Jane Hyphen
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Parcel for you - Part 31
There was a brief interval while The Hominids of Quasar set up and made a great play of testing the microphones. ‘I like Stuart’s bandana,’ Vanessa...
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Parcel for you...Part 30
‘There,’ Annie pulled the rim down so that it obscured his forehead, ’that’s better, you can’t see his face as much.’ Spencer stopped in his tracks...
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Parcel for you...Part 29
‘Has Annie sent you the tickets?’ Vanessa had just returned from work and she could see that Spencer had a look about him, a buzz which suggested he’...
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The Broken Lady
She doesn’t move The broken lady At least when the mortals are passing She may contemplate much From the bounds of her post She’s more than the...
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Parcel for you...Part 28
There was a sense of restored peace with Annie having left the house to stay with her father for a while. Vanessa placed all that young lady’s things...
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This is moving tribute, Jenny
Posted on Tue, 30 Jul 2024
This is moving tribute, Jenny, sensitively done. It's been on my mind all week and can't help wondering what went wrong with this young man. The response of the public, I understand, it's based upon fear. Caring is your saving grace - it's true...
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I'd never heard of Tom Crean,
Posted on Wed, 31 Jul 2024
I'd never heard of Tom Crean, I love his name. You leave the reader with decisions to make about who is real and what really happened and the atmosphere of the pub and the old cottage is so well done.
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This is so clever, Rhiannon,
Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2024
This is so clever, Rhiannon, the idea of a ballroom dress upon the dancefloor of their huge leaves. You've got Begonias spot on and they don't get tired either, do they.
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Now I too would enjoy camping
Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024
Now I too would enjoy camping if all those comforts were on offer in the blink of an eye. Dolls coming to life though, that's most people's worst nightmare. There are so many unhindered imaginative elements in here.
Read full commentPosted in 'Unwanted Magic" 7
This is wonderful. The way
Posted on Fri, 19 Jul 2024
This is wonderful. The way you've described the sights, sounds, atmosphere. I was simply teleported to the scene. Magical and one to return to.
Read full commentPosted in Rain at the Forest Cafe
Terrifying isn't it, Maxine.
Posted on Fri, 12 Jul 2024
Terrifying isn't it, Maxine. A national health crisis. This will be news for a week or two and then forgotten. For me it raises bigger questions about the sophistication of the crime and how a young man reaches this point. Poor father and older...
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That was simply a unique read
Posted on Wed, 10 Jul 2024
That was simply a unique read, nothing predictable, more like a verbal collage using so many materials from different sources to create a thought provoking piece of art. I always found Midsummer Night's dream sort of trippy, I enjoyed how you've...
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You paint the atmosphere of
Posted on Fri, 05 Jul 2024
You paint the atmosphere of the afternoon pub culture so well, the music and laid back jovial haze of the place, half-hearted football and muffled conservation. Part of me thinks those days are gone, I hope they survive in some corners. The meat-...
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That's quite interesting. I
Posted on Wed, 03 Jul 2024
That's quite interesting. I suppose here in the UK, the weather is so changeable that sometimes the conditions create a perfect storn of sychronised pollination, all the grass going to seed at once for example. I've never been to Pakistan but I...
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When I think of DIY, I want
Posted on Thu, 27 Jun 2024
When I think of DIY, I want to take a big nap. Yes, I'm with you there and many other things too. The thought of it so draining for the soul. This is relatable and entertaining too.
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