Jane Hyphen
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My stories
In the Bath
I’m always in the bath. Preferring my reflection all distorted on the taps. Preferring the wet water to the droughty winter air. I’m friendly with...
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Parcel for You..Part 18
Spencer was staring intently out of the kitchen window, moving his head to focus on the treetops and then back down to the lawn. ‘Three blackbirds,’...
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Productivity is Dead
Productivity is dead We should slow the hell down And enjoy being alive instead Bill Gates talking about AI The white collar workforce shrinking away...
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We Watched from the Shore
We watched from the shore, is he really on board? There’s no sign of him on land or sea or yet behind this sealed sky. He is behind our eyes, as a...
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Parcel for you..Part 17
Vanessa breathed a huge sigh of relief as Pat and Stu pulled away and disappeared down the street. Charlie trotted up to the front door and leaned...
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Hi Jenny, of course I'm not
Posted on Wed, 17 Apr 2024
Hi Jenny, of course I'm not offended. Poetry should always be open to interpretation I think. I'm not sure exactly what the secret is myself but I felt it in the plants and flowers, they whispered to me, not in any language I could fully...
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This is delightful, Jenny. I
Posted on Tue, 16 Apr 2024
This is delightful, Jenny. I love mice, I actually saw one today, scurrying in a polytunnel., they do have important business to do. Segments of sun, yes, I want a whole orange sun for the whole day.
Read full commentPosted in Wild Side Of April
Thank you for your great
Posted on Sat, 13 Apr 2024
Thank you for your great comment, Di. Annie is one of those obliviously selfish people who look great on paper but in real life, leaves a trail of frayed nerves behind, especially the nervous system of their nearest and dearest. Spencer doesn't...
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Wow, that was like riding
Posted on Fri, 15 Mar 2024
Wow, that was like riding some rhyming river rapids, twists and turns, dunked then re-surfaced but fast flowing, dangerous in places. I agree with others, this should be performed because the little man who performs it inside my head doesn't do...
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Love this, Jenny. It's like a
Posted on Sat, 30 Mar 2024
Love this, Jenny. It's like a massage. The drums played along with the words and those images from the natural world. It just works really well.
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Thank you for the cherries
Posted on Thu, 28 Mar 2024
Thank you for the cherries and your comment, Insert. Ha ha, maybe I can introduce Uncle Clive to Spencer..
Read full commentPosted in Erazofuge
This is very dark, lots of
Posted on Sun, 24 Mar 2024
This is very dark, lots of elements drawn together, colourful and restrained. It's got a lot of class.
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Really enjoyed. Boredom
Posted on Thu, 21 Mar 2024
Really enjoyed. Boredom broken by something she maybe shouldn't have been doing but the alternative was more stifling boredom and resentment. I love the way the spa showed her the way out and into something new. Life is too short after all.
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Creative flow accompanied by
Posted on Thu, 21 Mar 2024
Creative flow accompanied by drowsiness and your ideas fold away into layers of dream clouds. Bizarrely I sometimes have amazing songs playing in my dreams but I don't write music and have no way of recording them, I don't really know where they...
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Magical I agree and fitting
Posted on Wed, 20 Mar 2024
Magical I agree and fitting to its land of origin. I would love to visit, the gardens alone look wonderful. The idea of a Moon Maiden is more inspiring than the man on the moon or the idea of it being made of cheese.....
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