Jane Hyphen
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Parcel for you - Part 56
‘Thank you Cedric,’ Vanessa said through gritted teeth, ‘you really don’t have to do any more tidying. Go and relax for a bit.’ He ignored her...
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Familiar Faces
She hadn’t lived there for very long, just over a year and it was all so different to what she’d known. It was a new beginning. A glistening...
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Parcel for you - Part 55
‘You have to give him his freedom, Mum, so he can develop as a sentient being. I really think we, as a family, are pioneers of this new technology...
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Parcel for you - Part 54
‘Put him on his charger for a bit then, he looks tired.’ ‘He cannot look tired, that isn’t possible, his face never changes. He’s fine Vanessa. I...
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Nicola's Privilege
Her parents were rich enough to send her to any school but keen to peddle an image of themselves as normal, down to earth folk, they decided that the...
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Ha ha, at least he could grow
Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025
Ha ha, at least he could grow another leg if he needed too. Thanks for ready, airyfairy.
Read full commentPosted in The Irritating Gentleman (part two)
Thank you w.w.j.abercrombie.
Posted on Fri, 04 Jul 2025
Thank you w.w.j.abercrombie. I need to tighten it up a little. I really appreciate your feedback.
Read full commentPosted in The Vale - Part 1 (c)
Thank you Drew for you
Posted on Fri, 04 Jul 2025
Thank you Drew for you attention to detail. You're right he would have noticed the food smell. I will go through it again. I appreciate your feedback.
Read full commentPosted in The Vale - Part 1 (c)
Thank you Di, he feels like
Posted on Fri, 04 Jul 2025
Thank you Di, he feels like an imposter in his life. Lots of elements together, good to know it still made sense to you, the reader.
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Thank you, Di and thanks for
Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2025
Thank you, Di and thanks for the cherries. Grief is different with an animal, it's more instantly accessible and I think it taps into unresolved grief from the past.
Read full commentPosted in This Sad Blister
There are so many details
Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2025
There are so many details here, a clear picture building and so atmospheric as others have said. That lonely feeling you experience as a child when you're scared but you know your parents will dismiss your fears. And the woods - I could feel the...
Read full commentPosted in Prophesy: The Immortal Witch (1)
I like how, instead of
Posted on Tue, 17 Jun 2025
I like how, instead of feeling sad and mourning the loss of physical strength, you have simply transferred your time to something else, equally pleasurable and creative. A garden can be enjoyed simply by passively being in it or even seeing it...
Read full commentPosted in When Time Has Elapsed
This put a smile on my face,
Posted on Wed, 11 Jun 2025
This put a smile on my face, despite the hardships and annoyances you seem to be enduring. I enjoyed the poem and the animal details alongside local highlights. We also have a few vacuum cleaners, I won't say how many, some are very old but I...
Read full commentPosted in Aura Urziceanu’s Lullaby Effect
Such a perfectly adapted
Posted on Thu, 12 Jun 2025
Such a perfectly adapted creature, fascinating. The perfection of our natural world makes you wonder about lots of things.
Read full commentPosted in Designed to catch water
I love this. A hard working
Posted on Sat, 07 Jun 2025
I love this. A hard working capable employee. Your brain requires a different sort of discipline to cope with mundane tasks and do them well, day after day. It's sort of meditation. Remy growing his hair is sort of iconic, he keeps the rest of...
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