Jane Hyphen

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Legend of the Pah - 8 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)

Cece Hughes Cece Hughes was what you might refer to as well preserved. At a distance she could have passed for somebody half her age, even close up...
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You learn about the sunshine

First you learn about the sunshine Long, blue sky days Beneath the boughs of trees Leaves flickering, lambent The sun is ever loyal It burns in...
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S T Vasectomy Clinic - 7

'Is everything okay?' ‘Yes,’ he nodded, ‘I just had a…..dream that’s all.’ ‘By the way Solo has been sick in the night, there’s bright yellow bile on...
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The Clappers

When it comes to school productions, there is usually a mixture of emotions; pride, embarrassment, pressure, discomfort, excitement and then there’s...
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You Looked Like You Had Lost

At low tide, the stillest sleep, and the vastness of this beach exposed. Memories littered, stories, half buried. I think that’s when I saw your eyes...
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267 of my comments have received 288 Great Feedback votes

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Brilliant again. Appalling,

Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2022

Brilliant again. Appalling, mundane, absurd, funny, horrifying and wonderfully written.

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Posted in Alabaster Conjugal 3.

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I've always that thought that

Posted on Tue, 07 Jun 2022

I've always that thought that the skeleton of a dead tree adds so much to the landscape and I like that you've paid tribute to it here with your wonderful Rhiannon. The contrast of the tree standing still among all the life and movement of the...

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I love the element of

Posted on Thu, 02 Jun 2022

I love the element of folklore in this; nature intertwined with adventure, constant peril, all driven by the froces which spring from childhood experiences.  The name Elowen is so beautiful.

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Posted in Leaving The Nest

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I think that story about

Posted on Tue, 31 May 2022

I think that story about marriage was in the Daily Mail. All I can say is that I've been with my partner for over thrity years, we have two children, we're not married and our children have had a very stable family life, no splits or affairs,...

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You've made so many valid

Posted on Tue, 31 May 2022

You've made so many valid points here Di. Some are pushing nuclear energy as if it's a risk-free, magic bullet to the energy crisis.

Nuclear is not clean, the risks and long term effects are frightening. We all need to stop being so greedy...

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I like this poem, it speaks

Posted on Sun, 29 May 2022

I like this poem, it speaks of the coiled spring like energy that lives inside all horses, along with the need to be both loved and led. I particularly love the last line.

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Posted in Unreined

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Hi Jenny, they are like

Posted on Mon, 23 May 2022

Hi Jenny, they are like 'ghosts just passing by in silence'. They appear to inhabit another world, somewhere deep inside the night. I've noticed a lot of them around recently and if they're in the house, I go to great lengths to escort them out...

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Posted in Luna Moth

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You sold it to me until,

Posted on Sun, 22 May 2022

You sold it to me until, 'custard dripping from a dead deer's eye'. It sounds interesting and, not following the latest movie releases, I'd never heard of this film.

I fluctuate between thinking that men are responsible for all the evils...

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Posted in Men: A Nightmare

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That is really lovely lenchen

Posted on Fri, 20 May 2022

That is really lovely lenchen. I'd never heard it called Eve's Tears either. I love the name Eve, and Lilly of the Valley is a favourite flower and scent of mine so I will be calling it that name from now on. I have a tiny cluster of it from an...

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Posted in Eves' Tears

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One of my favourite tales

Posted on Sat, 14 May 2022

One of my favourite tales because everything about it is fascinating and mostly very plausible. I like your modern take and anything which keeps this story alive. You have succeded in maintaining the sinisterness of the original.

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Posted in An Eternal Debt (The Pied Piper of Hamlin)

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