Jane Hyphen
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My stories
Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part twelve)
It had seemed to Jack that the first half term of secondary school had passed by with a feeling that all was fresh and uncharted, he himself felt...
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The Chattering Classes
‘Hello and welcome to tonight’s edition of The Chattering Classes, I’m Marina Fudge.’ ‘And I’m Tristram Trinkleblouter.’ ‘This evening we have a...
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Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part eleven)
Jack’s stomach churned, he struggled to eat breakfast, his appetite deadened by the familiar wriggling worms of anxiety and negativity. It was always...
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Do You Remember The Old Orchard?
Do you remember the old orchard? The apple-dapple shade Among gnarly trees we grew June drops and carpets of leaves On littered floors we played...
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Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part ten)
Jack woke to find a warm, scraggy lump pushed up close to him, he reached out his hand and ran his fingers through Bristol’s coarse fur, the dog made...
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Love this, 'winter ending so
Posted on Fri, 20 Nov 2015
Love this, 'winter ending so soon'. I can imagine how he feels; New Year for breakfast, Easter for lunch, Christmas for dinner. Time can fly and drag all at the same time. I do hope that elderly lady was doing something nice in her garden - how...
Read full commentPosted in An Ill Wind
Wow, do you work for Reading
Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2015
Wow, do you work for Reading Borough Council? This is brilliant, repellent, hilarious, well-written and the rest. Don't think I can eat dinner now though.
Read full commentPosted in my colleague
Really enjoyable and
Posted on Tue, 17 Nov 2015
Really enjoyable and uplifting Rhiannon, making sense of the gloom, my least favourite month but you made it more beautiful.
Read full commentPosted in November
This is so beautiful, from a
Posted on Wed, 04 Nov 2015
This is so beautiful, from a place felt, breaks the lines which separate what we perceive as our reality from the rest.
Read full commentPosted in Nights Such as These
Rhus typhina - Stag's Horn
Posted on Sat, 17 Oct 2015
Rhus typhina - Stag's Horn Sumach x
Read full commentPosted in October
This is so dreamy and
Posted on Sun, 11 Oct 2015
This is so dreamy and atmospheric, I thought maybe the character was trapped inside a dream at first (it used to happen to me and I'd think, 'why do I always come here?') Love the description of him coming round, not rushed, just right. I learned...
Read full commentPosted in My Problem with Peyote
Really enjoyed. Jeremy has
Posted on Sat, 26 Sep 2015
Really enjoyed. Jeremy has grown on me ever since I took the time to hear the man speak! It's difficult to see him through all the flames - I think you nailed it.
Read full commentPosted in For the love of Jeremy Corbyn
Some people are able to write
Posted on Tue, 23 Jun 2015
Some people are able to write poems which massage the brain. This is one of them Terry. The title put me off and I didn't think I'd enjoy it but I really did. It made me salivate and my brain is refreshed, ready to see beauty in the world again...
Read full commentPosted in Isolde - If Only You'd Be Mine
What a sweet tribute to your
Posted on Tue, 16 Jun 2015
What a sweet tribute to your mother, she looks lovely in the photo by the way. Recently I have been remembering lots of little things about my dad who died eight years ago, they come back to me like small subconsious gifts. Memories of your...
Read full commentPosted in I Still Miss You Terribly
Love this - a situation joins
Posted on Mon, 11 May 2015
Love this - a situation joins up blithely into something more complete than it could have been.
Read full commentPosted in For the Love of Her
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