Jane Hyphen

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I have 411 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 995122 times and 526 of my stories have been cherry picked.
542 of my 2,862 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 574 votes

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Parables of Clippety (13) - Suck My Blood

They struggled to keep up with him in their high heels and occasionally water splashed around their ankles but the idea of being left alone down...
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Parables of Clippety (12) - The Keys To The City

There was a moment of silence while Jurgen continued to lean back with his closed eyes, breathing slowly, his chest going up and down but as soon as...
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Parables of Clippety (11) - The Quarry

‘Okay, okay great! I’ll go and fetch it.’ Clare left the medical room with her heart racing. She was so worried that something would stand in her way...
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Parables of Clippety (10) - The Medical Room

Marni looked as if she were about to cry, she gathered up her handbag and stood up just as another Mexican wave swept across the stadium. She’d only...
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Parables of Clippety (9) - The Big Match

They linked arms and walked through the turnstiles. The crowd was already singing, the din of thousands of voices bouncing around inside the stadium...
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542 of my comments have received 574 Great Feedback votes

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Love this. The deserted beach

Posted on Fri, 17 Dec 2021

Love this. The deserted beach, the slow rythm of the waves and the rythm of something held, pushing to get out. Soft but unforgiving. 

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Posted in Day before a birthday

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Love this tribute to our

Posted on Mon, 13 Dec 2021

Love this tribute to our winter bird. I read recently that they follow us around because they think we're wild pigs but that could just be me since I'm always disturbing the ground, although not with my snout. Their bold nature and tenacity...

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Posted in Robin At Winter Solstice

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'Twisty seclusion' I really

Posted on Sat, 04 Dec 2021

'Twisty seclusion' I really enjoyed your poem and the accompanying photograph. It looks like a lovely spot for tapping into 'unrestrained pulsing earth's wonder'. I wish I had a bit more space for rewilding, it makes such a difference and it...

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Posted in Nature's Hideaway

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Ah, that's my daughter's

Posted on Fri, 03 Dec 2021

Ah, that's my daughter's middle name and one of my favourite trees. I think you've paid a fine tribute to this beautiful tree, covering all of it's characteristics. I love to watch the blackbirds downing the berries in one. 'Solitary wanderers',...

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Posted in Rowan

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Thank you Di, I was worried

Posted on Sun, 28 Nov 2021

Thank you Di, I was worried it might be a bit trippy but I think we all need a trip as November comes to a close. Birds definitely form friendships and there are so many cross species friendships in the animal world. I say this looking at my...

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Posted in Parrot Rescue

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It's so clever. A pendulous

Posted on Mon, 29 Nov 2021

It's so clever. A pendulous poem, I love itsmiley

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Posted in Welig for Paul (marandina)

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One of those pieces which had

Posted on Sat, 27 Nov 2021

One of those pieces which had the rare effect of making me feel as if I was being squeezed while reading but in a good way. It's divine.

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Posted in Yew

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This reminds me of a rich,

Posted on Wed, 24 Nov 2021

This reminds me of a rich, still life oil painting, each time you look at it, you see something different. A beautifully verdant, quiet journey into a dream.

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Posted in A Secret Garden

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Brilliant ending. I hadn't

Posted on Tue, 16 Nov 2021

Brilliant ending. I hadn't heard the word ecocide before. It feels hopeless but as Di-Hard said, that is the worst, most defeatist way to address it. My kids are adults now, I worry for their kids. People come into the garden centre where I work...

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Posted in ECOCIDE

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I felt this lowering my blood

Posted on Thu, 18 Nov 2021

I felt this lowering my blood pressure. Your poem has class, grace and an element of nocturnal escapism. I wish I had the stamina to stay awake all night and be a part of this magic world.

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Posted in The Solitude of Sleep

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