Jane Hyphen
Primary tabs
I have 199 stories published in
3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 146085 times
and 202 of my stories have been cherry picked.
144 of my 1,232 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 152 votes
My stories
Throwing Stones
‘You horrible lot will be working at Royal Ascot this summer.’ He looked at us as if we should feel honoured. A horrible lot, teenagers from...
- Read more about Throwing Stones
- 12 comments
- Log in to post comments
- 1047 reads
The Unsent Letter
I've been going through old untitled documents on my cloud and found this unsent letter to my next door neighbour whose noisy handy man (her little pet) polluted the air space with a very loud radio each weekend, drowning out the birds and other soothing sounds.
- Read more about The Unsent Letter
- 8 comments
- Log in to post comments
- 618 reads
Orange
Orange just doesn’t sit right with me Claiming to be both colour and fruit It can’t just choose one and it’s loud Too shouty, too few this colour...
- Read more about Orange
- 12 comments
- Log in to post comments
- 897 reads
Putting Things Off
I’ve been Putting things off Turning inward Turning in Shrinking my absorption Starving the point Just inhaling Listening to my Blood flowing I am...
- Read more about Putting Things Off
- 4 comments
- Log in to post comments
- 336 reads
The Three Fields of You
This fertile field to which we’re born In furrowed tilth for infant roots To dock and grow in loving loam You flourished in this sunny gaze With...
- Read more about The Three Fields of You
- 8 comments
- Log in to post comments
- 859 reads
It's a fail of a tale we
Posted on Sun, 17 Mar 2019
It's a fail of a tale we teach our kids. Bad deeds will be punished, if not in life then in hell, look around it's easy to tell, the few reap what the many broke their backs to sow with next to nothing there to show.
Read full commentPosted in The Three Fields of You
Get back in the cave, the
Posted on Wed, 06 Mar 2019
Get back in the cave, the flow of words is infinite and who know which spirit will be your next inspiration. I enjoy your writing syle, it's unique with touches of brilliance.
Read full commentPosted in Ray Coach In Cave
Thank you, it is shocking but
Posted on Tue, 12 Mar 2019
Thank you, it is shocking but having a site like this to go and writing friends is a great comfort...
Read full commentPosted in Last Week I Lost My Job (Rimus Dissolutas)
Wow, I like the way you have
Posted on Tue, 12 Mar 2019
Wow, I like the way you have described your human situation in horticultural terms. Move any established plant and for a good while it will be vulnerable in soil untrue.
Read full commentPosted in Roots
This is a lovely snapshot in
Posted on Fri, 08 Mar 2019
This is a lovely snapshot in time Rhiannon. I feel like people stretched their imaginations a little more back then and then was less shame in choosing something a bit different and making use of what you had.
Read full commentPosted in Gladys Aylward and Tenzing
Yes she did @Di_Hard and Rod
Posted on Sat, 02 Mar 2019
Yes she did @Di_Hard and Rod and Karen didn't know how to react because that's not their currency.
Read full commentPosted in The Love of the Loveless (Chapter 6) (3)
This is beautiful Jenny.
Posted on Sun, 03 Mar 2019
This is beautiful Jenny. There is a sense of nature being effortless yet it always trumps human creations. I love the idea of it all being at your back door, I'm the same, I really appreciate my little garden and as one thing fades there is...
Read full commentPosted in Precious Nature
I love it too, it's
Posted on Mon, 04 Mar 2019
I love it too, it's unconfined, perhaps you are a bird after all.
Read full commentPosted in Conversation of a Tree
A storm, however brief does
Posted on Thu, 14 Feb 2019
A storm, however brief does seem to bring with it a change of behaviour in our wildlife as well as the palpable change in atmosphere. This is a lovely tribute. I really enjoyed 'globules released from dark sky splashing.' We missed most of the...
Read full commentPosted in Embracing The Storm
I too love the arrangement
Posted on Tue, 12 Feb 2019
I too love the arrangement Rhiannon, it really works and of course the theme is perfect for February, the soil warming and those seeds about to burst unseen with so much in store.
Read full commentPosted in Seasons Connect
Pages