Jane Hyphen
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S T Vasectomy Clinic - 18
Bizarrely he was back at The Driffold in what seemed like a fraction of the time it had taken on the outward journey to the paddock. He wiped the...
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S T Vasectomy Clinic - 17
Cece floated out of the room like an angry spirit. St John waited until she was halfway up the stairs before relaxing into a sigh then he went to the...
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S T Vasectomy Clinic - 16
St John Hughes He had become so used to the perennial pregnant pause in their relationship. It had started off that way, in the early years of their...
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S T Vasectomy Clinic - 15
He continued with his walk, through a small patch of beech woods with his head down and his hands in the pockets of his itchy tweed coat. It was mid...
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When I was a Blue Cowboy
I remember when I was a blue cowboy, waving red flags at the marshall. Assigned to shoot my pistol at aliens and strangers. I danced inside a...
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The fresh raw beauty can be
Posted on Thu, 17 Nov 2022
The fresh raw beauty can be an eye-watering burden, far more relaxing to fade into the seasons, especially with stars and moon to light the way. Magical poem Jenny.
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Hi Di, thanks for reading and
Posted on Wed, 16 Nov 2022
Hi Di, thanks for reading and commenting. It's hard to relate to those go-getter people, they do seem to achieve a lot but their achievements are perhaps 'microwaved'. Taking and giving time to appreciate is like living life in a slow cooker, I...
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There is a movement in the
Posted on Mon, 14 Nov 2022
There is a movement in the rhythm of piece, it captures the darting intelligence and movement of these creatures as well their accute sensitivity, both to their immediate surroundings and the long-term decline of their environment. It wouldn't be...
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You have captured their
Posted on Tue, 04 Oct 2022
You have captured their sweetness beautifully. The pink and white hues are just like marshmallows, and skittering describes their growing habit perfectly. To me, field bindweed is the ultimate 'flower fairies' flower and I always enjoy spotting...
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A beautiful and rich tribute
Posted on Sat, 01 Oct 2022
A beautiful and rich tribute to the first days of autumn. I really enjoyed the comparison with the sea, it's so clever, the rolling movement of the leaves and twigs in the wind is indeed like a shoal of fish. It's not quite fresh enough yet to...
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This is so alive and yet so
Posted on Thu, 22 Sep 2022
This is so alive and yet so dreamy, a lucid dream illustrated. It makes we want to get outside and experience autumn, although it still feels like summer outside in the sunshine.
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Hi Di_Hard, thank you for
Posted on Tue, 20 Sep 2022
Hi Di_Hard, thank you for commenting. It's fascinating that orcas are more emotionally complex than humans, the human narcissist in me wonders how this is possible. Everything is getting so weird, I agree but perhaps it was ever thus. What I...
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Reminds me of the sky I saw
Posted on Tue, 30 Aug 2022
Reminds me of the sky I saw earlier, low rolling clouds, dark against the blue. I get the sense of something foreboding, it could be too late for a cure but we can only be optimistic. I really enjoyed the last verse, 'or maybe I'm a feathered...
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The word wicked, derived from
Posted on Sun, 14 Aug 2022
The word wicked, derived from Wiccan. I can't see anything too wicked here from June, except sacrificing a chicken, something KFC do on a gargantuan scale daily.
I enjoyed reading Paul because it's well-written, very unique and I wanted...
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Excellent descriptions of the
Posted on Wed, 10 Aug 2022
Excellent descriptions of the tube, I can almost taste it. Looking forward to part two and what will become of June. Great Barr, I know it too well and Perry Barr too...
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