Jane Hyphen
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The Vale - Part One (a)
‘I tell you what, this stereo is quality. The base on this tune, man, the whole damn motor’s banging!’ Dan yelled, nodding his head to the beat,...
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The Vale - Part Two
Wendy Hooper from IT looks like ET, it’s funny but I’ve never thought of it before. I’ve known her for years but this has only just occurred to me...
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The Crinkler
‘Did you hear that?’ Bryce and Lora lay on their backs in the darkness of their bedroom, for unknown reasons their eyes were wide open as they...
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Parcel for You - Part 61 (the end)
‘I never thought you’d ask,’ said Cedric in what sounded like a fairly normal voice, almost human. Now Vanessa was determined to get this over with...
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Parcel for You - Part 60
‘Okay Spencer,’ Vanessa said, her voice breaking a little, ‘I’ll call her later and see where she’s at with Stu.’ Spencer gazed at his wife for a few...
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Hi Di. Bleak is the perfect
Posted on Fri, 26 Sep 2025
Hi Di. Bleak is the perfect word for it. I wonder if it really will allow us to understand animals though, we don't even understand other humans much of the time even when we're speaking the same language. I don't want to live in a virtual world...
Read full commentPosted in RIP Real World
Thank you. The dog must
Posted on Tue, 16 Sep 2025
Thank you. The dog must always be okay in fiction and even in a true story like this one.
Read full commentPosted in Beige Goo Splat - (part 2)
Thanks you Insert. I don't
Posted on Sun, 14 Sep 2025
Thanks you Insert. I don't know where to goo with it..
Read full commentPosted in Beige Goo Splat (part 1)
People like us, Paul. The
Posted on Fri, 12 Sep 2025
People like us, Paul. The rubik's cube is the perfect distraction and carrying it everywhere must have given him a sense of stability when everything is so uncertain. Great story.
Read full commentPosted in The Boy with the Rubik’s Cube
Hi Jenny. The moon is amazing
Posted on Thu, 11 Sep 2025
Hi Jenny. The moon is amazing isn't it, like an old friend or relative, dependable and bright. Thank you for reading my story, I'm pleased that it resonated with you.
Read full commentPosted in The Tiny Easter Teddy
I really enjoyed this. At
Posted on Sat, 06 Sep 2025
I really enjoyed this. At first it made me think of Nuts In May and the way you described the heat and the children playing is very atmospheric. The mad man, incongruously dressed for the heat but turns out he was preparing for what was coming....
Read full commentPosted in Listen to the mad man
I'm loving the surreal
Posted on Tue, 02 Sep 2025
I'm loving the surreal elements, the awkward interactions combined with danger and mystery. There is an intensity from Billy, he's attracting the supernatural. The coastal background makes for very cinematic imagery.
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (7)
I'd almost forgotten what
Posted on Mon, 01 Sep 2025
I'd almost forgotten what rain was like Jenny. A change in the way does indeed give you a new perspective and refreshes you in many ways; a reminder that nature is always in charge. 'Billowing deluge upon this thirsty land', the sort of clouds...
Read full commentPosted in A Moment To Ponder
An unbucket list. I
Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2025
An unbucket list. I understand all of them and many more. I like the simply things but I'm quite boring. Spandex and snow...
Read full commentPosted in Admissions Impossible
Beautiful observations of
Posted on Thu, 14 Aug 2025
Beautiful observations of nature and the buzz of energy all around us when we step outside, Jenny. There is so much happening, you could spend whole days lost in the garden or the woods with no need to travel and spend money on luxuries. Even...
Read full commentPosted in Fragments Of Life
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