Jane Hyphen
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My stories
Pet Sounds
Do you ever hear somebody call your name in your sleep? ‘Catherine,’ I heard it loud and clear and it played back in my head as I awoke, in fact I...
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Legend of the Pah - 4 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
Alistair returned to the garage, he was feeling out of control, desperate and in this reckless condition, he got inside the Audi awkwardly, scraping...
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Legend of the Pah - 3 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
‘What word?’ ‘Doesn’t matter. Robert won’t want it. A Ford Crapri! That’s what we always called them. Honestly Alistair, you’re so deluded, he’s not...
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The Legend of the Pah - 2 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
A wormhole, that was how Alistair thought of his beloved Audi Quattro because that’s how it seemed, like a hidden corridor into another universe. He...
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The Legend of the Pah - 1 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
‘A vasectomy is the best gift a man can give to his wife…..Alistair, Alistair!’ ‘What?’ He said, without lifting his head. A spread of nails lay...
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Thanks for the cherries
Posted on Sun, 27 Feb 2022
Thanks for the cherries Insert. Yes, I think I might be open to that.
Read full commentPosted in Parables of Clippety (11) - The Quarry
This is sweet and sour. I
Posted on Sun, 27 Feb 2022
This is sweet and sour. I enjoyed the descriptions of Cornwall here, so well done, especially the Hottentot Fig, once you learn that plant name, you never forget it. The energy and fearlessness of youth quickly expires but it sounds like your...
Read full commentPosted in Brief Moments To Imagine
Wow, this is really sweet and
Posted on Wed, 23 Feb 2022
Wow, this is really sweet and touching. The lady in the photograph looks so happy. Music can be a medium for time travel. She must have so many wonderful memories.
Read full commentPosted in ‘Twinkle, twinkle … what?’@102
Thanks for the cherries
Posted on Tue, 22 Feb 2022
Thanks for the cherries Insert. Unfortunately, the dust went everywhere, into orrfices, penetrating mucous membranes and causing a distortion of the status quo.
Read full commentPosted in Parables of Clippety (7) - Sniffer Dogs
You've captured the violence
Posted on Mon, 21 Feb 2022
You've captured the violence of a storm, the cleansing effect and resulting sense of something changed, a new beginning, a metaphor for so much. I love 'winds whipping spume' and the solitary egret - creepy how they take off and silently fly.
Read full commentPosted in A Tempest Off Portishead
That brought back memories,
Posted on Thu, 10 Feb 2022
That brought back memories, my mum had that book, I remember looking through it, and I've got the Oxfam Vegetarian Cookbook. I enjoyed reading this. Rhea getting so much comfort from Ebay trawling and flicking through recipe books, maybe filling...
Read full commentPosted in The Cookbook
This is beautiful Di_Hard.
Posted on Sun, 06 Feb 2022
This is beautiful Di_Hard. The drama of these stormy February days together with quieter aspects of nature hiding in the woods, 'jade lichen, acid bright moss'. Somehow you've captured the time of year perfectly. Wonderful poem, loved reading it...
Read full commentPosted in February Rainbow
Brilliant rhythm. Poor girl,
Posted on Fri, 04 Feb 2022
Brilliant rhythm. Poor girl, why are some people's lives so wretched? 'A twenty two year old has been' is stirring. I enjoyed the short poignant lines and the rhyming. It's like a series of strikes and mirrors that poor young lady's childhood.
Read full commentPosted in Her Troubles
What a story and in it what
Posted on Sun, 30 Jan 2022
What a story and in it what lovely names and words. 'Legends expressed - myths reaching across time'. There is a beauty in the underworld, just as there is horror in nature. I love it when plants are linked to stories (& poems!). Some of...
Read full commentPosted in Poet's Narcissus
Blimey, I don't know whether
Posted on Mon, 31 Jan 2022
Blimey, I don't know whether to feel scared or embrace the weirdness and re-evaluate my working arrangements.
Read full commentPosted in The Candidate
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