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Familiar Faces

She hadn’t lived there for very long, just over a year and it was all so different to what she’d known. It was a new beginning. A glistening...
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Parcel for you - Part 55

‘You have to give him his freedom, Mum, so he can develop as a sentient being. I really think we, as a family, are pioneers of this new technology...
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Parcel for you - Part 54

‘Put him on his charger for a bit then, he looks tired.’ ‘He cannot look tired, that isn’t possible, his face never changes. He’s fine Vanessa. I...
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Nicola's Privilege

Her parents were rich enough to send her to any school but keen to peddle an image of themselves as normal, down to earth folk, they decided that the...
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Parcel for you - Part 53

‘Okay Mum. I’ll sort it in a minute.’ ‘And some bus fare for these two. I had to pay for them, two pounds thirty each, cobble together the change.’ ‘...
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579 of my comments have received 623 Great Feedback votes

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I love this. A hard working

Posted on Sat, 07 Jun 2025

I love this. A hard working capable employee. Your brain requires a different sort of discipline to cope with mundane tasks and do them well, day after day. It's sort of meditation. Remy growing his hair is sort of iconic, he keeps the rest of...

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Posted in Who do people say I am?

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Thank you, Insert. This is

Posted on Fri, 06 Jun 2025

Thank you, Insert. This is something I started a few years back and I just unearthed it. Chapter 1 is really sweary...

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Posted in The Vale - Part Two

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Agree with you, UK self

Posted on Fri, 06 Jun 2025

Agree with you, UK self-checkouts often have all the staff who formerly manned the now redundant tills standing around like the gestapo watching you so you don't nick anything. The worst thing is when they emit that dull impatient bleep because...

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Posted in Rools is Rools

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An inciteful summing up of

Posted on Thu, 05 Jun 2025

An inciteful summing up of the current mood. It's impossible to imagine the future and difficult to plan for anything. The media constantly throwing threats at us, gloom and doom but how much of it is real? For sure our economy needs a huge shake...

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Posted in Perverse Future

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I still haven't been to

Posted on Sun, 01 Jun 2025

I still haven't been to Scotland, Jenny. It's on my list of things to do. Heather and craggy rocks, a place away from man-made complications and the inconvenience of counting time. There is nothing more valuable.

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Posted in Treasure of Sensory Impressions

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I knew it was TK Maxx! I used

Posted on Thu, 22 May 2025

I knew it was TK Maxx! I used to have the same habit, I won't call it an addiction, now it's Ebay. There are worse things..

 

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Posted in Addictions.

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Makes me realise how hard it

Posted on Thu, 22 May 2025

Makes me realise how hard it must have been to arrive somewhere on time in those days. Sticking to whatever arrangements you made by letter or during the last time you saw each other and not only visiting friends and relations but knowing their...

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Posted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part Three

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Reading this, I can relate to

Posted on Thu, 22 May 2025

Reading this, I can relate to the conflicted emotions in regard to people who are desperate but may also prey upon you, rob you etc. Not much has changed over the centuries, Jenny. How lucky Emily is to have a family and money to spend.

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Posted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part Two

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This is going to be very

Posted on Tue, 20 May 2025

This is going to be very interesting Jenny. Pure escapism from another era. I really like the descriptions of the house and objects from the time. A wealthy family who also care about those who struggle with less. Emily, a young lady with her...

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Posted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part One

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This is unique and startling,

Posted on Sat, 24 May 2025

This is unique and startling, frightening actually. I really enjoyed it. The way the museum is sleek and modern put me at ease initially and then everything bends and becomes distorted and personal.  

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Posted in The Museum

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