Jane Hyphen
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Sparkly Little Paula
I wrote this for International Women's Day but as often, I'm too late for the IP. It's based on a true story of my school friend, Paula Dale.
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Parcel for you...Part 21
Annie was as much part of the modern world as Spencer, in that she was unsentimental about people’s weaknesses, unsympathetic to the experiences...
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Land of Make Believe
Being human, what pain, what peril! I can probably count on one and a half hands the times I’ve felt truly happy, at least as an adult, and they...
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Parcel for you...part 20
There was a headline, just a small one, alongside the main headline which was about the phasing out of car ownership. In the news sites, on Facebook...
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Parcel for you...Part 19
He heard some sort of meaningless laughter. Vanessa was sputtering like a very underpowered engine, emitting nervous breathy giggles in sporadic...
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This is very dark, lots of
Posted on Sun, 24 Mar 2024
This is very dark, lots of elements drawn together, colourful and restrained. It's got a lot of class.
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Really enjoyed. Boredom
Posted on Thu, 21 Mar 2024
Really enjoyed. Boredom broken by something she maybe shouldn't have been doing but the alternative was more stifling boredom and resentment. I love the way the spa showed her the way out and into something new. Life is too short after all.
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Creative flow accompanied by
Posted on Thu, 21 Mar 2024
Creative flow accompanied by drowsiness and your ideas fold away into layers of dream clouds. Bizarrely I sometimes have amazing songs playing in my dreams but I don't write music and have no way of recording them, I don't really know where they...
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Magical I agree and fitting
Posted on Wed, 20 Mar 2024
Magical I agree and fitting to its land of origin. I would love to visit, the gardens alone look wonderful. The idea of a Moon Maiden is more inspiring than the man on the moon or the idea of it being made of cheese.....
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Hi Paul. Some people are born
Posted on Wed, 20 Mar 2024
Hi Paul. Some people are born terrifying and they simply hone this gift as they grow up. Vanessa doesn't stand a chance especially now that the daughter is travelling and has the worldly upper hand. Thank you for reading.
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There is something divine and
Posted on Mon, 18 Mar 2024
There is something divine and otherworldly about Miss Russell that comes through in your words and somehow fits with the clean yellow daffodils of spring and perhaps death itself. I agree with Insert, this is on a higher plane.
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There is something divine and
Posted on Mon, 18 Mar 2024
There is something divine and otherworldly about Miss Russell that comes through in your words and somehow fits with the clean yellow daffodils of spring and perhaps death itself. I agree with Insert, this is on another level of perfection.
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I'd love to know more about
Posted on Tue, 19 Mar 2024
I'd love to know more about Rose. People who go rogue in the workplace are always a talking point even though we never speak of Rose.
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Thank you Insert. I suppose
Posted on Mon, 11 Mar 2024
Thank you Insert. I suppose technically, anyone who has been married before is recycled. I think Annie will be laying it on thick....
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Thank you lenchenelf I could
Posted on Mon, 11 Mar 2024
Thank you lenchenelf
I could picture the armpit hair in my mind's eye but...
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