Jane Hyphen

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I have 203 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 171391 times and 208 of my stories have been cherry picked.
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The Unsent Letter

I've been going through old untitled documents on my cloud and found this unsent letter to my next door neighbour whose noisy handy man (her little pet) polluted the air space with a very loud radio each weekend, drowning out the birds and other soothing sounds.
Cherry

Orange

Orange just doesn’t sit right with me Claiming to be both colour and fruit It can’t just choose one and it’s loud Too shouty, too few this colour...
Cherry

Putting Things Off

I’ve been Putting things off Turning inward Turning in Shrinking my absorption Starving the point Just inhaling Listening to my Blood flowing I am...
Cherry

The Three Fields of You

This fertile field to which we’re born In furrowed tilth for infant roots To dock and grow in loving loam You flourished in this sunny gaze With...
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He said I was Whippety (Rimus Dissolutas)

On Wednesdays I go to the park And whatever the genre of weather I enjoy a lie down on the grass And I blow kisses to my whippets Some people stop to...

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150 of my comments have received 158 Great Feedback votes

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This is a lovely snapshot in

Posted on Fri, 08 Mar 2019

This is a lovely snapshot in time Rhiannon. I feel like people stretched their imaginations a little more back then and then was less shame in choosing something a bit different and making use of what you had. 

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Posted in Gladys Aylward and Tenzing

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Yes she did @Di_Hard and Rod

Posted on Sat, 02 Mar 2019

Yes she did @Di_Hard and Rod and Karen didn't know how to react because that's not their currency.

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Posted in The Love of the Loveless (Chapter 6) (3)

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This is beautiful Jenny.

Posted on Sun, 03 Mar 2019

This is beautiful Jenny. There is a sense of nature being effortless yet it always trumps human creations. I love the idea of it all being at your back door, I'm the same, I really appreciate my little garden and as one thing fades there is...

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Posted in Precious Nature

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I love it too, it's

Posted on Mon, 04 Mar 2019

I love it too, it's unconfined, perhaps you are a bird after all.

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Posted in Conversation of a Tree

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A storm, however brief does

Posted on Thu, 14 Feb 2019

A storm, however brief does seem to bring with it a change of behaviour in our wildlife as well as the palpable change in atmosphere. This is a lovely tribute. I really enjoyed 'globules released from dark sky splashing.' We missed most of the...

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Posted in Embracing The Storm

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I too love the arrangement

Posted on Tue, 12 Feb 2019

I too love the arrangement Rhiannon, it really works and of course the theme is perfect for February, the soil warming and those seeds about to burst unseen with so much in store.

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Posted in Seasons Connect

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'Somewhere like yesterday'

Posted on Mon, 11 Feb 2019

'Somewhere like yesterday' sad truth in these words and it's a beautiful poem too. Thanks for linking it to mine. I also love to see work inspired by other writers on here as I'm so often inspired myself.

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Posted in driverless

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Thanks celticman. Your

Posted on Mon, 04 Feb 2019

Thanks celticman. Your comments in riddley rhyme motivate me time after time.smiley...

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Posted in Bedtime Rituals

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I love 'pure pearls' Rhiannon

Posted on Mon, 04 Feb 2019

I love 'pure pearls' Rhiannon and also 'rich greening'. They are such a pure little flower braving the cold and warming the beds for the spring flowers to come. 

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Posted in Snowdrops

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It's so beautiful Rhiannon, I

Posted on Sat, 02 Feb 2019

It's so beautiful Rhiannon, I don't think I've ever seen one of these birds and your poem is a graceful tribute.

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Posted in Avocet

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