Jane Hyphen

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I have 169 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 85325 times and 160 of my stories have been cherry picked.
92 of my 1,004 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 97 votes

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Teeth

Teeth, pale stones planted deep In pits of fleshy pink, glistening Within the black hole, the orifice Of sustenance, speech and breath Blankets of...
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Ant

The sun is shining Hot air builds Heat haze hovers And hoovers into holes Heed the Hymenoptera The ant is out Out and about And all its kith and kin...

Base Camp

I know this place This space, my landing After that familiar fall Towards the silence Of my enduring cell I’ve been here before Closed and still...

Leap of Faith

Faith is over At this junction he decides Remembers what it feels To be a man Strong with free will Now bloodied on the outside And inside filled...
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Nothing's Happening

Nothing’s happening Just a lone traffic light Tall and dark Perhaps tired of standing. Pesky orange cones Stand in line Teasing said traffic light...

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92 of my comments have received 97 Great Feedback votes

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I enjoyed this unique take on

Posted on Wed, 23 Aug 2017

I enjoyed this unique take on choices. My bedtime reading; I hope Columbo doesn't make it into my dream.

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Posted in One More Things

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Unusual poem, it works really

Posted on Wed, 02 Aug 2017

Unusual poem, it works really well. As an admirer of moss I think you have done it justice, really love, 'moist micro city'. Moss is much underrated, close up, in the sunlight it's really beautiful. 

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Posted in Moss

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The letter was such a

Posted on Tue, 25 Jul 2017

The letter was such a different animal to the modern forms of communication. You've described here so well the processes and pitfalls as well as the artfulness of letter writing Rhiannon.

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Posted in Tangled Threads

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So true, where will the

Posted on Sun, 23 Jul 2017

So true, where will the upgrading end? Everytime i watch the Olympics, especially the gymnastics I wonder how high will they jump in another four years, how many spins? I am also for degrading, possibly devolving too, back in the caves, grunting...

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Posted in I’m not upgrading

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Was that a true story? Not

Posted on Thu, 13 Jul 2017

Was that a true story? Not predictable and very engaging. As above, come back with more strange tales...

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Posted in What happens near Rome

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Love this, especially the

Posted on Thu, 06 Jul 2017

Love this, especially the woman with the parking ticket. Made me feel a bit jealous of the person in the poem(you?); I could really do with being 'all but free' and a big thunderstorm would be lovely.

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Posted in Tail-end

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The challenges underfoot make

Posted on Mon, 03 Jul 2017

The challenges underfoot make the process all the more satisfying . Love the idea of bracken as cladding and the anticipation your words build of of the view over the other side.

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Posted in Mynydd Troed

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Thanks ice rivers, I think I

Posted on Fri, 30 Jun 2017

Thanks ice rivers, I think I needed that broken down for me today; feeling very muddy.

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Posted in Humans Being Tense

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Lovely description of bird

Posted on Sat, 24 Jun 2017

Lovely description of bird song, it really is invigorating isn't it.

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Posted in Evening Song

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I thoroughly enjoyed this, it

Posted on Tue, 30 May 2017

I thoroughly enjoyed this, it's so intimate but of course not sentimental. The part about your mum made me think a lot about myself, I must become more of a grown up! Well deserved story of the week.

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Posted in My Mother and I aren't Talking and Other Tales.

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