Jane Hyphen
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Parcel for you..Part 26
By the time Vanessa got back to the house she was beginning to have a niggling feeling that she might live to regret inviting Spencer into her bed...
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Parcel for you.. Part 25
‘Oh, we might have to try and scrub that off,’ ‘Why Mum? It suits him, don’t you think it suits him?’ Vanessa stared at her daughter, she was always...
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Ratface
It had turned out to be a beautiful sunny afternoon, a bit windy but the wind was warmer, coming from the South now, blowing a constant stream of...
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Have you ever had a pair of pants?
Have you ever had a pair of pants? Underpants that is A pair that don’t wear out at all But keep their youthful looks, endure For ten or fifteen...
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Parcel for you...Part 24
Vanessa passed a long, uncomfortable night. She couldn’t escape the sounds of her daughter, rifling through bags, stomping to the bathroom and back...
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Now I too would enjoy camping
Posted on Sun, 21 Jul 2024
Now I too would enjoy camping if all those comforts were on offer in the blink of an eye. Dolls coming to life though, that's most people's worst nightmare. There are so many unhindered imaginative elements in here.
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This is wonderful. The way
Posted on Fri, 19 Jul 2024
This is wonderful. The way you've described the sights, sounds, atmosphere. I was simply teleported to the scene. Magical and one to return to.
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Terrifying isn't it, Maxine.
Posted on Fri, 12 Jul 2024
Terrifying isn't it, Maxine. A national health crisis. This will be news for a week or two and then forgotten. For me it raises bigger questions about the sophistication of the crime and how a young man reaches this point. Poor father and older...
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That was simply a unique read
Posted on Wed, 10 Jul 2024
That was simply a unique read, nothing predictable, more like a verbal collage using so many materials from different sources to create a thought provoking piece of art. I always found Midsummer Night's dream sort of trippy, I enjoyed how you've...
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You paint the atmosphere of
Posted on Fri, 05 Jul 2024
You paint the atmosphere of the afternoon pub culture so well, the music and laid back jovial haze of the place, half-hearted football and muffled conservation. Part of me thinks those days are gone, I hope they survive in some corners. The meat-...
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That's quite interesting. I
Posted on Wed, 03 Jul 2024
That's quite interesting. I suppose here in the UK, the weather is so changeable that sometimes the conditions create a perfect storn of sychronised pollination, all the grass going to seed at once for example. I've never been to Pakistan but I...
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When I think of DIY, I want
Posted on Thu, 27 Jun 2024
When I think of DIY, I want to take a big nap. Yes, I'm with you there and many other things too. The thought of it so draining for the soul. This is relatable and entertaining too.
Read full commentPosted in A Blah Day
That was a fascinating read
Posted on Thu, 27 Jun 2024
That was a fascinating read with lots of different elements. I have never experienced this first hand although my brother did this to his family and one of the things which surprised me the most was the way our mother forgave him (her son) pretty...
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Sublime and so finely written
Posted on Sat, 22 Jun 2024
Sublime and so finely written. Wonderful to read on a sunny afternoon.
Read full commentPosted in Dirge for another year gone by
Entertaining but too bloody
Posted on Thu, 27 Jun 2024
Entertaining but too bloody true, reminds me a bit of 'The Thick of It'. Boris used to come into a place where I used to work, the scruffy bumbling thing he projects blinds you like a mist. I'd love to have been a fly on the wall when the...
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