Jane Hyphen
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Parcel for You..Part 33
‘It’s common in humans,’ said Lorenzo flippantly, ‘but, hey, you must meet my husband, he’s called Steve,’ he said, holding out his hand towards a...
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Forest in the Brain
I need something for the shade Where it’s deeper, colder I’m not expecting flowers A pair of leaves, a small sign But nothing grows here Beneath this...
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Parcel for you..Part 32
‘What on earth is happening over there?’ said Pat. Stu stood up taller on his cuban heels, like little hooves, they gave him an extra inch and a half...
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Foods that make me feel sick.
‘Jam tarts!’ She said, my mother in an excited, breathy voice, her dark eyes wide and shiny, the words hushed as if not permitted to be said out loud...
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Parcel for you - Part 31
There was a brief interval while The Hominids of Quasar set up and made a great play of testing the microphones. ‘I like Stuart’s bandana,’ Vanessa...
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The push and pull of a child
Posted on Sat, 21 Sep 2024
The push and pull of a child's emotions, one minute wanting to please and the next forgetting everything and just getting lost in amusements. I enjoyed the rich descriptions of his world from the window and look forward to more.
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I too love the ridgeway, the
Posted on Thu, 12 Sep 2024
I too love the ridgeway, the bits I have walked had plenty of lovely views, historical features and very satisfying to walk on. Trail reflective in puddles appearing, so evocative of this time of year. We've had all the seasons this week. Good...
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That was a lovely poem to
Posted on Fri, 13 Sep 2024
That was a lovely poem to read before bed. As adults, it's easy to forget about the limitless fantasy worlds which are often level with the real world when we are children. I want to go on a starlit journey.
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Brilliant and otherworldly.
Posted on Fri, 13 Sep 2024
Brilliant and otherworldly. Decay and hope, big endings and humour.
Read full commentPosted in The Big End
Autobuff - I could make a
Posted on Fri, 06 Sep 2024
Autobuff - I could make a fortune couldn't I. Poor Vanessa. I've been there many times with one of my children and I always felt that if even if I could afford whatever it is, I wouldn't be buying it anyway. Thank you so much for your comment Di...
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You do these surreal tales
Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2024
You do these surreal tales mixed with very real emotional elements so well, Paul. I knew I would enjoy it from the onset. Opening the message, clicking the link, it sounds so innocent but is increasing powerful and dangerous. The idea of having a...
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Awful, Maxine, it's such a
Posted on Thu, 05 Sep 2024
Awful, Maxine, it's such a gut wrenching story. There appears to be an epidemic of crime involving young men, boys, and bladed weapons and we are being let down.
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Wise and wonderful words,
Posted on Mon, 02 Sep 2024
Wise and wonderful words, Rhiannon. Beautiful photographs too. The last verse very calming.
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I admire the way which you
Posted on Sun, 01 Sep 2024
I admire the way which you describe sounds and the tone of voices so that they you can really hear them as you read. It's easy to imagine pirates being realy quite stupid. There's is so much detail in your story. I would love to see it in an...
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Colouring outside the lines
Posted on Sun, 11 Aug 2024
Colouring outside the lines and writing in between them. When the fragments come together seamlessly. Brilliantly done.
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