Jane Hyphen
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Parables of Clippety (15) - The Overworld
There was a tense silence with both women wondering why the receptionist looked so concerned. A very short man with a hooked nose walked over very...
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Parables of Clippety (14) - The Bends
Marni locked her lips on him. First of all she sucked on his flesh, as hard as possible as if giving a love bite, then slowly she sunk her teeth in,...
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Parables of Clippety (13) - Suck My Blood
They struggled to keep up with him in their high heels and occasionally water splashed around their ankles but the idea of being left alone down...
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Parables of Clippety (12) - The Keys To The City
There was a moment of silence while Jurgen continued to lean back with his closed eyes, breathing slowly, his chest going up and down but as soon as...
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Parables of Clippety (11) - The Quarry
‘Okay, okay great! I’ll go and fetch it.’ Clare left the medical room with her heart racing. She was so worried that something would stand in her way...
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There's something intense
Posted on Mon, 18 Apr 2022
There's something intense about hands, our mother's hands in particular, hands that kept us alive as infants. A very moving poem.3
Read full commentPosted in These Hands
That's pretty much it, in a
Posted on Fri, 15 Apr 2022
That's pretty much it, in a nutshell. Very scary that so few people have so much power and so much wealth, following the same pattern as everything else, big businesses taking over small ones, countries seeking to overpower smaller ones. What's...
Read full commentPosted in two men
You've summed up just how
Posted on Thu, 14 Apr 2022
You've summed up just how much everything has changed over the past week Jenny. The air feels different and spring seems to have burst out of its seems all of a sudden. I love 'not being a pigeon expert', made me smile. The birds bring so much a...
Read full commentPosted in Passing Time
She still gets excited about
Posted on Sat, 09 Apr 2022
She still gets excited about smelling them - that's so sweet. It's hard to control your emotions, knowing what's ahead but by feeling sad about it you're depriving yourself some of the joy of still having them next to you. I know it's hard to be...
Read full commentPosted in Pet Sounds
Fulfilling to read, such a
Posted on Thu, 07 Apr 2022
Fulfilling to read, such a treat Di. I love 'bird song chips clear air', because they do, also love 'smelting life from light'. You've crammed so much quality in that I think I'll need to go back and re-read.
Read full commentPosted in April shower
I like the way you've woven
Posted on Wed, 06 Apr 2022
I like the way you've woven your adventures in the sensory experience; aromas, sounds, 'resembling a clutch of herbs'. Our brains seem to hang onto the sensory memories with astonishing accuracy, a song or the scent of a perfume acting as a time...
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I really enjoyed this poem,
Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2022
I really enjoyed this poem, all the answers there in the woods. I think we have the same notion of a god. Beautifully done.
Read full commentPosted in Looking For God In The Woods
I enjoyed this poetic take on
Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022
I enjoyed this poetic take on a creepy tale, especially how you set the scene in the woods and then take the reader through the story until its brutal ending and the childrens escape. I love the Pied Piper verses but it's rather long. This is...
Read full commentPosted in Into the Woods (Hansel and Gretel)
Anemone, what a beautiful
Posted on Sun, 27 Mar 2022
Anemone, what a beautiful name for a fairy. I can just picture the twins, Alvar and Almalric playfighting and flying around the forest. I must say, I really envy their lifesyle, especially at the moment.
Read full commentPosted in Journey Into Fairy Woodland Part Two
I love this. The picture you
Posted on Sun, 27 Mar 2022
I love this. The picture you've painted is beautiful and pure escapism. Yes I do believe. I was once lucky enough to see a tiny tiny man, not a fairy, well not winged anyway. I was a small child but I know what I saw. I've written about it on...
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