Jane Hyphen
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Parcel for you.. Part 25
‘Oh, we might have to try and scrub that off,’ ‘Why Mum? It suits him, don’t you think it suits him?’ Vanessa stared at her daughter, she was always...
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Ratface
It had turned out to be a beautiful sunny afternoon, a bit windy but the wind was warmer, coming from the South now, blowing a constant stream of...
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Have you ever had a pair of pants?
Have you ever had a pair of pants? Underpants that is A pair that don’t wear out at all But keep their youthful looks, endure For ten or fifteen...
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Parcel for you...Part 24
Vanessa passed a long, uncomfortable night. She couldn’t escape the sounds of her daughter, rifling through bags, stomping to the bathroom and back...
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In This Garden
In this garden they hid the truth. A lie behind the tulips, their dirty secrets buried beneath truer dirt than theirs. How they piled up the earth,...
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I enjoyed the way you
Posted on Sun, 28 Apr 2024
I enjoyed the way you describe the branches as outstretched and welcoming of all. A tree holds no prejudice and they're such generous spirits but beautiful too, what more could you ask? We are planning to have a lovely mature cedar removed...
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All this technology which is
Posted on Thu, 02 May 2024
All this technology which is supposed to make life easy is leaving us incredibly vulnerable. There's something comforting about vinyl, you can hold it like a photograph and money too. The replacement of the physical with the virtual makes us feel...
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This is lovely, Rhiannon.
Posted on Tue, 30 Apr 2024
This is lovely, Rhiannon. They do like to put themselves forward as volunteers in the garden and with endless colour combinations and slight variations in shape, to charm not chime. Even the unopened buds are so pretty.
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Hi lenchenelf, thank you for
Posted on Wed, 17 Apr 2024
Hi lenchenelf, thank you for your comment. I agree, the Collieries fit very well with the theme of the poem. I can't imagine how much toil, human endurance, pain and suffering went into those mines and how rich it made just a few. It set the...
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Hi Jenny, of course I'm not
Posted on Wed, 17 Apr 2024
Hi Jenny, of course I'm not offended. Poetry should always be open to interpretation I think. I'm not sure exactly what the secret is myself but I felt it in the plants and flowers, they whispered to me, not in any language I could fully...
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This is delightful, Jenny. I
Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2024
This is delightful, Jenny. I love mice, I actually saw one today, scurrying in a polytunnel., they do have important business to do. Segments of sun, yes, I want a whole orange sun for the whole day.
Read full commentPosted in Wild Side Of April
Thank you for your great
Posted on Sat, 13 Apr 2024
Thank you for your great comment, Di. Annie is one of those obliviously selfish people who look great on paper but in real life, leaves a trail of frayed nerves behind, especially the nervous system of their nearest and dearest. Spencer doesn't...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for you...Part 23
Wow, that was like riding
Posted on Fri, 15 Mar 2024
Wow, that was like riding some rhyming river rapids, twists and turns, dunked then re-surfaced but fast flowing, dangerous in places. I agree with others, this should be performed because the little man who performs it inside my head doesn't do...
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Love this, Jenny. It's like a
Posted on Sat, 30 Mar 2024
Love this, Jenny. It's like a massage. The drums played along with the words and those images from the natural world. It just works really well.
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Thank you for the cherries
Posted on Thu, 28 Mar 2024
Thank you for the cherries and your comment, Insert. Ha ha, maybe I can introduce Uncle Clive to Spencer..
Read full commentPosted in Erazofuge
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