Jane Hyphen
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S T Vasectomy Clinic - 7
'Is everything okay?' ‘Yes,’ he nodded, ‘I just had a…..dream that’s all.’ ‘By the way Solo has been sick in the night, there’s bright yellow bile on...
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The Clappers
When it comes to school productions, there is usually a mixture of emotions; pride, embarrassment, pressure, discomfort, excitement and then there’s...
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You Looked Like You Had Lost
At low tide, the stillest sleep, and the vastness of this beach exposed. Memories littered, stories, half buried. I think that’s when I saw your eyes...
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Legend of the Pah - 6 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
Right now it didn’t matter that he was growing older. The very act of starting up his old motor and taking it out felt rebellious and liberating, he...
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Jai
The early hours of the morning were a magic time, he felt, when most people exist in another realm, sleeping and oblivious. The world was an empty...
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I just read the three parts
Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022
I just read the three parts Paul and I I found this depressing tale to be quite believable in a Dr Who ish sort of way. I love the ending where you brought back the cob horses and it's written so well, I couldn't wait to read the next part. Not...
Read full commentPosted in The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 3 of 3)
That was a very interesting
Posted on Sun, 19 Jun 2022
That was a very interesting read. How lovely that your mum and auntie were so close and supported each other and were able to live out their retirement in a sunny place. Sorry for your loss. It was insightful to read about the all the stages of...
Read full commentPosted in The Journey. Part Two.
I really want to visit, haven
Posted on Thu, 16 Jun 2022
I really want to visit, haven't got around to it yet but it's one of my dream destinations. Love 'brawny landscape' and the way you describe the dawn and the ripples on the loch. Wish I was there now.
Read full commentPosted in Midst Highland Shadows
Moving without being
Posted on Sun, 12 Jun 2022
Moving without being sentimental. Anniversaries are often poignant simply because the natural elements of the day bring it all back. I'm often unaware of the anniversary date of my father's death but there is something about the weather,...
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So pretty Jenny. Once you've
Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2022
So pretty Jenny. Once you've got them, you've got them. The seedpods are as lovely as the flowers and the feathery green foliage is light enough to complement the blooms 'purity laced'. They are a piece of art and always refreshing to see them...
Read full commentPosted in Love In The Mist
No but I'm going to start and
Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2022
No but I'm going to start and it will be full blown hysteria.
Read full commentPosted in S T Vasectomy Clinic - (11)
Brilliant again. Appalling,
Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2022
Brilliant again. Appalling, mundane, absurd, funny, horrifying and wonderfully written.
Read full commentPosted in Alabaster Conjugal 3.
I've always that thought that
Posted on Tue, 07 Jun 2022
I've always that thought that the skeleton of a dead tree adds so much to the landscape and I like that you've paid tribute to it here with your wonderful Rhiannon. The contrast of the tree standing still among all the life and movement of the...
Read full commentPosted in Evening peace
I love the element of
Posted on Thu, 02 Jun 2022
I love the element of folklore in this; nature intertwined with adventure, constant peril, all driven by the froces which spring from childhood experiences. The name Elowen is so beautiful.
Read full commentPosted in Leaving The Nest
I think that story about
Posted on Tue, 31 May 2022
I think that story about marriage was in the Daily Mail. All I can say is that I've been with my partner for over thrity years, we have two children, we're not married and our children have had a very stable family life, no splits or affairs,...
Read full commentPosted in unclear nuclear
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