Jane Hyphen

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I have 399 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 889852 times and 509 of my stories have been cherry picked.
516 of my 2,780 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 546 votes

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Legend of the Pah - 5 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)

‘A parcel came for you,’ Lynne said dryly without looking up from her laptop. ‘Ah good, yes the new car battery for my old Audi.’ She glared at him...
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Pet Sounds

Do you ever hear somebody call your name in your sleep? ‘Catherine,’ I heard it loud and clear and it played back in my head as I awoke, in fact I...
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Legend of the Pah - 4 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)

Alistair returned to the garage, he was feeling out of control, desperate and in this reckless condition, he got inside the Audi awkwardly, scraping...
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Legend of the Pah - 3 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)

‘What word?’ ‘Doesn’t matter. Robert won’t want it. A Ford Crapri! That’s what we always called them. Honestly Alistair, you’re so deluded, he’s not...
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The Legend of the Pah - 2 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)

A wormhole, that was how Alistair thought of his beloved Audi Quattro because that’s how it seemed, like a hidden corridor into another universe. He...
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516 of my comments have received 546 Great Feedback votes

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Fulfilling to read, such a

Posted on Thu, 07 Apr 2022

Fulfilling to read, such a treat Di. I love 'bird song chips clear air', because they do, also love 'smelting life from light'. You've crammed so much quality in that I think I'll need to go back and re-read. 

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Posted in April shower

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I like the way you've woven

Posted on Wed, 06 Apr 2022

I like the way you've woven your adventures in the sensory experience; aromas, sounds, 'resembling a clutch of herbs'. Our brains seem to hang onto the sensory memories with astonishing accuracy, a song or the scent of a perfume acting as a time...

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Posted in Amongst The Memories

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I really enjoyed this poem,

Posted on Tue, 05 Apr 2022

I really enjoyed this poem, all the answers there in the woods. I think we have the same notion of a god. Beautifully done.

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Posted in Looking For God In The Woods

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I enjoyed this poetic take on

Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022

I enjoyed this poetic take on a creepy tale, especially how you set the scene in the woods and then take the reader through the story until its brutal ending and the childrens escape. I love the Pied Piper verses but it's rather long. This is...

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Posted in Into the Woods (Hansel and Gretel)

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Anemone, what a beautiful

Posted on Sun, 27 Mar 2022

Anemone, what a beautiful name for a fairy. I can just picture the twins, Alvar and Almalric playfighting and flying around the forest. I must say, I really envy their lifesyle, especially at the moment. 

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Posted in Journey Into Fairy Woodland Part Two

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I love this. The picture you

Posted on Sun, 27 Mar 2022

I love this. The picture you've painted is beautiful and pure escapism. Yes I do believe. I was once lucky enough to see a tiny tiny man, not a fairy, well not winged anyway. I was a small child but I know what I saw. I've written about it on...

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Posted in Journey Into Fairy Woodland Part One

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Beautiful lines for the

Posted on Tue, 15 Mar 2022

Beautiful lines for the season Rhiannon. I haven't seen any celandines yet but lots of aconites out here with their little collars and of course all the primroses and daffodils blowing their trumpets, 'heralding the coming spring'. Perfect.

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Posted in Warm welcome

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Love this, so unique. In the

Posted on Fri, 11 Mar 2022

Love this, so unique. In the end there is always a new way to create but I can't help thinking of that ear, all half-pecked and covered in dirt.

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Posted in The Poet's Ear

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Thank you so much L for

Posted on Wed, 09 Mar 2022

Thank you so much L for reading and commenting. I had to go back (far back) in time to find this voice and remember how much I wanted to resist everything than comes with becoming a woman. It didn't help having male relatives who were...

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Posted in Nil by Mouth

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Thanks for the cherries

Posted on Sun, 27 Feb 2022

Thanks for the cherries Insert. Yes, I think I might be open to that. smiley

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Posted in Parables of Clippety (11) - The Quarry

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