Jane Hyphen
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Legend of the Pah - 5 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
‘A parcel came for you,’ Lynne said dryly without looking up from her laptop. ‘Ah good, yes the new car battery for my old Audi.’ She glared at him...
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Pet Sounds
Do you ever hear somebody call your name in your sleep? ‘Catherine,’ I heard it loud and clear and it played back in my head as I awoke, in fact I...
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Legend of the Pah - 4 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
Alistair returned to the garage, he was feeling out of control, desperate and in this reckless condition, he got inside the Audi awkwardly, scraping...
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Legend of the Pah - 3 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
‘What word?’ ‘Doesn’t matter. Robert won’t want it. A Ford Crapri! That’s what we always called them. Honestly Alistair, you’re so deluded, he’s not...
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The Legend of the Pah - 2 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
A wormhole, that was how Alistair thought of his beloved Audi Quattro because that’s how it seemed, like a hidden corridor into another universe. He...
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Fulfilling to read, such a
Posted on Thu, 07 Apr 2022
Fulfilling to read, such a treat Di. I love 'bird song chips clear air', because they do, also love 'smelting life from light'. You've crammed so much quality in that I think I'll need to go back and re-read.
Read full commentPosted in April shower
I like the way you've woven
Posted on Wed, 06 Apr 2022
I like the way you've woven your adventures in the sensory experience; aromas, sounds, 'resembling a clutch of herbs'. Our brains seem to hang onto the sensory memories with astonishing accuracy, a song or the scent of a perfume acting as a time...
Read full commentPosted in Amongst The Memories
I really enjoyed this poem,
Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2022
I really enjoyed this poem, all the answers there in the woods. I think we have the same notion of a god. Beautifully done.
Read full commentPosted in Looking For God In The Woods
I enjoyed this poetic take on
Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022
I enjoyed this poetic take on a creepy tale, especially how you set the scene in the woods and then take the reader through the story until its brutal ending and the childrens escape. I love the Pied Piper verses but it's rather long. This is...
Read full commentPosted in Into the Woods (Hansel and Gretel)
Anemone, what a beautiful
Posted on Sun, 27 Mar 2022
Anemone, what a beautiful name for a fairy. I can just picture the twins, Alvar and Almalric playfighting and flying around the forest. I must say, I really envy their lifesyle, especially at the moment.
Read full commentPosted in Journey Into Fairy Woodland Part Two
I love this. The picture you
Posted on Sun, 27 Mar 2022
I love this. The picture you've painted is beautiful and pure escapism. Yes I do believe. I was once lucky enough to see a tiny tiny man, not a fairy, well not winged anyway. I was a small child but I know what I saw. I've written about it on...
Read full commentPosted in Journey Into Fairy Woodland Part One
Beautiful lines for the
Posted on Tue, 15 Mar 2022
Beautiful lines for the season Rhiannon. I haven't seen any celandines yet but lots of aconites out here with their little collars and of course all the primroses and daffodils blowing their trumpets, 'heralding the coming spring'. Perfect.
Read full commentPosted in Warm welcome
Love this, so unique. In the
Posted on Fri, 11 Mar 2022
Love this, so unique. In the end there is always a new way to create but I can't help thinking of that ear, all half-pecked and covered in dirt.
Read full commentPosted in The Poet's Ear
Thank you so much L for
Posted on Wed, 09 Mar 2022
Thank you so much L for reading and commenting. I had to go back (far back) in time to find this voice and remember how much I wanted to resist everything than comes with becoming a woman. It didn't help having male relatives who were...
Read full commentPosted in Nil by Mouth
Thanks for the cherries
Posted on Sun, 27 Feb 2022
Thanks for the cherries Insert. Yes, I think I might be open to that.
Read full commentPosted in Parables of Clippety (11) - The Quarry
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