Jane Hyphen

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Grief is a Shower of Rocks

By Jane Hyphen on Mon, 08 Jun 2020

Grief is a shower of rocks Descending from the rolling clouds Which darkened the skies of my truth Each cusped and hard enough to Carve this strange...

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Away with the Fairies

By Jane Hyphen on Sat, 30 May 2020

I’ve never been away Away with the fairies I’m ever so envious Of those who have Lucidity being overrated And often quite tiring They talk about it...

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I Remember when there was So Much Space

By Jane Hyphen on Wed, 06 May 2020

I remember when there was So much space Stretching out in front of me like A vast ocean With sunlight sparkling upon waves I felt full Wondering what...

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Penelope is not your Friend

By Jane Hyphen on Fri, 01 May 2020

Penelope is not your friend Look deep in her eyes There’s a hair pin bend And a hellion blotch An open slit in the darkest spot To the sheerest drop...

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I feel for you Ladybell, you

Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021

I feel for you Ladybell, you've done exactly the right thing in reaching out in a way which you feel safe. I know living with parents who have an unhealthy relationship with each other can feel like a pressure cooker in which you feel in danger...

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We can positively hear

Posted on Tue, 12 Jan 2021

We can positively hear ourselves getting older during these months and we are drained of colour under these clouds. Thanks for your comment.

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I like to think it wouldn't

Posted on Tue, 13 Oct 2020

I like to think it wouldn't Insert. I would take pains to choose the best names for all the shoe designs. I have a list already and waiting. Luna are my favourite but we haven't got your size sorry, you'll have to take the Griseldas instead.

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The was really interesting

Posted on Thu, 08 Oct 2020

The was really interesting and enjoyable, thank you for sharing. 'The club' sounds like great fun and it's interesting how people used to make a real effort with their council homes and even tiny balconies, growing flowers. I don't know what's...

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Hi Rhiannon, I think if you

Posted on Mon, 05 Oct 2020

Hi Rhiannon, I think if you're somebody who gets overstimulated by detail then sitting such an exam at age eleven is so overwhelming. I remember the ticking clock at the front of hall getting right into my head and also the sight of the other...

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So beautiful to watch the way

Posted on Mon, 05 Oct 2020

So beautiful to watch the way they move, the little feathered visitors add so much to our environment. I love the way you've described their movements and how their colours connect to the environment. I think the sudden change in weather has...

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I can really imagine young

Posted on Mon, 05 Oct 2020

I can really imagine young children singing this along with the actions Rhiannon. It's so easy to convince young minds that the autumn wind and rain is miserable but our seasons are so important and they all bring entertainment and something new...

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Beautiful Rhiannon. Your

Posted on Mon, 08 Jun 2020

Beautiful Rhiannon. Your poems are always so visual and full of texture, I can see those crops swaying, 'swells rippling' and aren't they so early this year. Walking around it feels as if we are a month ahead or more.

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It does feel like there is a

Posted on Fri, 29 May 2020

It does feel like there is a magical spell on all the land doesn't it. This weather has made everything look more like July than May and we are all slowing down but we probably needed to.

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It's just really nice to see

Posted on Fri, 01 May 2020

It's just really nice to see another face coming along the road. I always try to be the one who crosses or steps out into the road but my whippets often cause me to have some delay (they always embarrass me or me them) so the other people beat me...