Jane Hyphen

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I have 258 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 287580 times and 284 of my stories have been cherry picked.
252 of my 1,635 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 271 votes

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Legend of the Pah (4)

Alistair returned to the garage, he was feeling out of control, desperate and in this reckless condition, he got inside the Audi awkwardly, scraping...
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Cherry

Legend of the Pah (3)

‘What word?’ ‘Doesn’t matter. Robert won’t want it. A Ford Crapri! That’s what we always called them. Honestly Alistair, you’re so deluded, he’s not...
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The Legend of the Pah (2)

A wormhole, that was how Alistair thought of his beloved Audi Quattro because that’s how it seemed, like a hidden corridor into another universe. He...
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Cherry

The Legend of the Pah (1)

‘A vasectomy is the best gift a man can give to his wife…..Alistair, Alistair!’ ‘What?’ He said, without lifting his head. A spread of nails lay...
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The Wasted Wish

‘Go and shut up the chickens for the night, Mai, and when you get back your tea will be ready.’ Mai didn’t like shutting up the chickens by herself...
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252 of my comments have received 271 Great Feedback votes

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It's the ones you write the

Posted on Mon, 09 May 2022

It's the ones you write the fastest because you'e writing from the heart. Really interesting read, you must have been a bright student to go off and do English Studies at university. The stint of temping no doubt helped to give you a grounding in...

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Posted in Ray's Memories age 19

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Lasagna, how very suburban,

Posted on Thu, 05 May 2022

Lasagna, how very suburban, it was Stuffed Squid or bust, you loser. Another brilliant piece. The way you dip in and out of time is done so well.

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Posted in Alabaster Conjugal (Part 2)

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Making me feel a bit queasy,

Posted on Fri, 29 Apr 2022

Making me feel a bit queasy, unwashed men, meatballs and sleazy hook-up apps, perhaps I'm just a bit delicate. That Dave is a bit of a freeloader. Uggly Puggly's random release back into the community sounds typical of the random and inconsistent...

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Posted in Ugly Puggly 16

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I find your writing to be

Posted on Thu, 05 May 2022

I find your writing to be superb, this is no exception. Otherworldly and very enjoyable.

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Posted in Alabaster Conjugal (Part 1)

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IIt's amazing how you have

Posted on Fri, 29 Apr 2022

IIt's amazing how you have written this in the very shape of the plant. Really enjoyed this tribute to a sticky, funny little plant.

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Posted in Sticky Wullie

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Reading this is akin to a

Posted on Sat, 30 Apr 2022

Reading this is akin to a butterfly kiss. I love how the length echoes the length of a butterflies visit and 'soft as forgetting' is genius. They are magical little creatures.

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Posted in butterfly moment

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'the pumpkin with bad hair',

Posted on Sat, 23 Apr 2022

'the pumpkin with bad hair', that's a common look since Donald Trump made fake tan mainstream. I also really enjoyed the pub scene, a thing of the past now. And the enduring school bully, acting like a respectable member of the community, shifty...

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Posted in Ugly Puggly 10

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So much freedom demonstrated

Posted on Sun, 24 Apr 2022

So much freedom demonstrated here in your words Jenny. There is the part of us that gets old, tired and limited and then this side where anything is possible. 'Hitching a ride on ever changing winds', as long as we can do that, there's a reason...

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Posted in Fly Like An Eagle

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This is brilliant and it made

Posted on Wed, 20 Apr 2022

This is brilliant and it made me laugh a lot. Uggly Puggly and his weird mate/lover. I love UP's quirks and the way he is capable of anything, including having too much electricity.

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Posted in Ugly Puggly 7

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This is beautiful Di. The

Posted on Thu, 24 Mar 2022

This is beautiful Di. The bright yellow against a blue sky is a wonderful tribute. The way you've described the scent of gorse brought back memories for me, of being in Wales near a beach when my children were small and we couldn't get over how...

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Posted in Win

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