Jane Hyphen

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458 of my 2,509 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 484 votes

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Parrot Rescue

The problem is most people just don’t realise how long we’re going to live.’ ‘Agreed Geoffrey. Humans and their “see it, gotta have it” attitude...
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Drilling Out Blame

These people, they have no beating heart, only fish-eyed stares. Cold, drilling out blame. Seeking dirt to dish, as they swallow in haste, what they...

The Easter Rat

He’s got a rat, Mango’s caught a rat! Mango can’t catch anything.. He was once hit by the Amazon van, It broke his pelvis, his back, his tail. Let it...
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Open Gardens

‘I didn’t sleep Jackie.’ ‘Maybe you should stay at home this morning. I can get everything we need from Sainsbury's and the garden is looking...
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The Cheesemaster Cometh.

The cheesemaster cometh, Sweaty, stilton thighed. He’s bitter-sweet. And as strong as Equinoctial tides. An omnipotent being. He’s fat. At almost...

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458 of my comments have received 484 Great Feedback votes

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So strong all barriers must

Posted on Wed, 24 Feb 2021

So strong all barriers must fall. Yes, so much is happening just this week, busy birds and buds colouring up, there is no stopping nature. The first verse is all winter and then you unfurl the vigor spring. Wonderful.

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Posted in Getting Ready

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Sad, quiet and beautiful. The

Posted on Sun, 14 Feb 2021

Sad, quiet and beautiful. The opposite of love. Very interesting poem. Today my daughter was walking along the street, a man carrying a large, expensive bunch of roses (for his other half presumably) ogled her and winked at her.  Love is a...

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Posted in The Opposite of Love

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I've so enjoyed reading this

Posted on Fri, 22 Jan 2021

I've so enjoyed reading this and kept thinking about it throughout the day. Amazing and well deserved pick of the month. 

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Posted in To a Lone Sailor

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I feel for you Ladybell, you

Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021

I feel for you Ladybell, you've done exactly the right thing in reaching out in a way which you feel safe. I know living with parents who have an unhealthy relationship with each other can feel like a pressure cooker in which you feel in danger...

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Posted in How do you forgive a parent?

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We can positively hear

Posted on Tue, 12 Jan 2021

We can positively hear ourselves getting older during these months and we are drained of colour under these clouds. Thanks for your comment.

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Posted in The Edge of Colour

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I like to think it wouldn't

Posted on Tue, 13 Oct 2020

I like to think it wouldn't Insert. I would take pains to choose the best names for all the shoe designs. I have a list already and waiting. Luna are my favourite but we haven't got your size sorry, you'll have to take the Griseldas instead.

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Posted in I Name that Shoe....

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The was really interesting

Posted on Thu, 08 Oct 2020

The was really interesting and enjoyable, thank you for sharing. 'The club' sounds like great fun and it's interesting how people used to make a real effort with their council homes and even tiny balconies, growing flowers. I don't know what's...

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Posted in THE GRANVILLE PARKERS - POST WAR SE LONDON

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Hi Rhiannon, I think if you

Posted on Mon, 05 Oct 2020

Hi Rhiannon, I think if you're somebody who gets overstimulated by detail then sitting such an exam at age eleven is so overwhelming. I remember the ticking clock at the front of hall getting right into my head and also the sight of the other...

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Posted in 11 PLUS

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So beautiful to watch the way

Posted on Mon, 05 Oct 2020

So beautiful to watch the way they move, the little feathered visitors add so much to our environment. I love the way you've described their movements and how their colours connect to the environment.  I think the sudden change in weather has...

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Posted in bird feeder

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I can really imagine young

Posted on Mon, 05 Oct 2020

I can really imagine young children singing this along with the actions Rhiannon. It's so easy to convince young minds that the autumn wind and rain is miserable but our seasons are so important and they all bring entertainment and something new...

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Posted in The seasons' round

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