Jane Hyphen

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I have 179 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 102751 times and 179 of my stories have been cherry picked.
114 of my 1,103 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 120 votes

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Teeth

Teeth, pale stones planted deep In pits of fleshy pink, glistening Within the black hole, the orifice Of sustenance, speech and breath Blankets of...
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Ant

The sun is shining Hot air builds Heat haze hovers And hoovers into holes Heed the Hymenoptera The ant is out Out and about And all its kith and kin...

Base Camp

I know this place This space, my landing After that familiar fall Towards the silence Of my enduring cell I’ve been here before Closed and still...

Leap of Faith

Faith is over At this junction he decides Remembers what it feels To be a man Strong with free will Now bloodied on the outside And inside filled...
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Nothing's Happening

Nothing’s happening Just a lone traffic light Tall and dark Perhaps tired of standing. Pesky orange cones Stand in line Teasing said traffic light...

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114 of my comments have received 120 Great Feedback votes

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This was a really interesting

Posted on Sun, 20 Aug 2017

This was a really interesting read and refreshing. I spent some time living in Devon and I must say my heart broke a little when I left. When is something as unspeakable as the holocaust and other horrific war incidents truly dealt with? As long...

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Posted in Outcomes of my Dad's recent Funeral in London

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I enjoyed this unique take on

Posted on Wed, 23 Aug 2017

I enjoyed this unique take on choices. My bedtime reading; I hope Columbo doesn't make it into my dream.

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Posted in One More Things

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Unusual poem, it works really

Posted on Wed, 02 Aug 2017

Unusual poem, it works really well. As an admirer of moss I think you have done it justice, really love, 'moist micro city'. Moss is much underrated, close up, in the sunlight it's really beautiful. 

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Posted in Moss

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The letter was such a

Posted on Tue, 25 Jul 2017

The letter was such a different animal to the modern forms of communication. You've described here so well the processes and pitfalls as well as the artfulness of letter writing Rhiannon.

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Posted in Tangled Threads

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So true, where will the

Posted on Sun, 23 Jul 2017

So true, where will the upgrading end? Everytime i watch the Olympics, especially the gymnastics I wonder how high will they jump in another four years, how many spins? I am also for degrading, possibly devolving too, back in the caves, grunting...

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Posted in I’m not upgrading

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Was that a true story? Not

Posted on Thu, 13 Jul 2017

Was that a true story? Not predictable and very engaging. As above, come back with more strange tales...

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Posted in What happens near Rome

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Love this, especially the

Posted on Thu, 06 Jul 2017

Love this, especially the woman with the parking ticket. Made me feel a bit jealous of the person in the poem(you?); I could really do with being 'all but free' and a big thunderstorm would be lovely.

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Posted in Tail-end

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Crikey, that made me laugh, a

Posted on Wed, 21 Jun 2017

Crikey, that made me laugh, a lot. 'Whack for ma Daddio,' All forgotten, face full of dirt. Reminded me of when I buried a lifeless pet goldish and as I was covering it with soil, it flipped and said, 'The game's up asshole pet owner!' It was...

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Posted in Daddio Returns

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The challenges underfoot make

Posted on Mon, 03 Jul 2017

The challenges underfoot make the process all the more satisfying . Love the idea of bracken as cladding and the anticipation your words build of of the view over the other side.

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Posted in Mynydd Troed

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Thanks ice rivers, I think I

Posted on Fri, 30 Jun 2017

Thanks ice rivers, I think I needed that broken down for me today; feeling very muddy.

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Posted in Humans Being Tense

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