Jane Hyphen
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Legend of the Pah - 5 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
‘A parcel came for you,’ Lynne said dryly without looking up from her laptop. ‘Ah good, yes the new car battery for my old Audi.’ She glared at him...
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Pet Sounds
Do you ever hear somebody call your name in your sleep? ‘Catherine,’ I heard it loud and clear and it played back in my head as I awoke, in fact I...
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Legend of the Pah - 4 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
Alistair returned to the garage, he was feeling out of control, desperate and in this reckless condition, he got inside the Audi awkwardly, scraping...
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Legend of the Pah - 3 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
‘What word?’ ‘Doesn’t matter. Robert won’t want it. A Ford Crapri! That’s what we always called them. Honestly Alistair, you’re so deluded, he’s not...
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The Legend of the Pah - 2 (S T Vasectomy Clinic)
A wormhole, that was how Alistair thought of his beloved Audi Quattro because that’s how it seemed, like a hidden corridor into another universe. He...
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You've made so many valid
Posted on Tue, 31 May 2022
You've made so many valid points here Di. Some are pushing nuclear energy as if it's a risk-free, magic bullet to the energy crisis.
Nuclear is not clean, the risks and long term effects are frightening. We all need to stop being so greedy...
Read full commentPosted in unclear nuclear
I like this poem, it speaks
Posted on Sun, 29 May 2022
I like this poem, it speaks of the coiled spring like energy that lives inside all horses, along with the need to be both loved and led. I particularly love the last line.
Read full commentPosted in Unreined
Hi Jenny, they are like
Posted on Mon, 23 May 2022
Hi Jenny, they are like 'ghosts just passing by in silence'. They appear to inhabit another world, somewhere deep inside the night. I've noticed a lot of them around recently and if they're in the house, I go to great lengths to escort them out...
Read full commentPosted in Luna Moth
You sold it to me until,
Posted on Sun, 22 May 2022
You sold it to me until, 'custard dripping from a dead deer's eye'. It sounds interesting and, not following the latest movie releases, I'd never heard of this film.
I fluctuate between thinking that men are responsible for all the evils...
Read full commentPosted in Men: A Nightmare
That is really lovely lenchen
Posted on Fri, 20 May 2022
That is really lovely lenchen. I'd never heard it called Eve's Tears either. I love the name Eve, and Lilly of the Valley is a favourite flower and scent of mine so I will be calling it that name from now on. I have a tiny cluster of it from an...
Read full commentPosted in Eves' Tears
One of my favourite tales
Posted on Sat, 14 May 2022
One of my favourite tales because everything about it is fascinating and mostly very plausible. I like your modern take and anything which keeps this story alive. You have succeded in maintaining the sinisterness of the original.
Read full commentPosted in An Eternal Debt (The Pied Piper of Hamlin)
This really got into my head
Posted on Tue, 17 May 2022
This really got into my head Rhiannon. As I read, I could really imagine lying there, confined but still living through all the sounds from the open window. Reminded me of being a small child and sent to bed in summer when I wasn't at all sleepy...
Read full commentPosted in Illumination leaking in …
I enjoyed this, you've set
Posted on Fri, 13 May 2022
I enjoyed this, you've set things out very clearly like a great teacher. I decided not to read or write for the past few days because I felt overwhelmed and the earth's spinning made me feel sick and dizzy but reading this has reset my spinacles...
Read full commentPosted in Word
Love this, surreal and dreamy
Posted on Tue, 10 May 2022
Love this, surreal and dreamy. Really enjoyed, thank you for sharing.
Read full commentPosted in The Dead Want Their Moon Back
A clever and interesting poem
Posted on Fri, 06 May 2022
A clever and interesting poem Di. There's so many directions you can go in with a chrysalis, it's such a shocking peice of engineering and a shocking process for the creature involved but somehow it survives all that change. I enjoyed the uplift...
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