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I have 1130 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1754032 times and 1139 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1389 of my 14,752 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1424 votes

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Jack O'Donnell

 

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Cherry

Grimms 44

Jaz sprawls on the couch, a Woodbine in his hand and has a few nips of whisky and sparks a can, leaving it at his feet. Angela, cross-legged in the...
Cherry

Grimms43

On the second landing, Jaz can’t wait. He nips into the cludgie and pulls the door over, stands leaning, left hand splayed against peeling paint of...
Gold cherry

grimms42

At 11.45 am three masked men burst through the door of the Linen Bank on Dunbarton Road, stocking masks over their faces. ‘This is a stick up,’...
Cherry

grimms41

Tony remembers a parade of uniforms and much mumbling just outside of hearing. He forgets who has come or who had gone. Memories and dreams mixed up...
Cherry

grimms40

There is a vacancy in the way Tony looks out the car window at the sweep of tenement building they pass and a sense of unease that they are going in...

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1389 of my comments have received 1424 Great Feedback votes

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a saw-toothed landscape yet

Posted on Sat, 19 Aug 2017

a saw-toothed landscape yet something slightly scary but a beauty shinies through. 

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Posted in Un Dia en Las Palmas

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the seasons lead us and we

Posted on Sat, 12 Aug 2017

the seasons lead us and we follow on drfiting through time. 

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Posted in Seasons

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yeh, kids stuff and their

Posted on Sat, 12 Aug 2017

yeh, kids stuff and their little ways. 

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Posted in Tapper

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a joy to the heart indeed. 

Posted on Sat, 12 Aug 2017

a joy to the heart indeed. 

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Posted in Amazed

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ah, the old Witchita lineman

Posted on Fri, 11 Aug 2017

ah, the old Witchita lineman is offline. I see a pattern here. 

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Posted in Goodbye Glen

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There are more people who are

Posted on Fri, 11 Aug 2017

There are more people who are homeless and the same amount of the beds.  [deled the beds. egMore homeless and the same number of beds 

a familiar tune Elise, less money which need to go further, but doesn't. Wages drop and some corporation...

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Posted in 2002-05 My memories of working at a hostel for homeless men

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While we try to make contact

Posted on Thu, 27 Jul 2017

While we try to make contact with the [?]

interesting I was thiinking of writing a similiar story along the lines of televised torture. 

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Posted in Frankenstein in Ireland

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my name's jack and I'm

Posted on Tue, 25 Jul 2017

my name's jack and I'm looking for perfection too, but bowling along until I find it. 

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Posted in 300 A perfect Example

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yes, all of those things and

Posted on Fri, 30 Jun 2017

yes, all of those things and more. 

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Posted in Craving Lilac Language

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summer in essence. 

Posted on Sat, 24 Jun 2017

summer in essence. 

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Posted in Summer Thrills.

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