Jane Hyphen
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Mole
I heard his voice in the rushing water. Graham and I used to sing a song together. I can’t remember how it started but this was the late eighties and...
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If I can just get through the day
If I can just get through the day Knowing I can return to the vessel Where oblivion is docked And I can retreat into silent, Solitary tunnels, my...
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S T Vasectomy Clinic - 10
Cece checked the time and rolled her eyes, it was almost time to return to work. The large bedroom window overlooked their back garden and she paused...
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S T Vasectomy Clinic - 9
Wednesday was a late night opening at the clinic, for professionals who were too important to take time out from their working day. Cece usually...
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Legend of the Pah - 8 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
Cece Hughes Cece Hughes was what you might refer to as well preserved. At a distance she could have passed for somebody half her age, even close up...
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I love the element of
Posted on Thu, 02 Jun 2022
I love the element of folklore in this; nature intertwined with adventure, constant peril, all driven by the froces which spring from childhood experiences. The name Elowen is so beautiful.
Read full commentPosted in Leaving The Nest
I think that story about
Posted on Tue, 31 May 2022
I think that story about marriage was in the Daily Mail. All I can say is that I've been with my partner for over thrity years, we have two children, we're not married and our children have had a very stable family life, no splits or affairs,...
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You've made so many valid
Posted on Tue, 31 May 2022
You've made so many valid points here Di. Some are pushing nuclear energy as if it's a risk-free, magic bullet to the energy crisis.
Nuclear is not clean, the risks and long term effects are frightening. We all need to stop being so greedy...
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I like this poem, it speaks
Posted on Sun, 29 May 2022
I like this poem, it speaks of the coiled spring like energy that lives inside all horses, along with the need to be both loved and led. I particularly love the last line.
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Hi Jenny, they are like
Posted on Mon, 23 May 2022
Hi Jenny, they are like 'ghosts just passing by in silence'. They appear to inhabit another world, somewhere deep inside the night. I've noticed a lot of them around recently and if they're in the house, I go to great lengths to escort them out...
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That is really lovely lenchen
Posted on Fri, 20 May 2022
That is really lovely lenchen. I'd never heard it called Eve's Tears either. I love the name Eve, and Lilly of the Valley is a favourite flower and scent of mine so I will be calling it that name from now on. I have a tiny cluster of it from an...
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One of my favourite tales
Posted on Sat, 14 May 2022
One of my favourite tales because everything about it is fascinating and mostly very plausible. I like your modern take and anything which keeps this story alive. You have succeded in maintaining the sinisterness of the original.
Read full commentPosted in An Eternal Debt (The Pied Piper of Hamlin)
This really got into my head
Posted on Tue, 17 May 2022
This really got into my head Rhiannon. As I read, I could really imagine lying there, confined but still living through all the sounds from the open window. Reminded me of being a small child and sent to bed in summer when I wasn't at all sleepy...
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Love this, surreal and dreamy
Posted on Tue, 10 May 2022
Love this, surreal and dreamy. Really enjoyed, thank you for sharing.
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A clever and interesting poem
Posted on Fri, 06 May 2022
A clever and interesting poem Di. There's so many directions you can go in with a chrysalis, it's such a shocking peice of engineering and a shocking process for the creature involved but somehow it survives all that change. I enjoyed the uplift...
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