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I have 258 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 287566 times and 284 of my stories have been cherry picked.
252 of my 1,635 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 271 votes

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Legend of the Pah (9)

Wednesday was a late night opening at the clinic, for professionals who were too important to take time out from their working day. Cece usually...
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Legend of the Pah - 8

Cece Hughes Cece Hughes was what you might refer to as well preserved. At a distance she could have passed for somebody half her age, even close up...
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You learn about the sunshine

First you learn about the sunshine Long, blue sky days Beneath the boughs of trees Leaves flickering, lambent The sun is ever loyal It burns in...
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Legend of the Pah - 7

'Is everything okay?' ‘Yes,’ he nodded, ‘I just had a…..dream that’s all.’ ‘By the way Solo has been sick in the night, there’s bright yellow bile on...
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The Clappers

When it comes to school productions, there is usually a mixture of emotions; pride, embarrassment, pressure, discomfort, excitement and then there’s...
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252 of my comments have received 271 Great Feedback votes

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That was a very interesting

Posted on Sun, 19 Jun 2022

That was a very interesting read. How lovely that your mum and auntie were so close and supported each other and were able to live out their retirement in a sunny place. Sorry for your loss. It was insightful to read about the all the stages of...

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Posted in The Journey. Part Two.

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I really want to visit, haven

Posted on Thu, 16 Jun 2022

I really want to visit, haven't got around to it yet but it's one of my dream destinations. Love 'brawny landscape' and the way you describe the dawn and the ripples on the loch. Wish I was there now.

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Posted in Midst Highland Shadows

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Moving without being

Posted on Sun, 12 Jun 2022

Moving without being sentimental. Anniversaries are often poignant simply because the natural elements of the day bring it all back. I'm often unaware of the anniversary date of my father's death but there is something about the weather,...

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Posted in Anniversary

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So pretty Jenny. Once you've

Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2022

So pretty Jenny. Once you've got them, you've got them. The seedpods are as lovely as the flowers and the feathery green foliage is light enough to complement the blooms 'purity laced'. They are a piece of art and always refreshing to see them...

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Posted in Love In The Mist

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No but I'm going to start and

Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2022

No but I'm going to start and it will be full blown hysteria.

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Posted in Legend of the Pah (11)

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Brilliant again. Appalling,

Posted on Wed, 08 Jun 2022

Brilliant again. Appalling, mundane, absurd, funny, horrifying and wonderfully written.

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Posted in Alabaster Conjugal 3.

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I've always that thought that

Posted on Tue, 07 Jun 2022

I've always that thought that the skeleton of a dead tree adds so much to the landscape and I like that you've paid tribute to it here with your wonderful Rhiannon. The contrast of the tree standing still among all the life and movement of the...

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Posted in Evening peace

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I love the element of

Posted on Thu, 02 Jun 2022

I love the element of folklore in this; nature intertwined with adventure, constant peril, all driven by the froces which spring from childhood experiences.  The name Elowen is so beautiful.

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Posted in Leaving The Nest

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I think that story about

Posted on Tue, 31 May 2022

I think that story about marriage was in the Daily Mail. All I can say is that I've been with my partner for over thrity years, we have two children, we're not married and our children have had a very stable family life, no splits or affairs,...

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Posted in unclear nuclear

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You've made so many valid

Posted on Tue, 31 May 2022

You've made so many valid points here Di. Some are pushing nuclear energy as if it's a risk-free, magic bullet to the energy crisis.

Nuclear is not clean, the risks and long term effects are frightening. We all need to stop being so greedy...

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Posted in unclear nuclear

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