Jane Hyphen

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I have 440 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 1358651 times and 575 of my stories have been cherry picked.
605 of my 3,007 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 654 votes

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You learn about the sunshine

First you learn about the sunshine Long, blue sky days Beneath the boughs of trees Leaves flickering, lambent The sun is ever loyal It burns in...
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Cherry

S T Vasectomy Clinic - 7

'Is everything okay?' ‘Yes,’ he nodded, ‘I just had a…..dream that’s all.’ ‘By the way Solo has been sick in the night, there’s bright yellow bile on...
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Cherry

The Clappers

When it comes to school productions, there is usually a mixture of emotions; pride, embarrassment, pressure, discomfort, excitement and then there’s...
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Cherry

You Looked Like You Had Lost

At low tide, the stillest sleep, and the vastness of this beach exposed. Memories littered, stories, half buried. I think that’s when I saw your eyes...
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Cherry

Legend of the Pah - 6 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)

Right now it didn’t matter that he was growing older. The very act of starting up his old motor and taking it out felt rebellious and liberating, he...
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605 of my comments have received 654 Great Feedback votes

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Love this, surreal and dreamy

Posted on Tue, 10 May 2022

Love this, surreal and dreamy. Really enjoyed, thank you for sharing.

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Posted in The Dead Want Their Moon Back

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A clever and interesting poem

Posted on Fri, 06 May 2022

A clever and interesting poem Di. There's so many directions you can go in with a chrysalis, it's such a shocking peice of engineering and a shocking process for the creature involved but somehow it survives all that change. I enjoyed the uplift...

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Posted in wheels to rotors

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It is sad that they interbred

Posted on Mon, 09 May 2022

It is sad that they interbred, the English ones being so much more delicate. A lovely tribute to a beautiful sight. We are so lucky if we can get out and see these gems in the natural world because they are free and better than man-made...

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Posted in The wonderful wild bells!

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It's the ones you write the

Posted on Mon, 09 May 2022

It's the ones you write the fastest because you'e writing from the heart. Really interesting read, you must have been a bright student to go off and do English Studies at university. The stint of temping no doubt helped to give you a grounding in...

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Posted in Ray's Memories age 19

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Making me feel a bit queasy,

Posted on Fri, 29 Apr 2022

Making me feel a bit queasy, unwashed men, meatballs and sleazy hook-up apps, perhaps I'm just a bit delicate. That Dave is a bit of a freeloader. Uggly Puggly's random release back into the community sounds typical of the random and inconsistent...

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Posted in Ugly Puggly 16

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IIt's amazing how you have

Posted on Fri, 29 Apr 2022

IIt's amazing how you have written this in the very shape of the plant. Really enjoyed this tribute to a sticky, funny little plant.

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Posted in Sticky Wullie

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Reading this is akin to a

Posted on Sat, 30 Apr 2022

Reading this is akin to a butterfly kiss. I love how the length echoes the length of a butterflies visit and 'soft as forgetting' is genius. They are magical little creatures.

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Posted in butterfly moment

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'the pumpkin with bad hair',

Posted on Sat, 23 Apr 2022

'the pumpkin with bad hair', that's a common look since Donald Trump made fake tan mainstream. I also really enjoyed the pub scene, a thing of the past now. And the enduring school bully, acting like a respectable member of the community, shifty...

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Posted in Ugly Puggly 10

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So much freedom demonstrated

Posted on Sun, 24 Apr 2022

So much freedom demonstrated here in your words Jenny. There is the part of us that gets old, tired and limited and then this side where anything is possible. 'Hitching a ride on ever changing winds', as long as we can do that, there's a reason...

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Posted in Fly Like An Eagle

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This is brilliant and it made

Posted on Wed, 20 Apr 2022

This is brilliant and it made me laugh a lot. Uggly Puggly and his weird mate/lover. I love UP's quirks and the way he is capable of anything, including having too much electricity.

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Posted in Ugly Puggly 7

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