Jane Hyphen
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Parcel for You - Part 59
‘Yes,’ Spencer nodded excitedly, he was feeling relieved, vindicated, Cedric’s dodgy behaviour had been affirmed by social media ‘that’s him in the...
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Parcel for You - Part 58
The following morning, Spencer woke up alone and found himself aggrieved by the sight of Cedric vacuuming the stairs again. He pushed past him...
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Parcel for you - Part 57
‘Gosh Cedric,’ Vanessa said, holding her hand up to her mouth to disguise the fact that she was speaking with food in it, ‘this is incredible. You...
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The Young Man
The young man left his home with only the urge to fall off the end of the earth. Dressed as he was in the worn fibres of his brittle sleeps where he...
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Parcel for you - Part 56
‘Thank you Cedric,’ Vanessa said through gritted teeth, ‘you really don’t have to do any more tidying. Go and relax for a bit.’ He ignored her...
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Words to capture the action
Posted on Fri, 18 Jul 2025
Words to capture the action of a walk among interesting landscapes, Rhiannon. Taking children on these walks is immeasurably beneficial for them. It reminded me of when we took our very young children on a walk in the woods and my partner urged...
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This is very raw, the idea of
Posted on Sat, 19 Jul 2025
This is very raw, the idea of a man hiding in a myth, with power over his partner, perhaps the only way to think of such a man and accept his actions which appear to involve some violence. And his mood like the sea, dependant on the weather of...
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I found this journey through
Posted on Sat, 19 Jul 2025
I found this journey through the seasons tapped into the emotions, the joy of spring, the stark loneliness of winter, naked ice horses and hoar forst, There's always a sadness when the geese start honking in vast formations across the darkening...
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Ha ha, at least he could grow
Posted on Tue, 15 Jul 2025
Ha ha, at least he could grow another leg if he needed too. Thanks for ready, airyfairy.
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Thank you w.w.j.abercrombie.
Posted on Fri, 04 Jul 2025
Thank you w.w.j.abercrombie. I need to tighten it up a little. I really appreciate your feedback.
Read full commentPosted in The Vale - Part 1 (c)
Thank you Drew for you
Posted on Fri, 04 Jul 2025
Thank you Drew for you attention to detail. You're right he would have noticed the food smell. I will go through it again. I appreciate your feedback.
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Thank you Di, he feels like
Posted on Fri, 04 Jul 2025
Thank you Di, he feels like an imposter in his life. Lots of elements together, good to know it still made sense to you, the reader.
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Thank you, Di and thanks for
Posted on Fri, 27 Jun 2025
Thank you, Di and thanks for the cherries. Grief is different with an animal, it's more instantly accessible and I think it taps into unresolved grief from the past.
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There are so many details
Posted on Tue, 24 Jun 2025
There are so many details here, a clear picture building and so atmospheric as others have said. That lonely feeling you experience as a child when you're scared but you know your parents will dismiss your fears. And the woods - I could feel the...
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I like how, instead of
Posted on Tue, 17 Jun 2025
I like how, instead of feeling sad and mourning the loss of physical strength, you have simply transferred your time to something else, equally pleasurable and creative. A garden can be enjoyed simply by passively being in it or even seeing it...
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