Jane Hyphen
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ST Vasectomy Clinic - 14
St John Hughes - 'I feel as if I'm in free fall.' Over a period of time, first becoming apparent with the advent of middle-age, although germinating...
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S T Vasectomy Clinic - 13
What do you buy the woman who has everything?” How, over time, those chippy comments had soured her relationship with her mother and indeed with all...
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S T Vasectomy Clinic - 12
He turned around and glanced at her very briefly. ‘No darling. You could go home if you wanted, you look so tired these days. Are you sure you’re...
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Largo and Seraphine
Largo’s birth occurred inside a sealed tunnel of cruciation. Like the storm that changed the landscape forever, bursting banks, forcing deep-rooted...
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S T Vasectomy Clinic - (11)
Alistair nodded. ‘Yes, she does get muddled sometimes.’ ‘Anyway, you made the right decision, we’re very professional here. So this is something you’...
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No-one get's double time
Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022
No-one gets double time anymore do they, more like half-time and make sure you get in done in half the time too.
This part of the story is creepy, please don't cut it short because creepy isn't easy to convey. There is something both...
Read full commentPosted in Ugly Puggly 42
I don't want them to get
Posted on Thu, 23 Jun 2022
I don't want them to get caught but what a burden this is to have a dead body to get rid of. I can see why Uggly Puggly is down, he's the only capable person, but capable of anything.
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This is very striking in its
Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2022
This is very striking in its truth and somewhat depressing too. There is something really peculiar going on whereby we are constantly being informed about the destruction of the environment while being encouraged to partake in the overconsumption...
Read full commentPosted in rage, rage against the Dying of your Rights
I found this to be really
Posted on Thu, 23 Jun 2022
I found this to be really quiet, soothing even. Those violets are truly sweet and you've honoured them beautifully here Jenny.
Read full commentPosted in Sweet Violet
I just read the three parts
Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022
I just read the three parts Paul and I I found this depressing tale to be quite believable in a Dr Who ish sort of way. I love the ending where you brought back the cob horses and it's written so well, I couldn't wait to read the next part. Not...
Read full commentPosted in The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 3 of 3)
That was a very interesting
Posted on Sun, 19 Jun 2022
That was a very interesting read. How lovely that your mum and auntie were so close and supported each other and were able to live out their retirement in a sunny place. Sorry for your loss. It was insightful to read about the all the stages of...
Read full commentPosted in The Journey. Part Two.
I really want to visit, haven
Posted on Thu, 16 Jun 2022
I really want to visit, haven't got around to it yet but it's one of my dream destinations. Love 'brawny landscape' and the way you describe the dawn and the ripples on the loch. Wish I was there now.
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Moving without being
Posted on Sun, 12 Jun 2022
Moving without being sentimental. Anniversaries are often poignant simply because the natural elements of the day bring it all back. I'm often unaware of the anniversary date of my father's death but there is something about the weather,...
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So pretty Jenny. Once you've
Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2022
So pretty Jenny. Once you've got them, you've got them. The seedpods are as lovely as the flowers and the feathery green foliage is light enough to complement the blooms 'purity laced'. They are a piece of art and always refreshing to see them...
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No but I'm going to start and
Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2022
No but I'm going to start and it will be full blown hysteria.
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