Jane Hyphen
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526 of my 2,818 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 556 votes
My stories
How boys play
They roll over, rolling over like little dogs, and only for the worst one, the most depraved, the wolf. They follow blindly, lining up to spit, just...
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Parcel for You.. - Part 34
Later that night, in the moments just before Spencer fell into his standby sleeping mode, Vanessa felt overwhelmed with curiosity about his encounter...
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Parcel for You..Part 33
‘It’s common in humans,’ said Lorenzo flippantly, ‘but, hey, you must meet my husband, he’s called Steve,’ he said, holding out his hand towards a...
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Forest in the Brain
I need something for the shade Where it’s deeper, colder I’m not expecting flowers A pair of leaves, a small sign But nothing grows here Beneath this...
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Parcel for you..Part 32
‘What on earth is happening over there?’ said Pat. Stu stood up taller on his cuban heels, like little hooves, they gave him an extra inch and a half...
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Thank you Drew
Posted on Thu, 26 Sep 2024
Thank you Drew
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Beggars belief, literally!
Posted on Wed, 25 Sep 2024
Beggars belief, literally! Worldly mismanagement of wealth distribution and failure to provide basic provisions to people.
Read full commentPosted in Another Way.
An enchanting video, Jenny
Posted on Sat, 21 Sep 2024
An enchanting video, Jenny and your accommpanying poem too. The sort of grandmother who advises you to have faith rather than telling you what doesn't exist is the best sort of grandmother and a key player in the development of your imagination...
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The push and pull of a child
Posted on Sat, 21 Sep 2024
The push and pull of a child's emotions, one minute wanting to please and the next forgetting everything and just getting lost in amusements. I enjoyed the rich descriptions of his world from the window and look forward to more.
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I too love the ridgeway, the
Posted on Thu, 12 Sep 2024
I too love the ridgeway, the bits I have walked had plenty of lovely views, historical features and very satisfying to walk on. Trail reflective in puddles appearing, so evocative of this time of year. We've had all the seasons this week. Good...
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That was a lovely poem to
Posted on Fri, 13 Sep 2024
That was a lovely poem to read before bed. As adults, it's easy to forget about the limitless fantasy worlds which are often level with the real world when we are children. I want to go on a starlit journey.
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Brilliant and otherworldly.
Posted on Fri, 13 Sep 2024
Brilliant and otherworldly. Decay and hope, big endings and humour.
Read full commentPosted in The Big End
Autobuff - I could make a
Posted on Fri, 06 Sep 2024
Autobuff - I could make a fortune couldn't I. Poor Vanessa. I've been there many times with one of my children and I always felt that if even if I could afford whatever it is, I wouldn't be buying it anyway. Thank you so much for your comment Di...
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You do these surreal tales
Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2024
You do these surreal tales mixed with very real emotional elements so well, Paul. I knew I would enjoy it from the onset. Opening the message, clicking the link, it sounds so innocent but is increasing powerful and dangerous. The idea of having a...
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Awful, Maxine, it's such a
Posted on Thu, 05 Sep 2024
Awful, Maxine, it's such a gut wrenching story. There appears to be an epidemic of crime involving young men, boys, and bladed weapons and we are being let down.
Read full commentPosted in WHY??? Part Two.
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