Jane Hyphen
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Parcel for You ...Part 12
The update went on rather longer than Vanessa had expected. She gave up on watching over him, there was something horrifying about seeing Spencer in...
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Make Millions in Two Minutes...
Today I was in my sprawling country estate in Scotland. I went wild swimming with my extremely macho chums, took down a stag then did some fishing...
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Parcel for you....Part 11
‘Spencer?’ ‘Yes,’ ‘Come here!’ Vanessa listened as he walked to the hall and stood over her. ‘These cartridges,’ she said, holding one up without...
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Parcel for you...Part 10
On the drive back from her mother’s house, a sense of guilt began to proliferate in the rear voids of Vanessa’s consciousness. At first she attempted...
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Brodie's Big Idea
‘I’m really impressed with what you’ve done in the garden, Brodie.’ Brodie flicked his oily hair and blinked, he didn’t like compliments. He already...
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There is lots of magic in
Posted on Sat, 20 Jan 2024
There is lots of magic in these lines, it's sort of sad too. I can't bear a dead bird. Those pies are a community, a dynasty. I see them in a different light now with fairies in their hearts. How beautiful.
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Very sweet and delightful for
Posted on Mon, 22 Jan 2024
Very sweet and delightful for children. My car has a name and a character, they all do. I remember my children commenting on whether cars had angry or friendly faces....
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Very original but the
Posted on Sun, 21 Jan 2024
Very original but the exchanges between members of this family group are fully relatable despite the fantasy quirks you've implemented. Where will this adventure go next?
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A sad but ultimately
Posted on Fri, 19 Jan 2024
A sad but ultimately satisfying second part, Paul. So nicely done. I can imagine the silence in their house and the welcome presence of the cat wandering in. I suppose you have to make allowances for people's coping strategies in such sorrowful...
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I couldn't agree more, Maxine
Posted on Wed, 17 Jan 2024
I couldn't agree more, Maxine. I get stressed about parking at the best of times so couple that with a trip to hospital and I would be experiencing a stomach-cramp inducing level of anxiety. There should be a free constant shuttle bus service...
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This is easy to read, classy
Posted on Wed, 17 Jan 2024
This is easy to read, classy and sort of meditative. It's a perfect short story. Takes me back to very middle-class homes I visited as a child where people were cultured and ate food I'd never heard of and had original artwork on the walls. It...
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I'm not sure what that lot
Posted on Tue, 16 Jan 2024
I'm not sure what that lot are or if they're even just holograms, such if their disconnection from society.
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I really like this, Rhiannon.
Posted on Mon, 15 Jan 2024
I really like this, Rhiannon. It's easy to forget that farmers are up and out in all weathers, at all times helping nature along. Your words are soft and powerful here, much like the lamplight.
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I too love, 'birdsong ballads
Posted on Tue, 09 Jan 2024
I too love, 'birdsong ballads on barest branches'. It's something I've been noticing this week, the birds are celebrating day length. Peace is the greatest thing we can hope for and some sort of rebalancing in our economy. New year's eve truly...
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I've been brainwashed, Di. I
Posted on Mon, 08 Jan 2024
I've been brainwashed, Di. I'm smoking a cigar in some long glistening loafers as we speak, no socks mind, just a hint of tanned ankle.
Thank you for reading and your great compliment x
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