Jane Hyphen
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I have 328 stories published in
3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 461969 times
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414 of my 2,285 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 440 votes
My stories
My Dreams are Safe (IP)
My dreams are safe Insured in all the Tinted buds of spring I’m reassured, I hear In every skylark’s trill The aria of my dreams The watercolour...
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Orphan Lamb
Who will save the orphan lamb? Shivered bleats, wet crease Skinny back, mucus neck Coated shine, ewe’s juice Pleads just like a baby In a stubbly...
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Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part fourteen)
‘Got a telly,’ Dad said as if it were something exciting and new. He grabbed the remote control, pointed it at a small screen in the corner of the...
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Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part thirteen)
It had been a few weeks since Jack had last seen Kayla. That was the strange thing, he’d gone from never seeing her before to seeing her everywhere...
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Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part twelve)
It had seemed to Jack that the first half term of secondary school had passed by with a feeling that all was fresh and uncharted, he himself felt...
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This is so beautiful, from a
Posted on Wed, 04 Nov 2015
This is so beautiful, from a place felt, breaks the lines which separate what we perceive as our reality from the rest.
Read full commentPosted in Nights Such as These
Rhus typhina - Stag's Horn
Posted on Sat, 17 Oct 2015
Rhus typhina - Stag's Horn Sumach x
Read full commentPosted in October
This is so dreamy and
Posted on Sun, 11 Oct 2015
This is so dreamy and atmospheric, I thought maybe the character was trapped inside a dream at first (it used to happen to me and I'd think, 'why do I always come here?') Love the description of him coming round, not rushed, just right. I learned...
Read full commentPosted in My Problem with Peyote
Really enjoyed. Jeremy has
Posted on Sat, 26 Sep 2015
Really enjoyed. Jeremy has grown on me ever since I took the time to hear the man speak! It's difficult to see him through all the flames - I think you nailed it.
Read full commentPosted in For the love of Jeremy Corbyn
Some people are able to write
Posted on Tue, 23 Jun 2015
Some people are able to write poems which massage the brain. This is one of them Terry. The title put me off and I didn't think I'd enjoy it but I really did. It made me salivate and my brain is refreshed, ready to see beauty in the world again...
Read full commentPosted in To Isolde, A Gift - If Only You'll Be Mine
What a sweet tribute to your
Posted on Tue, 16 Jun 2015
What a sweet tribute to your mother, she looks lovely in the photo by the way. Recently I have been remembering lots of little things about my dad who died eight years ago, they come back to me like small subconsious gifts. Memories of your...
Read full commentPosted in I Still Miss You Terribly
Love this - a situation joins
Posted on Mon, 11 May 2015
Love this - a situation joins up blithely into something more complete than it could have been.
Read full commentPosted in For the Love of Her
This is very evocative for me
Posted on Tue, 28 Apr 2015
This is very evocative for me. My dad was an Ansell's lifer, paid partly in beer tokens. I used to look down from the expressway and think how I wouldn't want to walk down there among the huge concrete pillars with that smell of HP - terrifying....
Read full commentPosted in Aston Junction
An unusual tale which I
Posted on Wed, 11 Dec 2013
An unusual tale which I enjoyed very much. By the way that's surely my ancient Russian Blue in the photo!
Read full commentPosted in Cat-Omen
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