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This Sad Blister
This sad blister sits upon the most sensitive part of myself. During the astral detachments of sleep, I cruelly forget and how my blister grows; a...
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The Vale - Part One (b)
It’s always the same at this time, late afternoon, early evening. The dropping sun, the hunched commuters scurrying home to the safety of their...
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The Vale - Part One (a)
‘I tell you what, this stereo is quality. The base on this tune, man, the whole damn motor’s banging!’ Dan yelled, nodding his head to the beat,...
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The Vale - Part Two
Wendy Hooper from IT looks like ET, it’s funny but I’ve never thought of it before. I’ve known her for years but this has only just occurred to me...
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The Crinkler
‘Did you hear that?’ Bryce and Lora lay on their backs in the darkness of their bedroom, for unknown reasons their eyes were wide open as they...
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That sounds like a lot of
Posted on Sun, 26 Oct 2025
That sounds like a lot of work, chaos and also love. So many animals needing homes now because vets bills are spiralling and people have no spare income. I'm the proud owner of two huge indoor cats now and they are my princes.
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Another fabulous and
Posted on Tue, 21 Oct 2025
Another fabulous and mysterious story, Paul. I know I've said this before but you definitely have your own style of writing. I experienced a sense of the loneliness of the central character and some glimmer of hope that he was reconnecting with...
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Thnank you Insert. Ha ha, I
Posted on Thu, 16 Oct 2025
Thnank you Insert. Ha ha, I indulged in a medlar, ew, the fruit is a metaphor for some things. And many thanks for the cherries.
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You drew so much out of that
Posted on Mon, 06 Oct 2025
You drew so much out of that orange and then distilled it into the most captivating bullet points. I will need to read this over again. It's wonderful.
Read full commentPosted in Please Follow My Instructions ( For This You Will Need a Blood Orange)
Hi Jenny, I do remember some
Posted on Thu, 02 Oct 2025
Hi Jenny, I do remember some of these details from your previous writings and how you and your baby rode the storm and lived in survival mode for a few years. It's incredible what we can endure although I found being a new mum very anxiety...
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Ha ha. Tom Thumb is much more
Posted on Sat, 27 Sep 2025
Ha ha. Tom Thumb is much more than the size of his parts. A man shouldn't be judged by his height or the size of any of his key features, it's out of his control and not fair game.
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The reflective quality of
Posted on Thu, 25 Sep 2025
The reflective quality of those hay bales shimmmering in the sun captures the essence of fading summer. I was driving around Oxfordshire five or six weeks ago and it was like being in Italy, the dry fields dotted with flaxen hay bales. I love, '...
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Hi Di. Bleak is the perfect
Posted on Fri, 26 Sep 2025
Hi Di. Bleak is the perfect word for it. I wonder if it really will allow us to understand animals though, we don't even understand other humans much of the time even when we're speaking the same language. I don't want to live in a virtual world...
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Thank you. The dog must
Posted on Tue, 16 Sep 2025
Thank you. The dog must always be okay in fiction and even in a true story like this one.
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Thanks you Insert. I don't
Posted on Sun, 14 Sep 2025
Thanks you Insert. I don't know where to goo with it..
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