Jane Hyphen

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I have 202 stories published in 3 collections on the site.
My stories have been read 163172 times and 206 of my stories have been cherry picked.
149 of my 1,240 comments have been voted Great Feedback with a total of 157 votes

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Put Away Summer

Put away summer Cast a veil upon the sun Know tiredness, sleep away. Wind-withered leaves cannot Hold on as birds no longer Aim the candor of their...
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Feeling Confused about Time

Feeling confused about time Yesterday I was twenty three Running on the spot, feeling ashamed Young blood flowed out through cuts A caustic youth, I...
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Man in a Pink Shirt

Man in a pink shirt Don’t step out into the road Fat man in a pink polo shirt Ruddy cheeked, strawberry blond In Henley..Henley on Thames One tan...
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The Dirt Road

I know you took the dirt road From the dead rays of your eyes Wan pulse, jitter currents fire you You're here but barely there Where have you been...
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The Girl in the Photo

She’s just a girl in a photo We hold the corner and her gaze And whisper, ‘Don’t look down.’ There’s frailty hidden in the frame Cracks opened in our...
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149 of my comments have received 157 Great Feedback votes

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I love the way you've knitted

Posted on Tue, 09 Jan 2018

I love the way you've knitted all this together, old and new threads woven to create something beautiful, interesting, slightly psychodelic but altogether real. I will take some time to listen to the song.

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Posted in Afternoon Angel

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Hi Di_Hard, I agree re wanton

Posted on Wed, 10 Jan 2018

Hi Di_Hard, I agree re wanton wastefulness, some people even buy a whole new set of decorations each year, pretty shocking isn't it. I like to have a real tree, it's like a little Christmas friend, something to get you through it when the family...

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Posted in Where do Christmas Trees go to Die?

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This is invigorating Rhiannon

Posted on Mon, 09 Oct 2017

This is invigorating Rhiannon, cleansing, almost like the real thing..

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Posted in Nordy Bank Fort 5/10/17

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I enjoyed this. Those

Posted on Sat, 09 Sep 2017

I enjoyed this. Those starlings though, it seems cruel doesn't it. As a human you just can't get away with gatoring, people always expect a smile and small talk. I really like your style of writing.

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Posted in Fuller Grasp of Filler

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This was a really interesting

Posted on Sun, 20 Aug 2017

This was a really interesting read and refreshing. I spent some time living in Devon and I must say my heart broke a little when I left. When is something as unspeakable as the holocaust and other horrific war incidents truly dealt with? As long...

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Posted in Outcomes of my Dad's recent Funeral in London

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I enjoyed this unique take on

Posted on Wed, 23 Aug 2017

I enjoyed this unique take on choices. My bedtime reading; I hope Columbo doesn't make it into my dream.

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Posted in One More Things

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Unusual poem, it works really

Posted on Wed, 02 Aug 2017

Unusual poem, it works really well. As an admirer of moss I think you have done it justice, really love, 'moist micro city'. Moss is much underrated, close up, in the sunlight it's really beautiful. 

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Posted in Moss

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The letter was such a

Posted on Tue, 25 Jul 2017

The letter was such a different animal to the modern forms of communication. You've described here so well the processes and pitfalls as well as the artfulness of letter writing Rhiannon.

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Posted in Tangled Threads

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So true, where will the

Posted on Sun, 23 Jul 2017

So true, where will the upgrading end? Everytime i watch the Olympics, especially the gymnastics I wonder how high will they jump in another four years, how many spins? I am also for degrading, possibly devolving too, back in the caves, grunting...

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Posted in I’m not upgrading

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Was that a true story? Not

Posted on Thu, 13 Jul 2017

Was that a true story? Not predictable and very engaging. As above, come back with more strange tales...

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Posted in What happens near Rome

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