Jane Hyphen

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S T Vasectomy Clinic - (11)

Alistair nodded. ‘Yes, she does get muddled sometimes.’ ‘Anyway, you made the right decision, we’re very professional here. So this is something you’...
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Mole

I heard his voice in the rushing water. Graham and I used to sing a song together. I can’t remember how it started but this was the late eighties and...
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If I can just get through the day

If I can just get through the day Knowing I can return to the vessel Where oblivion is docked And I can retreat into silent, Solitary tunnels, my...
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Cherry

S T Vasectomy Clinic - 10

Cece checked the time and rolled her eyes, it was almost time to return to work. The large bedroom window overlooked their back garden and she paused...
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Cherry

S T Vasectomy Clinic - 9

Wednesday was a late night opening at the clinic, for professionals who were too important to take time out from their working day. Cece usually...
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267 of my comments have received 288 Great Feedback votes

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No-one get's double time

Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022

No-one gets double time anymore do they, more like half-time and make sure you get in done in half the time too.

This part of the story is creepy, please don't cut it short because creepy isn't easy to convey. There is something both...

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Posted in Ugly Puggly 42

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I don't want them to get

Posted on Thu, 23 Jun 2022

I don't want them to get caught but what a burden this is to have a dead body to get rid of. I can see why Uggly Puggly is down, he's the only capable person, but capable of anything.

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Posted in Ugly Puggly 41

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This is very striking in its

Posted on Sun, 26 Jun 2022

This is very striking in its truth and somewhat depressing too. There is something really peculiar going on whereby we are constantly being informed about the destruction of the environment while being encouraged to partake in the overconsumption...

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Posted in rage, rage against the Dying of your Rights

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I found this to be really

Posted on Thu, 23 Jun 2022

I found this to be really quiet, soothing even. Those violets are truly sweet and you've honoured them beautifully here Jenny.

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Posted in Sweet Violet

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I just read the three parts

Posted on Fri, 24 Jun 2022

I just read the three parts Paul and I I found this depressing tale to be quite believable in a Dr Who ish sort of way. I love the ending where you brought back the cob horses and it's written so well, I couldn't wait to read the next part. Not...

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Posted in The Horses of Wooldale Road (Part 3 of 3)

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That was a very interesting

Posted on Sun, 19 Jun 2022

That was a very interesting read. How lovely that your mum and auntie were so close and supported each other and were able to live out their retirement in a sunny place. Sorry for your loss. It was insightful to read about the all the stages of...

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Posted in The Journey. Part Two.

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I really want to visit, haven

Posted on Thu, 16 Jun 2022

I really want to visit, haven't got around to it yet but it's one of my dream destinations. Love 'brawny landscape' and the way you describe the dawn and the ripples on the loch. Wish I was there now.

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Posted in Midst Highland Shadows

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Moving without being

Posted on Sun, 12 Jun 2022

Moving without being sentimental. Anniversaries are often poignant simply because the natural elements of the day bring it all back. I'm often unaware of the anniversary date of my father's death but there is something about the weather,...

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Posted in Anniversary

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So pretty Jenny. Once you've

Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2022

So pretty Jenny. Once you've got them, you've got them. The seedpods are as lovely as the flowers and the feathery green foliage is light enough to complement the blooms 'purity laced'. They are a piece of art and always refreshing to see them...

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Posted in Love In The Mist

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No but I'm going to start and

Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2022

No but I'm going to start and it will be full blown hysteria.

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Posted in S T Vasectomy Clinic - (11)

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