Jane Hyphen
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Parcel for you...Part 21
Annie was as much part of the modern world as Spencer, in that she was unsentimental about people’s weaknesses, unsympathetic to the experiences...
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Land of Make Believe
Being human, what pain, what peril! I can probably count on one and a half hands the times I’ve felt truly happy, at least as an adult, and they...
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Parcel for you...part 20
There was a headline, just a small one, alongside the main headline which was about the phasing out of car ownership. In the news sites, on Facebook...
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Parcel for you...Part 19
He heard some sort of meaningless laughter. Vanessa was sputtering like a very underpowered engine, emitting nervous breathy giggles in sporadic...
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Do you like this colour?
I really like this colour You keep saying that It brightens the room So much better than what was there before It was very difficult to choose What...
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Hi lenchenelf, thank you for
Posted on Wed, 17 Apr 2024
Hi lenchenelf, thank you for your comment. I agree, the Collieries fit very well with the theme of the poem. I can't imagine how much toil, human endurance, pain and suffering went into those mines and how rich it made just a few. It set the...
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Hi Jenny, of course I'm not
Posted on Wed, 17 Apr 2024
Hi Jenny, of course I'm not offended. Poetry should always be open to interpretation I think. I'm not sure exactly what the secret is myself but I felt it in the plants and flowers, they whispered to me, not in any language I could fully...
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This is delightful, Jenny. I
Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2024
This is delightful, Jenny. I love mice, I actually saw one today, scurrying in a polytunnel., they do have important business to do. Segments of sun, yes, I want a whole orange sun for the whole day.
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Thank you for your great
Posted on Sat, 13 Apr 2024
Thank you for your great comment, Di. Annie is one of those obliviously selfish people who look great on paper but in real life, leaves a trail of frayed nerves behind, especially the nervous system of their nearest and dearest. Spencer doesn't...
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Wow, that was like riding
Posted on Fri, 15 Mar 2024
Wow, that was like riding some rhyming river rapids, twists and turns, dunked then re-surfaced but fast flowing, dangerous in places. I agree with others, this should be performed because the little man who performs it inside my head doesn't do...
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Love this, Jenny. It's like a
Posted on Sat, 30 Mar 2024
Love this, Jenny. It's like a massage. The drums played along with the words and those images from the natural world. It just works really well.
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Thank you for the cherries
Posted on Thu, 28 Mar 2024
Thank you for the cherries and your comment, Insert. Ha ha, maybe I can introduce Uncle Clive to Spencer..
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This is very dark, lots of
Posted on Sun, 24 Mar 2024
This is very dark, lots of elements drawn together, colourful and restrained. It's got a lot of class.
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Really enjoyed. Boredom
Posted on Thu, 21 Mar 2024
Really enjoyed. Boredom broken by something she maybe shouldn't have been doing but the alternative was more stifling boredom and resentment. I love the way the spa showed her the way out and into something new. Life is too short after all.
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Creative flow accompanied by
Posted on Thu, 21 Mar 2024
Creative flow accompanied by drowsiness and your ideas fold away into layers of dream clouds. Bizarrely I sometimes have amazing songs playing in my dreams but I don't write music and have no way of recording them, I don't really know where they...
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