Jane Hyphen

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I have 396 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
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Parcel for You - Part 48

The door flung open and a cold blast of air hit Vanessa’s face. The wind sucked at the partially closed blind and it creased up against the window...
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Parcel for You - Part 47

Both women gasped at the same time. There was something shocking and terrifying about seeing him standing there silently, having got up all by...
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Parcel for You - Part 46

‘Thanks for the coffee, Spencer. Do you think you could bring the gin and tonic in here too, and some ice?’ Spencer gave Pat a lingering look. ‘Yes I...
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Parcel for You - Part 45

Vanessa sort of zoned out over dinner, it was almost impossible not to. The opening details of the story had been intriguing but they were soon into...
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Planet Secret Santa

‘Well I know who this is from because it’s not wrapped up!’ ‘Oh, looks posh,’ said Mercury, ‘what exactly is that?’ ‘It’s face powder,’ said Mars. ‘...

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515 of my comments have received 544 Great Feedback votes

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Ew gosh, Jenny, you've

Posted on Fri, 25 Apr 2025

Ew gosh, Jenny, you've relayed the terror, the stark contrast between feeling fully relaxed, off guard, enjoying a sunny day of adventure with your friends to suddenly feeling under threat from a predator. It's a sickening feeling that...

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Posted in More Than We Bargained For

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Royalty among trees, they

Posted on Sat, 12 Apr 2025

Royalty among trees, they always make the rest look transient and they certainly have dignity, watching in silence as the world flits around them. It makes you wonder if there must be something like a soul inside them absorbing these experiences...

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Posted in Mighty Ancient Oak

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Hi Turlough, thanks for

Posted on Thu, 03 Apr 2025

Hi Turlough, thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment. As free as the untamed creatures, yes, my motto is you should aways keep a small portion of yourself feral, of course this can express itself in many different ways. 

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Posted in The Young Man

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Thank you celticman. I've

Posted on Thu, 03 Apr 2025

Thank you celticman. I've been feeling really sad about a couple of young men who went missing near to where I live. Both were found dead. It's unbelievably tragic and indicative of the challenges our youngsters are facing.

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Posted in The Young Man

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Hi Jenny, earth and sky

Posted on Sun, 23 Mar 2025

Hi Jenny, earth and sky connected through rain. I never thought of it like this, the constant cycle of drawing up and then replenishing us. It's so forgiving. Thrive in radiance, they do after a good soaking. I think we need it right now. A...

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Posted in Rain

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A song to hold you in time,

Posted on Wed, 19 Mar 2025

A song to hold you in time, Penny and keep the memories alive, those feelings that stirred all those years ago are still there, you just need a channel to take you back, a song or a scent. It must be both comforting and painful. I hope you are...

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Posted in "Music takes me there again..."

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This is one of my worst

Posted on Tue, 04 Mar 2025

This is one of my worst nightmares. Everyone always says, they won't hurt you..You've managed to capture the banality of extreme misfortune, a macabre event in a beautiful pastoral setting. There's no negotiating with those beasts.

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Posted in Killed By Cows

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This is very stirring, like a

Posted on Tue, 25 Feb 2025

This is very stirring, like a peice of music. I felt almost dizzy reading the words and thinking of those gigantic planets and the associated elements. Wordless companion, you bring them alive beyond the science of dry facts.

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Posted in Pluto’s Ode To Charon

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Marmite on toast isn't for me

Posted on Sat, 01 Mar 2025

Marmite on toast isn't for me, Rhiannon but I might try a nip in a soup or stew, that's a good idea. I wish I did like it on bread because it's a very useful product. Recently I've got a thing for Horlicks and that seems to divide people too,...

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Posted in Love it or hate it … ?

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This is a wonderful poem,

Posted on Fri, 28 Feb 2025

This is a wonderful poem, Jenny, very elegant just like its subject. 

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Posted in Skating Without Ice

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