Jane Hyphen

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She said her name was Winter

After the party, I marked her Just as the colours drained In her gelid crystal necklace Blowing out the lights And hushing the wild creatures She was...
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He's Left These Woods

He’s left these woods, Mr Pip slipped quietly through a gap. A quick look back then gone between the trees. Fifteen years ago I held him on my lap as...
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Winter Light

White bright winter light In blink flickers that burn We lie low, hemmed days Patient as winter flowers Suspended for the long game A solitary bee,...
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Life is for the Go Getters

Life is for the go getters. Pause and watch, open-mouthed as they gulp the here and now. Observe through a long lens, how they stuff themselves, like...
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They've Closed the Road

Have you heard, they’ve closed the road. Black ice reflections deep, like a mirror from the archives. We don’t want to see ourselves like that. There...
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584 of my comments have received 630 Great Feedback votes

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I really enjoyed reading

Posted on Sat, 28 Jan 2023

I really enjoyed reading about your cats and your shopping too. Clarence sounds wonderful. I lost one of mine to the road last year, on the very last of the superhot days and it honestly broke my heart. I've still got her brother, when he's not...

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Posted in The Mind Of A Cat.

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Ha, ha, I can just see him in

Posted on Sun, 15 Jan 2023

Ha, ha, I can just see him in that curry house. I used to quite like him but it got boring. I don't think he's quite as angry as Jordan Peterson though.

A baptism of Biryani? Darwinian Dhansak must be his favourite. 

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Posted in Richard Dawkins in the curry house (Oxford)

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This is my current dog

Posted on Tue, 03 Jan 2023

This is my current dog walking captured beautifully. Everything is so thoroughly dripping, squelchy. 'Seep into musty earth'. Your words remind me that these sights and sounds are indeed nourishing, I'm inclined to moan about what feels like ...

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Posted in Walking In January

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Thank you Drew. He was such a

Posted on Tue, 03 Jan 2023

Thank you Drew. He was such a beautiful boy. I dreamt about him last night, just a mundane dream but he is very much alive in my subconscious.

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Posted in He's Left These Woods

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'Dripping trees, soggy mulch,

Posted on Thu, 29 Dec 2022

'Dripping trees, soggy mulch, wan white sun' very evocative of my winter walk this morning. These dark mornings feel oppressive. The whirling whiteness across the Atlantic is frightening. I am grateful for some mild December temperatures.

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Posted in Temperate December, variations

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Very entertaining. I can

Posted on Thu, 29 Dec 2022

Very entertaining. I can picture the little elf on his fag break (smoking stunts your growth...apparently). If only we could freeze Buble and Piers Morgan.

Perfect little tale for the rabbit hole. I do need a break from Mentour Pilot and...

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Posted in In-between Days

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Thank you so much Di for

Posted on Wed, 28 Dec 2022

Thank you so much Di for remembering his name! I've been trying to write about him but I don't want to trivialise his many qualities. He was almost fifteen and I don't actually feel too sad, it's more that he was part of my confidence because he...

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Posted in Winter Light

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That made me laugh..a lot,

Posted on Wed, 28 Dec 2022

That made me laugh..a lot, especially the end, naked pictures from middle-aged people, wtaf. You're brave. Weatherspoons frozen peas. We've come so far since the creepy ads in the back of the local paper and it's even more cringe.

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Posted in The Tinder Date (Tinder is the night)

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It sounds like you have

Posted on Sat, 24 Dec 2022

It sounds like you have wonderful memories of Christmas with your family. 

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Posted in My Parents Last Christmas

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The fresh raw beauty can be

Posted on Thu, 17 Nov 2022

The fresh raw beauty can be an eye-watering burden, far more relaxing to fade into the seasons, especially with stars and moon to light the way. Magical poem Jenny.

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Posted in To A Brand New Day

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