Jane Hyphen

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I have 159 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 78568 times and 146 of my stories have been cherry picked.
78 of my 909 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 83 votes

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My Dreams are Safe (IP)

My dreams are safe Insured in all the Tinted buds of spring I’m reassured, I hear In every skylark’s trill The aria of my dreams The watercolour...
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Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part fifteen)

‘Every year seven pupil has a part to play in the Sandpool’s Christmas play, yes, that’s every single one of you, no excuses, no exceptions.’ There...
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Orphan Lamb

Who will save the orphan lamb? Shivered bleats, wet crease Skinny back, mucus neck Coated shine, ewe’s juice Pleads just like a baby In a stubbly...
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Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part fourteen)

‘Got a telly,’ Dad said as if it were something exciting and new. He grabbed the remote control, pointed it at a small screen in the corner of the...
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Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part thirteen)

It had been a few weeks since Jack had last seen Kayla. That was the strange thing, he’d gone from never seeing her before to seeing her everywhere...

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78 of my comments have received 83 Great Feedback votes

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Was that a true story? Not

Posted on Thu, 13 Jul 2017

Was that a true story? Not predictable and very engaging. As above, come back with more strange tales...

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Posted in What happens near Rome

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Love this, especially the

Posted on Thu, 06 Jul 2017

Love this, especially the woman with the parking ticket. Made me feel a bit jealous of the person in the poem(you?); I could really do with being 'all but free' and a big thunderstorm would be lovely.

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Posted in Tail-end

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The challenges underfoot make

Posted on Mon, 03 Jul 2017

The challenges underfoot make the process all the more satisfying . Love the idea of bracken as cladding and the anticipation your words build of of the view over the other side.

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Posted in Mynydd Troed

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Thanks ice rivers, I think I

Posted on Fri, 30 Jun 2017

Thanks ice rivers, I think I needed that broken down for me today; feeling very muddy.

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Posted in Humans Being Tense

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Lovely description of bird

Posted on Sat, 24 Jun 2017

Lovely description of bird song, it really is invigorating isn't it.

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Posted in Evening Song

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I thoroughly enjoyed this, it

Posted on Tue, 30 May 2017

I thoroughly enjoyed this, it's so intimate but of course not sentimental. The part about your mum made me think a lot about myself, I must become more of a grown up! Well deserved story of the week.

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Posted in My Mother and I aren't Talking and Other Tales.

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Very interesting Ice Rivers,

Posted on Sat, 20 May 2017

Very interesting Ice Rivers, I'm a worrier too, all of what you say here is true, I just can't stop imagining the worst case scenarios...p.s I know a grown man with Alfred's exact facial features.

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Posted in To Fear Fear and Worry is Madness

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I love this sort of surreal

Posted on Fri, 12 May 2017

I love this sort of surreal thing and you've done it really well, very funny and entertaining.

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Posted in Larry and Mick and the Niftily Deflected Insult

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Love the contrast in this

Posted on Wed, 26 Apr 2017

Love the contrast in this Rhiannon, your descriptions are so evocative. A rough sea is so entertaining, from a safe distance, I loved 'sparks high the billowed spray'. A calm sea is inviting. Your piece makes me makes me miss the sea 

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Posted in Ocean

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I love this and so would Bee.

Posted on Wed, 08 Mar 2017

I love this and so would Bee. It's so hard for women when absolutely everything gets sexualised. Sadly I think it might be getting worse. Are we our own worst enemies? Occasionally but mostly we're not, just trying to survive and be all and...

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Posted in Boldly a Woman

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