Jane Hyphen

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ST Vasectomy Clinic - 14

St John Hughes - 'I feel as if I'm in free fall.' Over a period of time, first becoming apparent with the advent of middle-age, although germinating...
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Cherry

S T Vasectomy Clinic - 13

What do you buy the woman who has everything?” How, over time, those chippy comments had soured her relationship with her mother and indeed with all...
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S T Vasectomy Clinic - 12

He turned around and glanced at her very briefly. ‘No darling. You could go home if you wanted, you look so tired these days. Are you sure you’re...
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Largo and Seraphine

Largo’s birth occurred inside a sealed tunnel of cruciation. Like the storm that changed the landscape forever, bursting banks, forcing deep-rooted...
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S T Vasectomy Clinic - (11)

Alistair nodded. ‘Yes, she does get muddled sometimes.’ ‘Anyway, you made the right decision, we’re very professional here. So this is something you’...

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548 of my comments have received 580 Great Feedback votes

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Moving without being

Posted on Sun, 12 Jun 2022

Moving without being sentimental. Anniversaries are often poignant simply because the natural elements of the day bring it all back. I'm often unaware of the anniversary date of my father's death but there is something about the weather,...

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So pretty Jenny. Once you've

Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2022

So pretty Jenny. Once you've got them, you've got them. The seedpods are as lovely as the flowers and the feathery green foliage is light enough to complement the blooms 'purity laced'. They are a piece of art and always refreshing to see them...

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Posted in Love In The Mist

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No but I'm going to start and

Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2022

No but I'm going to start and it will be full blown hysteria.

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I've always that thought that

Posted on Tue, 07 Jun 2022

I've always that thought that the skeleton of a dead tree adds so much to the landscape and I like that you've paid tribute to it here with your wonderful Rhiannon. The contrast of the tree standing still among all the life and movement of the...

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Posted in Evening peace

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I love the element of

Posted on Thu, 02 Jun 2022

I love the element of folklore in this; nature intertwined with adventure, constant peril, all driven by the froces which spring from childhood experiences.  The name Elowen is so beautiful.

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Posted in Leaving The Nest

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I think that story about

Posted on Tue, 31 May 2022

I think that story about marriage was in the Daily Mail. All I can say is that I've been with my partner for over thrity years, we have two children, we're not married and our children have had a very stable family life, no splits or affairs,...

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You've made so many valid

Posted on Tue, 31 May 2022

You've made so many valid points here Di. Some are pushing nuclear energy as if it's a risk-free, magic bullet to the energy crisis.

Nuclear is not clean, the risks and long term effects are frightening. We all need to stop being so greedy...

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I like this poem, it speaks

Posted on Sun, 29 May 2022

I like this poem, it speaks of the coiled spring like energy that lives inside all horses, along with the need to be both loved and led. I particularly love the last line.

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Posted in Unreined

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Hi Jenny, they are like

Posted on Mon, 23 May 2022

Hi Jenny, they are like 'ghosts just passing by in silence'. They appear to inhabit another world, somewhere deep inside the night. I've noticed a lot of them around recently and if they're in the house, I go to great lengths to escort them out...

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Posted in Luna Moth

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That is really lovely lenchen

Posted on Fri, 20 May 2022

That is really lovely lenchen. I'd never heard it called Eve's Tears either. I love the name Eve, and Lilly of the Valley is a favourite flower and scent of mine so I will be calling it that name from now on. I have a tiny cluster of it from an...

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Posted in Eves' Tears

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