Jane Hyphen
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Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part fifteen)
‘Every year seven pupil has a part to play in the Sandpool’s Christmas play, yes, that’s every single one of you, no excuses, no exceptions.’ There...
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Orphan Lamb
Who will save the orphan lamb? Shivered bleats, wet crease Skinny back, mucus neck Coated shine, ewe’s juice Pleads just like a baby In a stubbly...
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Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part fourteen)
‘Got a telly,’ Dad said as if it were something exciting and new. He grabbed the remote control, pointed it at a small screen in the corner of the...
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Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part thirteen)
It had been a few weeks since Jack had last seen Kayla. That was the strange thing, he’d gone from never seeing her before to seeing her everywhere...
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Jack Mutant - Which Way is Down? (part twelve)
It had seemed to Jack that the first half term of secondary school had passed by with a feeling that all was fresh and uncharted, he himself felt...
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So true, where will the
Posted on Sun, 23 Jul 2017
So true, where will the upgrading end? Everytime i watch the Olympics, especially the gymnastics I wonder how high will they jump in another four years, how many spins? I am also for degrading, possibly devolving too, back in the caves, grunting...
Read full commentPosted in I’m not upgrading
Was that a true story? Not
Posted on Thu, 13 Jul 2017
Was that a true story? Not predictable and very engaging. As above, come back with more strange tales...
Read full commentPosted in What happens near Rome
Love this, especially the
Posted on Thu, 06 Jul 2017
Love this, especially the woman with the parking ticket. Made me feel a bit jealous of the person in the poem(you?); I could really do with being 'all but free' and a big thunderstorm would be lovely.
Read full commentPosted in Tail-end
The challenges underfoot make
Posted on Mon, 03 Jul 2017
The challenges underfoot make the process all the more satisfying . Love the idea of bracken as cladding and the anticipation your words build of of the view over the other side.
Read full commentPosted in Mynydd Troed
Thanks ice rivers, I think I
Posted on Fri, 30 Jun 2017
Thanks ice rivers, I think I needed that broken down for me today; feeling very muddy.
Read full commentPosted in Humans Being Tense
Lovely description of bird
Posted on Sat, 24 Jun 2017
Lovely description of bird song, it really is invigorating isn't it.
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I thoroughly enjoyed this, it
Posted on Tue, 30 May 2017
I thoroughly enjoyed this, it's so intimate but of course not sentimental. The part about your mum made me think a lot about myself, I must become more of a grown up! Well deserved story of the week.
Read full commentPosted in My Mother and I aren't Talking and Other Tales.
Very interesting Ice Rivers,
Posted on Sat, 20 May 2017
Very interesting Ice Rivers, I'm a worrier too, all of what you say here is true, I just can't stop imagining the worst case scenarios...p.s I know a grown man with Alfred's exact facial features.
Read full commentPosted in To Fear Fear and Worry is Madness
I love this sort of surreal
Posted on Fri, 12 May 2017
I love this sort of surreal thing and you've done it really well, very funny and entertaining.
Read full commentPosted in Larry and Mick and the Niftily Deflected Insult
Love the contrast in this
Posted on Wed, 26 Apr 2017
Love the contrast in this Rhiannon, your descriptions are so evocative. A rough sea is so entertaining, from a safe distance, I loved 'sparks high the billowed spray'. A calm sea is inviting. Your piece makes me makes me miss the sea
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