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StoryI Saw You Jane Hyphen415 hours 19 sec ago
StoryFebruary onemorething151 week 3 days ago
StoryJar of Lights Jane Hyphen81 week 4 days ago
StoryPresent Di_Hard201 week 4 days ago
StoryGordon Ramsay, A Lesson In Life. Part One. Grace7741 week 4 days ago
StoryEel onemorething92 weeks 1 day ago
StoryNearly Awake skinner_jennifer232 weeks 3 days ago
StoryGrey-Day rambling Rhiannonw183 weeks 1 day ago
Blog entryYou Never Know Who's Reading! Insertponceyfre...93 weeks 4 days ago
StoryBe Leave Di_Hard151 month 1 week ago
StoryThe emergency bassoonist lavadis61 month 3 weeks ago
StoryA Good Run agnosticnun52 months 6 days ago
StoryYoung at heart monodemo72 months 1 week ago
StoryChill Rhiannonw92 months 1 week ago
StoryThe Worst Jane Hyphen102 months 1 week ago
StoryAngel 81 (finding friends) celticman52 months 1 week ago
StoryAwoke, then awaking Rhiannonw52 months 1 week ago
Storyuntravelling path Di_Hard143 months 3 days ago
StorySnowdrops Rhiannonw73 months 6 days ago
StoryBlue seashore383 months 2 weeks ago
StoryPuddle of land celticman183 months 2 weeks ago
StoryPan Out Mark Burrow103 months 3 weeks ago
StoryIt feels like winter here Jane Hyphen84 months 2 days ago
StoryMy Cat Never Sang for My Father hudsonmoon54 months 2 days ago
StoryAnother Cock-Eyed Christmas hudsonmoon144 months 2 days ago

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I Saw You

I saw you And the years had washed you pale A stranger standing Staring at the layered air Nothing in your eyes But spirits still confide Stirring...
Cherry

Jar of Lights

Holding my jar of lights Closeted rays of hope Thaw those enduring walls of grey And frigid bleak indifference One by one I gathered Over time, in...
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The Worst

The worst. You left your entrails in a glass box. Sealed forever with a deadlock. Thick blood trails every pane. Our darkest hours to temper and...
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Cherry

It feels like winter here

It feels like winter here The bone frames of you and me Clutching our own hands Blue flesh scars exposed as Frost forms on each word Light casts us...
Cherry

Strange Light

Strange light in the sky And in your eyes Listen…. Don’t stay too long In this strange place Where only shadows Show themselves To draw you in...

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128 of my comments have received 136 Great Feedback votes

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I really enjoyed reading this

Posted on Wed, 26 Sep 2018

I really enjoyed reading this, it brought to life a typical suprmarket shift complete with misery and the type of characters which seem to crop up in most workplaces. It recall my own stint in 'provisions', I got a verbal warning for failing to...

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Posted in Rolling in the Aisles

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Enjoyed this. The idea of

Posted on Thu, 30 Jan 2020

Enjoyed this. The idea of getting dirty among nature while somehow getting your mind cleaned all at the same time. I would love a glimpse of blue sky against the bare bones of trees.

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Posted in Grey-Day rambling

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Hi Rhiannon, these nature

Posted on Wed, 16 Oct 2019

Hi Rhiannon, these nature poems you write are so professional now and this is no exception. There's so much texture and the way you extend beyond the visual confines of the scene, 'enjoying the expanse as if they could fly' because that's how it...

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Posted in The Long Mynd, Shropshire (12/10/19)

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What a descriptive snap shot

Posted on Tue, 07 May 2019

What a descriptive snap shot of the sea and its natural surroundings. I love the way you've included sound in this, the gentle booming, also the scent - of seaweed and of course the coastal flowers so beautiful at this time of year. 

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Posted in Arrival – Evening Wander

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I have teens and you've

Posted on Sat, 01 Dec 2018

I have teens and you've articulated the current situation so well. There's a huge problem with drugs too, they're dirt cheap and used in the same way we used alcohol. The pressures, choices, the constant scrutiny, exposure to everything too...

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Posted in When Death Comes Too Soon

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I really enjoy these nature

Posted on Fri, 23 Nov 2018

I really enjoy these nature poems Rhiannon, partly because they focus on our native flora and fauna. In urban areas we are often surrounded by plants from all over the world which look pretty of course but lack the subtle balance of nature which...

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Posted in Ross on Wye and Chase Wood 15/11/18

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I am 41 and I'm crying

Posted on Sun, 09 Aug 2015

I am 41 and I'm crying because I can't concentrate enough to write and this is really good and catchy and true. If only there were no more reasons to cry after seventeen!

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Posted in Problems

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Light is an infinite resource

Posted on Wed, 12 Feb 2020

Light is an infinite resource, if only everyone could know that. Thanks celtic - hope you're well 

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Posted in Jar of Lights

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This is very fine, especially

Posted on Tue, 04 Feb 2020

This is very fine, especially the first verse, it made my mouth water. Even pavement cracks hold possibilities, I love. It's a shame people don't spend much time outside when it's cold in February because there is so much happening.

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Posted in Present

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Really lovely and I like that

Posted on Tue, 11 Feb 2020

Really lovely and I like that you've included the conflicted in- betweeness of February and how it can pull us in either direction in terms of climate. Snowdrops are a wonder. I love 'threaded through the green needle of a stem'

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Posted in February

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