Jane Hyphen

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I have 266 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 324040 times and 298 of my stories have been cherry picked.
267 of my 1,687 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 288 votes

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Legend of the Pah - 6 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)

Right now it didn’t matter that he was growing older. The very act of starting up his old motor and taking it out felt rebellious and liberating, he...
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Jai

The early hours of the morning were a magic time, he felt, when most people exist in another realm, sleeping and oblivious. The world was an empty...
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Legend of the Pah - 5 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)

‘A parcel came for you,’ Lynne said dryly without looking up from her laptop. ‘Ah good, yes the new car battery for my old Audi.’ She glared at him...
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Pet Sounds

Do you ever hear somebody call your name in your sleep? ‘Catherine,’ I heard it loud and clear and it played back in my head as I awoke, in fact I...
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Legend of the Pah - 4 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)

Alistair returned to the garage, he was feeling out of control, desperate and in this reckless condition, he got inside the Audi awkwardly, scraping...
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267 of my comments have received 288 Great Feedback votes

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This really got into my head

Posted on Tue, 17 May 2022

This really got into my head Rhiannon. As I read, I could really imagine lying there, confined but still living through all the sounds from the open window. Reminded me of being a small child and sent to bed in summer when I wasn't at all sleepy...

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Posted in Illumination leaking in …

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I enjoyed this, you've set

Posted on Fri, 13 May 2022

I enjoyed this, you've set things out very clearly like a great teacher. I decided not to read or write for the past few days because I felt overwhelmed and the earth's spinning made me feel sick and dizzy but reading this has reset my spinacles...

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Posted in Word

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Love this, surreal and dreamy

Posted on Tue, 10 May 2022

Love this, surreal and dreamy. Really enjoyed, thank you for sharing.

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Posted in The Dead Want Their Moon Back

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A clever and interesting poem

Posted on Fri, 06 May 2022

A clever and interesting poem Di. There's so many directions you can go in with a chrysalis, it's such a shocking peice of engineering and a shocking process for the creature involved but somehow it survives all that change. I enjoyed the uplift...

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Posted in wheels to rotors

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It is sad that they interbred

Posted on Mon, 09 May 2022

It is sad that they interbred, the English ones being so much more delicate. A lovely tribute to a beautiful sight. We are so lucky if we can get out and see these gems in the natural world because they are free and better than man-made...

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Posted in The wonderful wild bells!

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It's the ones you write the

Posted on Mon, 09 May 2022

It's the ones you write the fastest because you'e writing from the heart. Really interesting read, you must have been a bright student to go off and do English Studies at university. The stint of temping no doubt helped to give you a grounding in...

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Posted in Ray's Memories age 19

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Making me feel a bit queasy,

Posted on Fri, 29 Apr 2022

Making me feel a bit queasy, unwashed men, meatballs and sleazy hook-up apps, perhaps I'm just a bit delicate. That Dave is a bit of a freeloader. Uggly Puggly's random release back into the community sounds typical of the random and inconsistent...

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Posted in Ugly Puggly 16

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IIt's amazing how you have

Posted on Fri, 29 Apr 2022

IIt's amazing how you have written this in the very shape of the plant. Really enjoyed this tribute to a sticky, funny little plant.

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Posted in Sticky Wullie

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Reading this is akin to a

Posted on Sat, 30 Apr 2022

Reading this is akin to a butterfly kiss. I love how the length echoes the length of a butterflies visit and 'soft as forgetting' is genius. They are magical little creatures.

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Posted in butterfly moment

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'the pumpkin with bad hair',

Posted on Sat, 23 Apr 2022

'the pumpkin with bad hair', that's a common look since Donald Trump made fake tan mainstream. I also really enjoyed the pub scene, a thing of the past now. And the enduring school bully, acting like a respectable member of the community, shifty...

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Posted in Ugly Puggly 10

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