembered her, perhaps more so, with her chiselled cheekbones and hair untamed as a burning bush. The room is stuffy and...
Cherry

Grimms 80

‘What’s been the crack then?’ Del stands at the front door, a cigarette jammed between his lips. A clean white open-necked shirt sleeves contrast...

the independent cluase

Head filled with different kinds of wrongness rightness and onscreen brightness squared aye by large numbers two points resistance to three points...
Cherry

Grimms 79

Tony’s social worker, Marie, arrives on an official visit. She waits for him in the office. Dayshift-staff circle around, Julie flustered, leaves her...
Cherry

Grimms 78

Fag smoke drifts above Pizza Face’s head. His is a frightened silence amid bickering conversation and accusations of neglect. The last of the sun...

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1693 of my comments have received 1727 Great Feedback votes

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the mirage is the mirror to a

Posted on Tue, 14 Sep 2021

the mirage is the mirror to a larger hunger. 

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Posted in Hunger

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I guess we're all galactic

Posted on Sat, 11 Sep 2021

I guess we're all galactic travellers, especially on the A29. 

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Posted in The highwayman

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I'm a reader that writes

Posted on Sat, 04 Sep 2021

I'm a reader that writes stuff nobody much reads. I've written a couple of longer, novel sized stories. One, in particular, I think is good and should be published. Sometimes I send it off. But I don't expect it to be publsihed. I don't really...

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Posted in On Giving Up

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twenty-years old [hyphen, I

Posted on Mon, 30 Aug 2021

twenty-years old [hyphen, I think]

beat-up dog. 

could only have dreamt (delete 'of')

 Whilst we couldn't ever remember meeting there, we got on from the first second (delete 'we met')

quiite a view from the summit....

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Posted in Chinese Whispers (edited and updated, 2021)

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funny thing memory, who we

Posted on Fri, 27 Aug 2021

funny thing memory, who we are and who we are not. Dad and not dad. I'd the same thing with my mother. Mum and not Mum. When she died I said I was delighted. People might have taken that the wrong way, but not Mum had no life. 

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Posted in A Home Coming

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I wonder if kids will know

Posted on Mon, 23 Aug 2021

I wonder if kids will know what SWALK is? but you certainly do. SWALK to you too. Well done. 

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Posted in Love Letters From The Past S.W.A.L.K.

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good stuff. I was wating for

Posted on Wed, 25 Aug 2021

good stuff. I was wating for Cole to turn up. As a seasoned reader of chimes, I knew he would. 

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Posted in Wind Chimes on the Boardwalk

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nicely done. 

Posted on Wed, 25 Aug 2021

nicely done. 

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Posted in Sleepy Time

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yeh, we see each other, but

Posted on Tue, 17 Aug 2021

yeh, we see each other, but rarely outself. Well done. 

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Posted in Leaving Home

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aye, great ending. 

Posted on Tue, 10 Aug 2021

aye, great ending. 

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Posted in Stovies

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