Jane Hyphen
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Parcel for You - Part 46
‘Thanks for the coffee, Spencer. Do you think you could bring the gin and tonic in here too, and some ice?’ Spencer gave Pat a lingering look. ‘Yes I...
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Parcel for You - Part 45
Vanessa sort of zoned out over dinner, it was almost impossible not to. The opening details of the story had been intriguing but they were soon into...
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Planet Secret Santa
‘Well I know who this is from because it’s not wrapped up!’ ‘Oh, looks posh,’ said Mercury, ‘what exactly is that?’ ‘It’s face powder,’ said Mars. ‘...
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Parcel for you - Part 44
Recently Vanessa had grown a little bit tired of her old friend Pat, mostly due to her relationship with the very annoying Stu. She’d fallen in with...
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Parcel for You - Part 43
The first thing Vanessa did after they’d left was chuck her new book into the hidden storage area inside the pouffe and shut the lid with a bang. Out...
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You don't forget these
Posted on Thu, 20 Feb 2025
You don't forget these sadistic nutcases who take up teaching do you? I wonder if it's their personalities which dictate their career choice or their career choice which causes their characters to descend into bullying roles. Probably a bit of...
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This is a very unique poem,
Posted on Tue, 18 Feb 2025
This is a very unique poem, as are cows, tampered with by us and their extraordinary lives, calfs torn away and the endless milking. I love the contrast between the wild creatures and pastoral scenes.
Read full commentPosted in Cows - lost, refound, tinkered with.
He lived and breathed his
Posted on Sat, 15 Feb 2025
He lived and breathed his profession and those in the know could tell from the off. I was worried about him sitting there squashed into his seat, I hope he got the job. Every town needs good bakers.
Read full commentPosted in Having perhaps the better claim
That sounds wonderful, Jenny.
Posted on Sun, 02 Feb 2025
That sounds wonderful, Jenny. Reading poetry under shady trees in beautiful Canterbury. Memories of peaceful times, friendships and opportunities. Snapshots in time cherished forever.
Read full commentPosted in Like Autumn Leaves Scatter In The Breeze
Alive n 25, Kris that is a
Posted on Thu, 30 Jan 2025
Alive n 25, Kris that is a good place to be and keeping fit too. That was some achievement keeping that going and with well-crafted lyrics and tempo that plays in your head as you read. Very well done. It would be great to hear you perform it....
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A beautiful tribute to these
Posted on Wed, 29 Jan 2025
A beautiful tribute to these darling little flowers. I am currently planting little colonies of them in my garden. I don't think I can put into words how much I love snowdrops but you've done a lovely job here, Rhiannon.
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There's an undercurrent here,
Posted on Sun, 26 Jan 2025
There's an undercurrent here, it's like a game of chess, grievances simmering, doubts niggling. I was going to say, it's like a soap opera but the characters have more class, they're cultured. I think Perfidia might regret the oblivion tomorrow...
Read full commentPosted in "Willow's Missing Tail" 24
Thank you, Di, it's so
Posted on Fri, 24 Jan 2025
Thank you, Di, it's so encouraging to know that you're still enjoying it. I think you're right that Vanessa and Spencer sort of rescue each other on a regular basis. Some people reckon the whales and dolphins are more intelligent than us, they've...
Read full commentPosted in Parcel for You - Part 49
A constellation of stories
Posted on Fri, 24 Jan 2025
A constellation of stories
orbiting a liminal univers
of infinate imagination
Connection is so much more than physical and everything in nature has a memory in this magical poem.
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This is so beautiful. I felt
Posted on Tue, 21 Jan 2025
This is so beautiful. I felt as if I was the dryad reading this words, perfectly arranged to reflect the forest.
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