Jane Hyphen
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Is That All There Is
Chuck sat on the edge of the bed, staring at his hands. They were smooth, like the hands of a younger man, untouched by hard graft. He was a...
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His Bit of Fluff
'There's Dave with his bit of fluff,’ The four men all turned their heads towards the entrance, stared for a few seconds, made a few mocking grunts...
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Blueberry - Part Three
Think Sandra, think, think, think. Guessing the correct password for Ben’s laptop would be like trying to find a needle in a haystack. She tried:...
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Blueberry - Part Two
Sandra had a faith which fell somewhere between medium and strong. She thought of herself as lightly Christian and when she needed help, her faith...
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Blueberry
‘She’s the cutest puppy I’ve ever seen.’ ‘I know, mum.’ Thomas nodded his head, there were tears in his eyes and an emotional rosy flush across his...
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An interesting look into the
Posted on Sun, 22 Oct 2023
An interesting look into the night time world of wakefulness, Jenny, your psyche soaring beneath those closed eyelids. It does seem to provide a unique gap into more mysterious layers of consciousness, somewhere between proper dreams and lucidity...
Read full commentPosted in Transcendental Journey of Meditation
Ha ha, you must have gone to
Posted on Mon, 23 Oct 2023
Ha ha, you must have gone to a mixed mega comprehensive like me then. Those poor teachers, the ones who tried that is. Thank you for reading.
Read full commentPosted in Come to the Sports Hall
Love, 'wordlessly as a storm'
Posted on Sun, 22 Oct 2023
Love, 'wordlessly as a storm'. The magic of the lake, communicated softly in your poem. I googled it and now I want to visit.
Read full commentPosted in Blagdon Lake in Winter
Summed up that feeling of
Posted on Mon, 23 Oct 2023
Summed up that feeling of lying awake, the anxiety of missing out on the essential shut down hours and all worries magnified. Counting sheep, who came up with that? A farmer perhaps but I bet they sleep like babies anyway.
Read full commentPosted in Three O’Clock Sheep Club
I used to admire those
Posted on Tue, 17 Oct 2023
I used to admire those bicycle locks too with the chain buried in some trendy looking plastic tubing. I can just imagine an uncle indulging in a trick like this, they certainly do 'love to tease', it's their job.
Read full commentPosted in A Hazy Memory of an Uncle’s Trick
A reset button without all
Posted on Sun, 15 Oct 2023
A reset button without all the solicitors expenses. The beauty of the spouse bot is that, unlike people, it can be modified at the touch of a button, until the machines get too clever and start outsmarting us that is. Thank you for reading.
Read full commentPosted in 'Parcel for you..' Part 2
So many worlds, each
Posted on Tue, 17 Oct 2023
So many worlds, each beautifully described. Which one is real? Joe's Place sounds depressing and the train journey too but as long as there's paradise next to the lake, you can be restored.
Read full commentPosted in The Other Side of Paradise
That's where they would want
Posted on Sat, 14 Oct 2023
That's where they would want to be designed I think but I wouldn't know, I came out of the sea.
Read full commentPosted in 'Parcel for you..'
Thank you Insert. See me on
Posted on Sat, 14 Oct 2023
Thank you Insert. See me on Dragon's Den with my new product very soon...
Read full commentPosted in 'Parcel for you..'
People who rile us the most
Posted on Thu, 05 Oct 2023
People who rile us the most can be missed in ways we never expected. 'a cracked mirror of resentment', grinding words which epitomise loss and confusion.
Read full commentPosted in No Fond Farewell
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