Jane Hyphen
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Parcel for you - Part 53
‘Okay Mum. I’ll sort it in a minute.’ ‘And some bus fare for these two. I had to pay for them, two pounds thirty each, cobble together the change.’ ‘...
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Parcel for you - Part 52
It was inevitable really wasn’t it, Vanessa thought as she logged off from work. She’d spent the afternoon in a haze of confusion, working through...
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The Garden, that was my domain
The garden, that was my domain It’s where I framed my worst paintings Held my rival’s head beneath the soil Until his gist went limp And hid inside a...
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Parcel for You - Part 51
Maybe he’s just better off without me, she thought as she drove back towards home, knowing in her gut that Spencer would not be by the front door...
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Already a Demon
It’s the demon drink But he was already a demon I think Five years dry now, so he says Flashing his postcards from the desert But it always looks too...
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Reading this, I can relate to
Posted on Thu, 22 May 2025
Reading this, I can relate to the conflicted emotions in regard to people who are desperate but may also prey upon you, rob you etc. Not much has changed over the centuries, Jenny. How lucky Emily is to have a family and money to spend.
Read full commentPosted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part Two
This is going to be very
Posted on Tue, 20 May 2025
This is going to be very interesting Jenny. Pure escapism from another era. I really like the descriptions of the house and objects from the time. A wealthy family who also care about those who struggle with less. Emily, a young lady with her...
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This is unique and startling,
Posted on Sat, 24 May 2025
This is unique and startling, frightening actually. I really enjoyed it. The way the museum is sleek and modern put me at ease initially and then everything bends and becomes distorted and personal.
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The ending was very
Posted on Sat, 17 May 2025
The ending was very unexpected and you left clever gaps for my own imagination to fill. The preachy guy was yearning to solve all the problems of the world but in the end he was satisfied with some Italian food.
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Thank you Turlough. I'm not
Posted on Tue, 06 May 2025
Thank you Turlough. I'm not sure if I'll publish it but please don't eat your hat, there's far too much fibre in a sombrero for one stomach.
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for You - Part 61 (the end)
This is wonderful, Jenny.
Posted on Thu, 01 May 2025
This is wonderful, Jenny. Well deserved pick of the day and poem of the week! The idea of a crumbling folly drowning in foliage yet also supported by it and you've encapsulated the romance and free flowing nature of these period garden features...
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Thank you so much, Paul.
Posted on Thu, 01 May 2025
Thank you so much, Paul. There is an etiquette to picking, and like many manual jobs it is undervalued and classified as unskilled work. Getting so close to so many tulips surprised me too, there was something sinister growing there with them, I'...
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Ew gosh, Jenny, you've
Posted on Fri, 25 Apr 2025
Ew gosh, Jenny, you've relayed the terror, the stark contrast between feeling fully relaxed, off guard, enjoying a sunny day of adventure with your friends to suddenly feeling under threat from a predator. It's a sickening feeling that...
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Royalty among trees, they
Posted on Sat, 12 Apr 2025
Royalty among trees, they always make the rest look transient and they certainly have dignity, watching in silence as the world flits around them. It makes you wonder if there must be something like a soul inside them absorbing these experiences...
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Hi Turlough, thanks for
Posted on Thu, 03 Apr 2025
Hi Turlough, thanks for reading and taking the time to leave a comment. As free as the untamed creatures, yes, my motto is you should aways keep a small portion of yourself feral, of course this can express itself in many different ways.
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