Granny to the rescue1

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My stories have been read 2229 times 2 of my 27 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 2 votes

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When we made Love

When we made LOVE I sliced my finger with a knife, When we made LOVE I cut off my fingernail, I helped with YOU MUM And I carried YOU out, I crafted...

Circle of life

In this world, world we have, have a while, while we live, live in air, air we breathe, breathe in life, life we make, make our way, way in time,...

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Bitch

Peter looked around the poster strewn walls of the Old West café. It was fairly busy and far too noisy. His eyes fixed on a woman with blond hair;...

Robin

Robin I rescued a little Robin Bertie I did name He couldn’t fly he couldn’t walk But I loved him just the same And when it got to Christmas Eve He...

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2 of my comments have received 2 Great Feedback votes

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Written with compassion , you

Posted on Wed, 27 Jan 2016

Written with compassion , you have commanded the readers attention with this Poem. It is regimented and orderly. A story in Rhyme. Without generalization you have described the private fears and sorrows of a delisted soldier, damaged physically...

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There was more than a twist

Posted on Wed, 06 Jan 2016

There was more than a twist to his tail. I like the unusual story. Well written with good pace and an unexpected ending.

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Posted in Rudy, Lil Red and DJ Gran [Red Riding Hood Retelling]