Jane Hyphen
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My stories
Teeth
Teeth, pale stones planted deep In pits of fleshy pink, glistening Within the black hole, the orifice Of sustenance, speech and breath Blankets of...
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Ant
The sun is shining Hot air builds Heat haze hovers And hoovers into holes Heed the Hymenoptera The ant is out Out and about And all its kith and kin...
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Base Camp
I know this place This space, my landing After that familiar fall Towards the silence Of my enduring cell I’ve been here before Closed and still...
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Leap of Faith
Faith is over At this junction he decides Remembers what it feels To be a man Strong with free will Now bloodied on the outside And inside filled...
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Nothing's Happening
Nothing’s happening Just a lone traffic light Tall and dark Perhaps tired of standing. Pesky orange cones Stand in line Teasing said traffic light...
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Ah I love this, brings back
Posted on Sat, 13 Jan 2018
Ah I love this, brings back the memories of being a cat owned fool so vividly. I still miss mine too much to entertain getting another. It's a quiet, calming (mostly) and unique kind of companionship which you've summed up beautifully here.
Read full commentPosted in finding peace
I love the way you've knitted
Posted on Tue, 09 Jan 2018
I love the way you've knitted all this together, old and new threads woven to create something beautiful, interesting, slightly psychodelic but altogether real. I will take some time to listen to the song.
Read full commentPosted in Afternoon Angel
Hi Di_Hard, I agree re wanton
Posted on Wed, 10 Jan 2018
Hi Di_Hard, I agree re wanton wastefulness, some people even buy a whole new set of decorations each year, pretty shocking isn't it. I like to have a real tree, it's like a little Christmas friend, something to get you through it when the family...
Read full commentPosted in Where do Christmas Trees go to Die?
This is invigorating Rhiannon
Posted on Mon, 09 Oct 2017
This is invigorating Rhiannon, cleansing, almost like the real thing..
Read full commentPosted in Nordy Bank Fort 5/10/17
I enjoyed this. Those
Posted on Sat, 09 Sep 2017
I enjoyed this. Those starlings though, it seems cruel doesn't it. As a human you just can't get away with gatoring, people always expect a smile and small talk. I really like your style of writing.
Read full commentPosted in Fuller Grasp of Filler
This was a really interesting
Posted on Sun, 20 Aug 2017
This was a really interesting read and refreshing. I spent some time living in Devon and I must say my heart broke a little when I left. When is something as unspeakable as the holocaust and other horrific war incidents truly dealt with? As long...
Read full commentPosted in Outcomes of my Dad's recent Funeral in London
I enjoyed this unique take on
Posted on Wed, 23 Aug 2017
I enjoyed this unique take on choices. My bedtime reading; I hope Columbo doesn't make it into my dream.
Read full commentPosted in One More Things
Unusual poem, it works really
Posted on Wed, 02 Aug 2017
Unusual poem, it works really well. As an admirer of moss I think you have done it justice, really love, 'moist micro city'. Moss is much underrated, close up, in the sunlight it's really beautiful.
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The letter was such a
Posted on Tue, 25 Jul 2017
The letter was such a different animal to the modern forms of communication. You've described here so well the processes and pitfalls as well as the artfulness of letter writing Rhiannon.
Read full commentPosted in Tangled Threads
So true, where will the
Posted on Sun, 23 Jul 2017
So true, where will the upgrading end? Everytime i watch the Olympics, especially the gymnastics I wonder how high will they jump in another four years, how many spins? I am also for degrading, possibly devolving too, back in the caves, grunting...
Read full commentPosted in I’m not upgrading
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