Jane Hyphen

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This Cannot Be Our Home

We are not earthly, we cannot thrive here without all our rags and shoes, dry shelters, heated, cooled. We all need padded cells. There is so much...
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Junk Jewellery

Come upstairs with me, I’ll show you my junk jewellery. Overflowing from a box which looks like leather. Gold and shiny, sparkling, like something...
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Nil by Mouth

I don’t want the blood to flow I never want to see it Feel the pull inside Grasping claws, organs entwined Just an apple and an egg Lemon water, a...
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Parables of Clippety (15) - The Overworld

There was a tense silence with both women wondering why the receptionist looked so concerned. A very short man with a hooked nose walked over very...
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Parables of Clippety (14) - The Bends

Marni locked her lips on him. First of all she sucked on his flesh, as hard as possible as if giving a love bite, then slowly she sunk her teeth in,...
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267 of my comments have received 288 Great Feedback votes

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I enjoyed this poetic take on

Posted on Thu, 31 Mar 2022

I enjoyed this poetic take on a creepy tale, especially how you set the scene in the woods and then take the reader through the story until its brutal ending and the childrens escape. I love the Pied Piper verses but it's rather long. This is...

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Posted in Into the Woods (Hansel and Gretel)

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Anemone, what a beautiful

Posted on Sun, 27 Mar 2022

Anemone, what a beautiful name for a fairy. I can just picture the twins, Alvar and Almalric playfighting and flying around the forest. I must say, I really envy their lifesyle, especially at the moment. 

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Posted in Journey Into Fairy Woodland Part Two

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I love this. The picture you

Posted on Sun, 27 Mar 2022

I love this. The picture you've painted is beautiful and pure escapism. Yes I do believe. I was once lucky enough to see a tiny tiny man, not a fairy, well not winged anyway. I was a small child but I know what I saw. I've written about it on...

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Posted in Journey Into Fairy Woodland Part One

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I love the titles already.

Posted on Fri, 18 Mar 2022

I love the titles already. Selling, does that even happen anymore, unless it's a diet book? That's why we all have to go to work too. Your writing is always a curve ball, now you can limber up for bowling your next one or you could publish a best...

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Posted in Salad Day I Suppose

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Beautiful lines for the

Posted on Tue, 15 Mar 2022

Beautiful lines for the season Rhiannon. I haven't seen any celandines yet but lots of aconites out here with their little collars and of course all the primroses and daffodils blowing their trumpets, 'heralding the coming spring'. Perfect.

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Posted in Warm welcome

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Love this, so unique. In the

Posted on Fri, 11 Mar 2022

Love this, so unique. In the end there is always a new way to create but I can't help thinking of that ear, all half-pecked and covered in dirt.

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Posted in The Poet's Ear

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Thanks for the cherries

Posted on Sun, 27 Feb 2022

Thanks for the cherries Insert. Yes, I think I might be open to that. smiley

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Posted in Parables of Clippety (11) - The Quarry

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This is sweet and sour. I

Posted on Sun, 27 Feb 2022

This is sweet and sour. I enjoyed the descriptions of Cornwall here, so well done, especially the Hottentot Fig, once you learn that plant name, you never forget it. The energy and fearlessness of youth quickly expires but it sounds like your...

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Posted in Brief Moments To Imagine

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Wow, this is really sweet and

Posted on Wed, 23 Feb 2022

Wow, this is really sweet and touching. The lady in the photograph looks so happy. Music can be a medium for time travel. She must have so many wonderful memories.

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Posted in ‘Twinkle, twinkle … what?’@102

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Thanks for the cherries

Posted on Tue, 22 Feb 2022

Thanks for the cherries Insert. Unfortunately, the dust went everywhere, into orrfices, penetrating mucous membranes and causing a distortion of the status quo.

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Posted in Parables of Clippety (7) - Sniffer Dogs

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