Jane Hyphen

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I have 169 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 86019 times and 160 of my stories have been cherry picked.
94 of my 1,011 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 99 votes

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Cherry

Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part twelve)

It had seemed to Jack that the first half term of secondary school had passed by with a feeling that all was fresh and uncharted, he himself felt...
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The Chattering Classes

‘Hello and welcome to tonight’s edition of The Chattering Classes, I’m Marina Fudge.’ ‘And I’m Tristram Trinkleblouter.’ ‘This evening we have a...
Cherry

Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part eleven)

Jack’s stomach churned, he struggled to eat breakfast, his appetite deadened by the familiar wriggling worms of anxiety and negativity. It was always...

Do You Remember The Old Orchard?

Do you remember the old orchard? The apple-dapple shade Among gnarly trees we grew June drops and carpets of leaves On littered floors we played...
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Story of the week

Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part ten)

Jack woke to find a warm, scraggy lump pushed up close to him, he reached out his hand and ran his fingers through Bristol’s coarse fur, the dog made...

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94 of my comments have received 99 Great Feedback votes

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Love this, 'winter ending so

Posted on Fri, 20 Nov 2015

Love this, 'winter ending so soon'. I can imagine how he feels; New Year for breakfast, Easter for lunch, Christmas for dinner. Time can fly and drag all at the same time. I do hope that elderly lady was doing something nice in her garden - how...

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Posted in An Ill Wind

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Wow, do you work for Reading

Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2015

Wow, do you work for Reading Borough Council? This is brilliant, repellent, hilarious, well-written and the rest. Don't think I can eat dinner now though.

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Posted in my colleague

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Really enjoyable and

Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2015

Really enjoyable and uplifting Rhiannon, making sense of the gloom, my least favourite month but you made it more beautiful.

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Posted in November

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This is so beautiful, from a

Posted on Wed, 04 Nov 2015

This is so beautiful, from a place felt, breaks the lines which separate what we perceive as our reality from the rest.

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Posted in Nights Such as These

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Rhus typhina - Stag's Horn

Posted on Sat, 17 Oct 2015

Rhus typhina - Stag's Horn Sumach x

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Posted in October

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This is so dreamy and

Posted on Sun, 11 Oct 2015

This is so dreamy and atmospheric, I thought maybe the character was trapped inside a dream at first (it used to happen to me and I'd think, 'why do I always come here?') Love the description of him coming round, not rushed, just right. I learned...

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Posted in My Problem with Peyote

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Really enjoyed. Jeremy has

Posted on Sat, 26 Sep 2015

Really enjoyed. Jeremy has grown on me ever since I took the time to hear the man speak! It's difficult to see him through all the flames - I think you nailed it.

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Posted in For the love of Jeremy Corbyn

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Some people are able to write

Posted on Tue, 23 Jun 2015

Some people are able to write poems which massage the brain. This is one of them Terry. The title put me off and I didn't think I'd enjoy it but I really did. It made me salivate and my brain is refreshed, ready to see beauty in the world again...

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Posted in Isolde - If Only You'd Be Mine

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What a sweet tribute to your

Posted on Tue, 16 Jun 2015

What a sweet tribute to your mother, she looks lovely in the photo by the way. Recently I have been remembering lots of little things about my dad who died eight years ago, they come back to me like small subconsious gifts. Memories of your...

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Posted in I Still Miss You Terribly

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Love this - a situation joins

Posted on Mon, 11 May 2015

Love this - a situation joins up blithely into something more complete than it could have been. 

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Posted in For the Love of Her

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