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Nicola's Privilege

Her parents were rich enough to send her to any school but keen to peddle an image of themselves as normal, down to earth folk, they decided that the...
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Cherry

Parcel for you - Part 53

‘Okay Mum. I’ll sort it in a minute.’ ‘And some bus fare for these two. I had to pay for them, two pounds thirty each, cobble together the change.’ ‘...
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Cherry

Parcel for you - Part 52

It was inevitable really wasn’t it, Vanessa thought as she logged off from work. She’d spent the afternoon in a haze of confusion, working through...
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The Garden, that was my domain

The garden, that was my domain It’s where I framed my worst paintings Held my rival’s head beneath the soil Until his gist went limp And hid inside a...
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Cherry

Parcel for You - Part 51

Maybe he’s just better off without me, she thought as she drove back towards home, knowing in her gut that Spencer would not be by the front door...
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601 of my comments have received 649 Great Feedback votes

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This put a smile on my face,

Posted on Wed, 11 Jun 2025

This put a smile on my face, despite the hardships and annoyances you seem to be enduring. I enjoyed the poem and the animal details alongside local highlights. We also have a few vacuum cleaners, I won't say how many, some are very old but I...

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Posted in Aura Urziceanu’s Lullaby Effect

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Such a perfectly adapted

Posted on Thu, 12 Jun 2025

Such a perfectly adapted creature, fascinating. The perfection of our natural world makes you wonder about lots of things.

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Posted in Designed to catch water

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I love this. A hard working

Posted on Sat, 07 Jun 2025

I love this. A hard working capable employee. Your brain requires a different sort of discipline to cope with mundane tasks and do them well, day after day. It's sort of meditation. Remy growing his hair is sort of iconic, he keeps the rest of...

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Posted in Who do people say I am?

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Thank you, Insert. This is

Posted on Fri, 06 Jun 2025

Thank you, Insert. This is something I started a few years back and I just unearthed it. Chapter 1 is really sweary...

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Posted in The Vale - Part Two

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Agree with you, UK self

Posted on Fri, 06 Jun 2025

Agree with you, UK self-checkouts often have all the staff who formerly manned the now redundant tills standing around like the gestapo watching you so you don't nick anything. The worst thing is when they emit that dull impatient bleep because...

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Posted in Rools is Rools

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An inciteful summing up of

Posted on Thu, 05 Jun 2025

An inciteful summing up of the current mood. It's impossible to imagine the future and difficult to plan for anything. The media constantly throwing threats at us, gloom and doom but how much of it is real? For sure our economy needs a huge shake...

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Posted in Perverse Future

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I still haven't been to

Posted on Sun, 01 Jun 2025

I still haven't been to Scotland, Jenny. It's on my list of things to do. Heather and craggy rocks, a place away from man-made complications and the inconvenience of counting time. There is nothing more valuable.

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Posted in Treasure of Sensory Impressions

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I knew it was TK Maxx! I used

Posted on Thu, 22 May 2025

I knew it was TK Maxx! I used to have the same habit, I won't call it an addiction, now it's Ebay. There are worse things..

 

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Posted in Addictions.

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Makes me realise how hard it

Posted on Thu, 22 May 2025

Makes me realise how hard it must have been to arrive somewhere on time in those days. Sticking to whatever arrangements you made by letter or during the last time you saw each other and not only visiting friends and relations but knowing their...

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Posted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part Three

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Reading this, I can relate to

Posted on Thu, 22 May 2025

Reading this, I can relate to the conflicted emotions in regard to people who are desperate but may also prey upon you, rob you etc. Not much has changed over the centuries, Jenny. How lucky Emily is to have a family and money to spend.

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Posted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part Two

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