Jane Hyphen

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I have 153 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 71940 times and 135 of my stories have been cherry picked.
69 of my 850 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 74 votes

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The Chattering Classes

‘Hello and welcome to tonight’s edition of The Chattering Classes, I’m Marina Fudge.’ ‘And I’m Tristram Trinkleblouter.’ ‘This evening we have a...
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Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part eleven)

Jack’s stomach churned, he struggled to eat breakfast, his appetite deadened by the familiar wriggling worms of anxiety and negativity. It was always...

Do You Remember The Old Orchard?

Do you remember the old orchard? The apple-dapple shade Among gnarly trees we grew June drops and carpets of leaves On littered floors we played...
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Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part ten)

Jack woke to find a warm, scraggy lump pushed up close to him, he reached out his hand and ran his fingers through Bristol’s coarse fur, the dog made...
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Lilliputian Visions

It was only very recently that I discovered that my vision, or rather what I actually saw, had a name, a title, it was a thing, something other...
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69 of my comments have received 74 Great Feedback votes

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I love this and so would Bee.

Posted on Wed, 08 Mar 2017

I love this and so would Bee. It's so hard for women when absolutely everything gets sexualised. Sadly I think it might be getting worse. Are we our own worst enemies? Occasionally but mostly we're not, just trying to survive and be all and...

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Posted in Boldly a Woman

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It sounds lovely, socialising

Posted on Wed, 23 Nov 2016

It sounds lovely, socialising, mature style, comforting and fun bar a few physical restraints. An interesting, beautiful poem.   

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Posted in The old Heifer and the Two old Bulls at Peace

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I never really thought about

Posted on Thu, 09 Jun 2016

I never really thought about how much history is in a millstone, what toil and how many lives nourished by the flour. Beautiful and interesting peom, very much enjoyed Rhiannon.

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Posted in Memorial

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Beautiful and sad. Yellow,

Posted on Thu, 26 May 2016

Beautiful and sad. Yellow, the colour of a glimpse of eternal hope. Thanks for bringing her writing to my attention, had a little look, she lives on in words. Sorry for your loss x

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Posted in Yellow for my daughter

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Crikey, is this a Suffolk

Posted on Wed, 25 Nov 2015

Crikey, is this a Suffolk thing, like pargeting? Very amusing. Bring back the park keeper I say, he'll sort them out with his rake.

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Posted in the shared park

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Love this, 'winter ending so

Posted on Fri, 20 Nov 2015

Love this, 'winter ending so soon'. I can imagine how he feels; New Year for breakfast, Easter for lunch, Christmas for dinner. Time can fly and drag all at the same time. I do hope that elderly lady was doing something nice in her garden - how...

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Posted in An Ill Wind

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Wow, do you work for Reading

Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2015

Wow, do you work for Reading Borough Council? This is brilliant, repellent, hilarious, well-written and the rest. Don't think I can eat dinner now though.

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Posted in my colleague

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Really enjoyable and

Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2015

Really enjoyable and uplifting Rhiannon, making sense of the gloom, my least favourite month but you made it more beautiful.

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Posted in November

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This is so beautiful, from a

Posted on Wed, 04 Nov 2015

This is so beautiful, from a place felt, breaks the lines which separate what we perceive as our reality from the rest.

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Posted in Nights Such as These

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Rhus typhina - Stag's Horn

Posted on Sat, 17 Oct 2015

Rhus typhina - Stag's Horn Sumach x

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Posted in October

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