Jane Hyphen

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Cherry

Phantoms

Phantoms, that’s all we ever were, Vapour trails melding in the rush hour. The same shades of green flicker past And morse code blinks winter sun...
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Cherry

Happy Mother's Day

Mother of dragons The cat’s mother The martyr who reminds Us how it was so much harder The numb mother numbering The days from when it started And...
Cherry

Strange Beings in Strange Times

Something changed. People crawled out from under rocks, Wiped the moss from their heads And headed out alone or in choleric pairs, To where they...
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Cherry

Imagine if we Didn't Feel Pain

Imagine if we felt no pain No stinging thorn to dock us To the margins of our term Or cuspate pin to hold us Down upon this sober ground We’d be...
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Gold cherry

Ode to Compost

On black frosty nights, hands clutch eggshells: On precarious paths, clear goop strings do drip, Down wrists withheld slimed bags of precious peel...
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187 of my comments have received 197 Great Feedback votes

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Beautiful Rhiannon. Your

Posted on Mon, 08 Jun 2020

Beautiful Rhiannon. Your poems are always so visual and full of texture, I can see those crops swaying, 'swells rippling' and aren't they so early this year. Walking around it feels as if we are a month ahead or more. 

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Posted in Dream with the breeze

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It does feel like there is a

Posted on Fri, 29 May 2020

It does feel like there is a magical spell on all the land doesn't it. This weather has made everything look more like July than May and we are all slowing down but we probably needed to.

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Posted in Here Comes The Sun

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It's just really nice to see

Posted on Fri, 01 May 2020

It's just really nice to see another face coming along the road. I always try to be the one who crosses or steps out into the road but my whippets often cause me to have some delay (they always embarrass me or me them) so the other people beat me...

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Posted in Friendly Separation

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I love this, it's like a full

Posted on Tue, 28 Apr 2020

I love this, it's like a full literary meal of a poem. I particularly enjoyed your description of fallen cherry petals, 'wind-lipped , pale and panpipe soft, there could be no better way of describing them. Every line is reminiscent of the walks...

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Posted in 28th April

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I love this, it's so classy

Posted on Fri, 17 Apr 2020

I love this, it's so classy and clean. 'Sunless pauses' and 'blind cave fish'. It's lovely to read and pure quality.

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Posted in The Biology of Caves

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Stay safe, follow your gut

Posted on Wed, 01 Apr 2020

Stay safe, follow your gut and put yourself first. Managers might seem important but if you left your workplace they would forget your name after a few weeks. Best wishes.

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Posted in Choices.

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Hi Di_Hard, yes Airy and I

Posted on Tue, 31 Mar 2020

Hi Di_Hard, yes Airy and I are both bringing ghosts into our social circle in the absence of flesh and blood humans.

There are many interesting facts about hedges, for example sparrows won't frequent a hedge if it has a fence on one side....

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Posted in How Long Can You Stew For, Before You Fall Apart? (2)

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Who needs god when you have

Posted on Tue, 31 Mar 2020

Who needs god when you have the Too Ticky. Big fan of the Moomins and trees so this is right up my street. I'm kind of jealous, I want to find my own Moomin tree. Perhaps when the lady of the cold goes away I can find some new tree friend. So...

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Posted in The Moomin Tree

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This is very magical and

Posted on Mon, 30 Mar 2020

This is very magical and light, I like the atmosphere. The distrust combined with the playful and it's true that we adapt so quickly to the unthinkable, frighteningly quickly in fact. Or maybe it was all unthinkable before but we were just too...

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Posted in Whispers

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Beautiful aren't they

Posted on Mon, 30 Mar 2020

Beautiful aren't they Rhiannon and strangely waxy too as you describe.  There are a few examples of Soulangeana in my area looking their best right now, I admire them on my singular outing of the day and they significantly improve the quality of...

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Posted in Signs of Spring 5)

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