Jane Hyphen

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I have 258 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 287551 times and 284 of my stories have been cherry picked.
252 of my 1,635 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 271 votes

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Parables of Clippety (14) - The Bends

Marni locked her lips on him. First of all she sucked on his flesh, as hard as possible as if giving a love bite, then slowly she sunk her teeth in,...
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Parables of Clippety (13) - Suck My Blood

They struggled to keep up with him in their high heels and occasionally water splashed around their ankles but the idea of being left alone down...
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Parables of Clippety (12) - The Keys To The City

There was a moment of silence while Jurgen continued to lean back with his closed eyes, breathing slowly, his chest going up and down but as soon as...
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Parables of Clippety (11) - The Quarry

‘Okay, okay great! I’ll go and fetch it.’ Clare left the medical room with her heart racing. She was so worried that something would stand in her way...
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Parables of Clippety (10) - The Medical Room

Marni looked as if she were about to cry, she gathered up her handbag and stood up just as another Mexican wave swept across the stadium. She’d only...
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252 of my comments have received 271 Great Feedback votes

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I love the titles already.

Posted on Fri, 18 Mar 2022

I love the titles already. Selling, does that even happen anymore, unless it's a diet book? That's why we all have to go to work too. Your writing is always a curve ball, now you can limber up for bowling your next one or you could publish a best...

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Posted in Salad Day I Suppose

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Beautiful lines for the

Posted on Tue, 15 Mar 2022

Beautiful lines for the season Rhiannon. I haven't seen any celandines yet but lots of aconites out here with their little collars and of course all the primroses and daffodils blowing their trumpets, 'heralding the coming spring'. Perfect.

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Posted in Warm welcome

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Love this, so unique. In the

Posted on Fri, 11 Mar 2022

Love this, so unique. In the end there is always a new way to create but I can't help thinking of that ear, all half-pecked and covered in dirt.

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Posted in The Poet's Ear

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Thanks for the cherries

Posted on Sun, 27 Feb 2022

Thanks for the cherries Insert. Yes, I think I might be open to that. smiley

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Posted in Parables of Clippety (11) - The Quarry

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This is sweet and sour. I

Posted on Sun, 27 Feb 2022

This is sweet and sour. I enjoyed the descriptions of Cornwall here, so well done, especially the Hottentot Fig, once you learn that plant name, you never forget it. The energy and fearlessness of youth quickly expires but it sounds like your...

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Posted in Brief Moments To Imagine

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Wow, this is really sweet and

Posted on Wed, 23 Feb 2022

Wow, this is really sweet and touching. The lady in the photograph looks so happy. Music can be a medium for time travel. She must have so many wonderful memories.

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Posted in ‘Twinkle, twinkle … what?’@102

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Thanks for the cherries

Posted on Tue, 22 Feb 2022

Thanks for the cherries Insert. Unfortunately, the dust went everywhere, into orrfices, penetrating mucous membranes and causing a distortion of the status quo.

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Posted in Parables of Clippety (7) - Sniffer Dogs

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You've captured the violence

Posted on Mon, 21 Feb 2022

You've captured the violence of a storm, the cleansing effect and resulting sense of something changed, a new beginning, a metaphor for so much. I love 'winds whipping spume' and the solitary egret - creepy how they take off and silently fly. 

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Posted in A Tempest Off Portishead

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That brought back memories,

Posted on Thu, 10 Feb 2022

That brought back memories, my mum had that book, I remember looking through it, and I've got the Oxfam Vegetarian Cookbook. I enjoyed reading this. Rhea getting so much comfort from Ebay trawling and flicking through recipe books, maybe filling...

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Posted in The Cookbook

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This is beautiful Di_Hard.

Posted on Sun, 06 Feb 2022

This is beautiful Di_Hard. The drama of these stormy February days together with quieter aspects of nature hiding in the woods, 'jade lichen, acid bright moss'. Somehow you've captured the time of year perfectly. Wonderful poem, loved reading it...

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Posted in February Rainbow

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