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Planet Secret Santa
‘Well I know who this is from because it’s not wrapped up!’ ‘Oh, looks posh,’ said Mercury, ‘what exactly is that?’ ‘It’s face powder,’ said Mars. ‘...
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Parcel for you - Part 44
Recently Vanessa had grown a little bit tired of her old friend Pat, mostly due to her relationship with the very annoying Stu. She’d fallen in with...
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Parcel for You - Part 43
The first thing Vanessa did after they’d left was chuck her new book into the hidden storage area inside the pouffe and shut the lid with a bang. Out...
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Parcel for you - Part 42
Vanessa followed her husband into the kitchen and pushed the door closed but not clicked. ‘Hey, stop being so bloody helpful,’ she whispered. Spencer...
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The Road To Ponkerton Village - Part 2
‘Come on Bob, get a bloody grip!’ he muttered, his face expressing both desperation and rage as he looked up towards the pitted fabric ceiling of his...
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Alive n 25, Kris that is a
Posted on Thu, 30 Jan 2025
Alive n 25, Kris that is a good place to be and keeping fit too. That was some achievement keeping that going and with well-crafted lyrics and tempo that plays in your head as you read. Very well done. It would be great to hear you perform it....
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A beautiful tribute to these
Posted on Wed, 29 Jan 2025
A beautiful tribute to these darling little flowers. I am currently planting little colonies of them in my garden. I don't think I can put into words how much I love snowdrops but you've done a lovely job here, Rhiannon.
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There's an undercurrent here,
Posted on Sun, 26 Jan 2025
There's an undercurrent here, it's like a game of chess, grievances simmering, doubts niggling. I was going to say, it's like a soap opera but the characters have more class, they're cultured. I think Perfidia might regret the oblivion tomorrow...
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Thank you, Di, it's so
Posted on Fri, 24 Jan 2025
Thank you, Di, it's so encouraging to know that you're still enjoying it. I think you're right that Vanessa and Spencer sort of rescue each other on a regular basis. Some people reckon the whales and dolphins are more intelligent than us, they've...
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A constellation of stories
Posted on Fri, 24 Jan 2025
A constellation of stories
orbiting a liminal univers
of infinate imagination
Connection is so much more than physical and everything in nature has a memory in this magical poem.
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This is so beautiful. I felt
Posted on Tue, 21 Jan 2025
This is so beautiful. I felt as if I was the dryad reading this words, perfectly arranged to reflect the forest.
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I wonder if you have to be a
Posted on Fri, 17 Jan 2025
I wonder if you have to be a certain type to be a guide on those ghostly walks or perhaps you become a little bit haunted yourself. The Grim Reaper reminded me a bit of those extra people on the ghost train who poke you or pull your hair. You've...
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Magic and animals with
Posted on Sat, 11 Jan 2025
Magic and animals with beautiful names and all the accompanying complex dramas. Animal relationships are complicated just like us humans, certainly the one's who I've had the pleasure of living with. The way you bring it all to life with dialogue...
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I am so sorry to read this,
Posted on Sat, 11 Jan 2025
I am so sorry to read this, Penny. It was very recently you wrote about the shocking diagnosis and how daunted you were feeling. He looks so lovely in the photograph.
I hope writing can help you to process the shock and give you something...
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That was a fascinating read,
Posted on Fri, 10 Jan 2025
That was a fascinating read, Maxine, all about your brother's problems and how you dealt with them with little support. I hope you found peace in the end knowing you did all you could for him.
The thing with the DVLA and the bailiffs...
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