Jane Hyphen
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Parcel for you...Part 22
The air in the car was filled with the familiar scent of Annie, a stuffy mix of patchouli and clothing which had been put away slightly damp. Despite...
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Too Many Tabs Open
I’ve got too many tabs open in my head. Even at night I don’t close them just in case they disappear forever. A classmate I admired, the name of a...
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Sparkly Little Paula
I wrote this for International Women's Day but as often, I'm too late for the IP. It's based on a true story of my school friend, Paula Dale.
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Parcel for you...Part 21
Annie was as much part of the modern world as Spencer, in that she was unsentimental about people’s weaknesses, unsympathetic to the experiences...
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Land of Make Believe
Being human, what pain, what peril! I can probably count on one and a half hands the times I’ve felt truly happy, at least as an adult, and they...
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Hi Paul. Some people are born
Posted on Wed, 20 Mar 2024
Hi Paul. Some people are born terrifying and they simply hone this gift as they grow up. Vanessa doesn't stand a chance especially now that the daughter is travelling and has the worldly upper hand. Thank you for reading.
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There is something divine and
Posted on Mon, 18 Mar 2024
There is something divine and otherworldly about Miss Russell that comes through in your words and somehow fits with the clean yellow daffodils of spring and perhaps death itself. I agree with Insert, this is on a higher plane.
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There is something divine and
Posted on Mon, 18 Mar 2024
There is something divine and otherworldly about Miss Russell that comes through in your words and somehow fits with the clean yellow daffodils of spring and perhaps death itself. I agree with Insert, this is on another level of perfection.
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I'd love to know more about
Posted on Tue, 19 Mar 2024
I'd love to know more about Rose. People who go rogue in the workplace are always a talking point even though we never speak of Rose.
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Thank you Insert. I suppose
Posted on Mon, 11 Mar 2024
Thank you Insert. I suppose technically, anyone who has been married before is recycled. I think Annie will be laying it on thick....
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Thank you lenchenelf I could
Posted on Mon, 11 Mar 2024
Thank you lenchenelf
I could picture the armpit hair in my mind's eye but...
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An abundant poem Jenny.
Posted on Mon, 11 Mar 2024
An abundant poem Jenny. Nothing can hold nature back, especially at this time of year, the sense of expectancy is everywhere, bursting buds and busy birds. Very apt for mother's day weekend.
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You create a very believable
Posted on Mon, 11 Mar 2024
You create a very believable character, the owls, the milky coffee and routines. I could have been Heather but I'm glad I'm not. A bit of chaos is like a safety blanket. I wonder what she's been up to?
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How unsettling, an innocent
Posted on Fri, 08 Mar 2024
How unsettling, an innocent trip to the pub and so many question marks. 'just looking for a man', made me laugh. I really felt as if I was back in York while reading this, you captured the magic of the place, the anceint buildings, cosy but...
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York is ghost heavy isn't it,
Posted on Wed, 06 Mar 2024
York is ghost heavy isn't it, you can almost feel them brush against you as you walk around the city. The cryptic message, can it really be from the blonde shopaholic wife? I think I've said this before but your writing has a real unmistakable...
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