The young man left his home with only the urge to fall off the end of the earth. Dressed as he was in the worn fibres of his brittle sleeps where he...
Thank you, Di and thanks for the cherries. Grief is different with an animal, it's more instantly accessible and I think it taps into unresolved grief from the past.
There are so many details here, a clear picture building and so atmospheric as others have said. That lonely feeling you experience as a child when you're scared but you know your parents will dismiss your fears. And the woods - I could feel the...
I like how, instead of feeling sad and mourning the loss of physical strength, you have simply transferred your time to something else, equally pleasurable and creative. A garden can be enjoyed simply by passively being in it or even seeing it...
This put a smile on my face, despite the hardships and annoyances you seem to be enduring. I enjoyed the poem and the animal details alongside local highlights. We also have a few vacuum cleaners, I won't say how many, some are very old but I...
I love this. A hard working capable employee. Your brain requires a different sort of discipline to cope with mundane tasks and do them well, day after day. It's sort of meditation. Remy growing his hair is sort of iconic, he keeps the rest of...
Agree with you, UK self-checkouts often have all the staff who formerly manned the now redundant tills standing around like the gestapo watching you so you don't nick anything. The worst thing is when they emit that dull impatient bleep because...
Thank you Drew for you
Posted on Fri, 04 Jul 2025
Thank you Drew for you attention to detail. You're right he would have noticed the food smell. I will go through it again. I appreciate your feedback.
Read full commentPosted in The Vale - Part 1 (c)
Thank you Di, he feels like
Posted on Fri, 04 Jul 2025
Thank you Di, he feels like an imposter in his life. Lots of elements together, good to know it still made sense to you, the reader.
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Thank you, Di and thanks for
Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2025
Thank you, Di and thanks for the cherries. Grief is different with an animal, it's more instantly accessible and I think it taps into unresolved grief from the past.
Read full commentPosted in This Sad Blister
There are so many details
Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2025
There are so many details here, a clear picture building and so atmospheric as others have said. That lonely feeling you experience as a child when you're scared but you know your parents will dismiss your fears. And the woods - I could feel the...
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (1)
I like how, instead of
Posted on Tue, 17 Jun 2025
I like how, instead of feeling sad and mourning the loss of physical strength, you have simply transferred your time to something else, equally pleasurable and creative. A garden can be enjoyed simply by passively being in it or even seeing it...
Read full commentPosted in When Time Has Elapsed
This put a smile on my face,
Posted on Wed, 11 Jun 2025
This put a smile on my face, despite the hardships and annoyances you seem to be enduring. I enjoyed the poem and the animal details alongside local highlights. We also have a few vacuum cleaners, I won't say how many, some are very old but I...
Read full commentPosted in Aura Urziceanu’s Lullaby Effect
Such a perfectly adapted
Posted on Thu, 12 Jun 2025
Such a perfectly adapted creature, fascinating. The perfection of our natural world makes you wonder about lots of things.
Read full commentPosted in Designed to catch water
I love this. A hard working
Posted on Sat, 07 Jun 2025
I love this. A hard working capable employee. Your brain requires a different sort of discipline to cope with mundane tasks and do them well, day after day. It's sort of meditation. Remy growing his hair is sort of iconic, he keeps the rest of...
Read full commentPosted in Who do people say I am?
Thank you, Insert. This is
Posted on Fri, 06 Jun 2025
Thank you, Insert. This is something I started a few years back and I just unearthed it. Chapter 1 is really sweary...
Read full commentPosted in The Vale - Part Two
Agree with you, UK self
Posted on Fri, 06 Jun 2025
Agree with you, UK self-checkouts often have all the staff who formerly manned the now redundant tills standing around like the gestapo watching you so you don't nick anything. The worst thing is when they emit that dull impatient bleep because...
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