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I have 1187 stories published in 7 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 2870392 times and 1215 of my stories have been cherry picked.
1693 of my 15,695 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 1727 votes

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Grimms77

Junior hurries home. Tired and hungry, his hair sun-washed and lighter than his brothers’, he finds virtue in manual labour, skin lightly tanned and...
Cherry

Grimms 76

Awash with pints and halfs and even mouth puckering gin, with a slice of lemon and whisky in the same glass. Cocktails of his own devising. His day...
Cherry

Grimms75

With all the cash Jaz is carrying and the hurry-scurry Rab is surprised to be standing beside him at a bus stop waiting for a bus. Jaz has brought...
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Grimms 74

Jaz hears the loud screeching and the rising harangue which follows. It woke him up. It wakes the whole tenement block. The smell of cigarette smoke...
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Grimms73

‘You don’t need to be daft and drown yerself. You can just drink the poison to kill yerself.’ Bruno is deft at sneaking up on people and has big lugs...

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1693 of my comments have received 1727 Great Feedback votes

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henrik and harold. I remember

Posted on Thu, 05 Aug 2021

henrik and harold. I remember it well. I'm sure my celebrations were someting like that, but nothign like that. 

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Posted in Wan Goal tae the Good

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I've not read a lot of Dylan

Posted on Sun, 08 Aug 2021

I've not read a lot of Dylan Thomas, but his words burtst from the page. I guess that's what we all aim for. 

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Posted in Fleeting Observations Of A Poet

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Hammer House of horrors, I

Posted on Sat, 07 Aug 2021

Hammer House of horrors, I remember it well. 

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Posted in Vampire Wedding in North Cornwall

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I suffer from saccaddes, it's

Posted on Tue, 03 Aug 2021

I suffer from saccaddes, it's a kind of work blindness, like sand in your eyes. You can obviously, see, poetry. 

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Posted in Saccades of Sands

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geez don't spoit it, bring on

Posted on Sun, 01 Aug 2021

geez don't spoit it, bring on the sunshine. 

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Posted in Dreams of Rain

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Father Ambrose sounds like a

Posted on Fri, 30 Jul 2021

Father Ambrose sounds like a businessman, putting his mark down and sacking employees. Sad about the women who had to give their children away. I was shocked it was still happening in Ireland in the 1930s, with children dying of hunger. We always...

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Posted in Maria's Diary 37

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beautiful. 

Posted on Sat, 24 Jul 2021

beautiful. 

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Posted in In IKEA, he dreams about the woman he loves

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I guess war is always

Posted on Fri, 23 Jul 2021

I guess war is always described as inevitable. That way it's like a kid's told-you-so. 

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Posted in Family Meetings

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some cowards and heroes,

Posted on Fri, 23 Jul 2021

some cowards and heroes, typically, Englsimen desribed in glowing terms, lasars and coloured men in the former category. I guess it wasn't quite like that. 

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Posted in Maria's Diary 35 The Shipwreck

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poor sap. wonder what mother

Posted on Tue, 20 Jul 2021

poor sap. wonder what mother will say. 

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Posted in When Robert Left Helen

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