Jane Hyphen
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Parcel for You - Part 49
Vanessa sighed and dropped down onto the bed. She felt as if she’d had the stuffing knocked out of her as she stared at the vacant plug socket which...
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Parcel for You - Part 48
The door flung open and a cold blast of air hit Vanessa’s face. The wind sucked at the partially closed blind and it creased up against the window...
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Parcel for You - Part 47
Both women gasped at the same time. There was something shocking and terrifying about seeing him standing there silently, having got up all by...
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Parcel for You - Part 46
‘Thanks for the coffee, Spencer. Do you think you could bring the gin and tonic in here too, and some ice?’ Spencer gave Pat a lingering look. ‘Yes I...
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Parcel for You - Part 45
Vanessa sort of zoned out over dinner, it was almost impossible not to. The opening details of the story had been intriguing but they were soon into...
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This is very stirring, like a
Posted on Tue, 25 Feb 2025
This is very stirring, like a peice of music. I felt almost dizzy reading the words and thinking of those gigantic planets and the associated elements. Wordless companion, you bring them alive beyond the science of dry facts.
Read full commentPosted in Pluto’s Ode To Charon
Marmite on toast isn't for me
Posted on Sat, 01 Mar 2025
Marmite on toast isn't for me, Rhiannon but I might try a nip in a soup or stew, that's a good idea. I wish I did like it on bread because it's a very useful product. Recently I've got a thing for Horlicks and that seems to divide people too,...
Read full commentPosted in Love it or hate it … ?
This is a wonderful poem,
Posted on Fri, 28 Feb 2025
This is a wonderful poem, Jenny, very elegant just like its subject.
Read full commentPosted in Skating Without Ice
You don't forget these
Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2025
You don't forget these sadistic nutcases who take up teaching do you? I wonder if it's their personalities which dictate their career choice or their career choice which causes their characters to descend into bullying roles. Probably a bit of...
Read full commentPosted in Mr. Portleven's Electricity Class
This is a very unique poem,
Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2025
This is a very unique poem, as are cows, tampered with by us and their extraordinary lives, calfs torn away and the endless milking. I love the contrast between the wild creatures and pastoral scenes.
Read full commentPosted in Cows - lost, refound, tinkered with.
He lived and breathed his
Posted on Sat, 15 Feb 2025
He lived and breathed his profession and those in the know could tell from the off. I was worried about him sitting there squashed into his seat, I hope he got the job. Every town needs good bakers.
Read full commentPosted in Having perhaps the better claim
That sounds wonderful, Jenny.
Posted on Sun, 02 Feb 2025
That sounds wonderful, Jenny. Reading poetry under shady trees in beautiful Canterbury. Memories of peaceful times, friendships and opportunities. Snapshots in time cherished forever.
Read full commentPosted in Like Autumn Leaves Scatter In The Breeze
Alive n 25, Kris that is a
Posted on Thu, 30 Jan 2025
Alive n 25, Kris that is a good place to be and keeping fit too. That was some achievement keeping that going and with well-crafted lyrics and tempo that plays in your head as you read. Very well done. It would be great to hear you perform it....
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A beautiful tribute to these
Posted on Wed, 29 Jan 2025
A beautiful tribute to these darling little flowers. I am currently planting little colonies of them in my garden. I don't think I can put into words how much I love snowdrops but you've done a lovely job here, Rhiannon.
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There's an undercurrent here,
Posted on Sun, 26 Jan 2025
There's an undercurrent here, it's like a game of chess, grievances simmering, doubts niggling. I was going to say, it's like a soap opera but the characters have more class, they're cultured. I think Perfidia might regret the oblivion tomorrow...
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