Jane Hyphen

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I have 209 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 231158 times and 220 of my stories have been cherry picked.
175 of my 1,320 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 185 votes

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Penelope is not your Friend

Penelope is not your friend Look deep in her eyes There’s a hair pin bend And a hellion blotch An open slit in the darkest spot To the sheerest drop...
Gold cherry

Crab Customs

Since there is nothing upon the horizon these days except for a vast plane, dusty and barren barring the odd amorous pigeon and a few clusters of...
Cherry

Locked

When I woke up from my nap, my stupor as I call it since the line between wakefulness and sleep had thinned to a hairline’s width, I noticed how...

How Long Can You Stew For, Before You Fall Apart? (3)

I love Joanne, sometimes she can be insightful and clever especially when it comes to people, she is intuitive and capable of picking apart people’s...
Cherry

How Long Can You Stew For, Before You Fall Apart? (2)

It wasn’t the first time I’d been stood up on the astral plane. However this was different, I was getting, dare I say it, lonely. I’m usually the...

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175 of my comments have received 185 Great Feedback votes

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I've so enjoyed reading this

Posted on Fri, 22 Jan 2021

I've so enjoyed reading this and kept thinking about it throughout the day. Amazing and well deserved pick of the month. 

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Posted in To a Lone Sailor

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I feel for you Ladybell, you

Posted on Thu, 14 Jan 2021

I feel for you Ladybell, you've done exactly the right thing in reaching out in a way which you feel safe. I know living with parents who have an unhealthy relationship with each other can feel like a pressure cooker in which you feel in danger...

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Posted in How do you forgive a parent?

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We can positively hear

Posted on Tue, 12 Jan 2021

We can positively hear ourselves getting older during these months and we are drained of colour under these clouds. Thanks for your comment.

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Posted in The Edge of Colour

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I like to think it wouldn't

Posted on Tue, 13 Oct 2020

I like to think it wouldn't Insert. I would take pains to choose the best names for all the shoe designs. I have a list already and waiting. Luna are my favourite but we haven't got your size sorry, you'll have to take the Griseldas instead.

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Posted in I Name that Shoe....

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The was really interesting

Posted on Thu, 08 Oct 2020

The was really interesting and enjoyable, thank you for sharing. 'The club' sounds like great fun and it's interesting how people used to make a real effort with their council homes and even tiny balconies, growing flowers. I don't know what's...

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Posted in THE GRANVILLE PARKERS - POST WAR SE LONDON

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Hi Rhiannon, I think if you

Posted on Mon, 05 Oct 2020

Hi Rhiannon, I think if you're somebody who gets overstimulated by detail then sitting such an exam at age eleven is so overwhelming. I remember the ticking clock at the front of hall getting right into my head and also the sight of the other...

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Posted in 11 PLUS

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So beautiful to watch the way

Posted on Mon, 05 Oct 2020

So beautiful to watch the way they move, the little feathered visitors add so much to our environment. I love the way you've described their movements and how their colours connect to the environment.  I think the sudden change in weather has...

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Posted in bird feeder

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I can really imagine young

Posted on Mon, 05 Oct 2020

I can really imagine young children singing this along with the actions Rhiannon. It's so easy to convince young minds that the autumn wind and rain is miserable but our seasons are so important and they all bring entertainment and something new...

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Posted in The seasons' round

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Beautiful Rhiannon. Your

Posted on Mon, 08 Jun 2020

Beautiful Rhiannon. Your poems are always so visual and full of texture, I can see those crops swaying, 'swells rippling' and aren't they so early this year. Walking around it feels as if we are a month ahead or more. 

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Posted in Dream with the breeze

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It does feel like there is a

Posted on Fri, 29 May 2020

It does feel like there is a magical spell on all the land doesn't it. This weather has made everything look more like July than May and we are all slowing down but we probably needed to.

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Posted in Here Comes The Sun

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