Jane Hyphen
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The Garden, that was my domain
The garden, that was my domain It’s where I framed my worst paintings Held my rival’s head beneath the soil Until his gist went limp And hid inside a...
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Parcel for You - Part 51
Maybe he’s just better off without me, she thought as she drove back towards home, knowing in her gut that Spencer would not be by the front door...
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Already a Demon
It’s the demon drink But he was already a demon I think Five years dry now, so he says Flashing his postcards from the desert But it always looks too...
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Parcel for You - Part 50
Vanessa’s blood ran cold. The idea of Spencer in some sort of human inspired self-destruct mode filled her with dread and a deep sense of sadness. It...
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Parcel for You - Part 49
Vanessa sighed and dropped down onto the bed. She felt as if she’d had the stuffing knocked out of her as she stared at the vacant plug socket which...
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Thank you, Insert. This is
Posted on Fri, 06 Jun 2025
Thank you, Insert. This is something I started a few years back and I just unearthed it. Chapter 1 is really sweary...
Read full commentPosted in The Vale - Part Two
Agree with you, UK self
Posted on Fri, 06 Jun 2025
Agree with you, UK self-checkouts often have all the staff who formerly manned the now redundant tills standing around like the gestapo watching you so you don't nick anything. The worst thing is when they emit that dull impatient bleep because...
Read full commentPosted in Rools is Rools
An inciteful summing up of
Posted on Thu, 05 Jun 2025
An inciteful summing up of the current mood. It's impossible to imagine the future and difficult to plan for anything. The media constantly throwing threats at us, gloom and doom but how much of it is real? For sure our economy needs a huge shake...
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I still haven't been to
Posted on Sun, 01 Jun 2025
I still haven't been to Scotland, Jenny. It's on my list of things to do. Heather and craggy rocks, a place away from man-made complications and the inconvenience of counting time. There is nothing more valuable.
Read full commentPosted in Treasure of Sensory Impressions
I knew it was TK Maxx! I used
Posted on Thu, 22 May 2025
I knew it was TK Maxx! I used to have the same habit, I won't call it an addiction, now it's Ebay. There are worse things..
Read full commentPosted in Addictions.
Makes me realise how hard it
Posted on Thu, 22 May 2025
Makes me realise how hard it must have been to arrive somewhere on time in those days. Sticking to whatever arrangements you made by letter or during the last time you saw each other and not only visiting friends and relations but knowing their...
Read full commentPosted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part Three
Reading this, I can relate to
Posted on Thu, 22 May 2025
Reading this, I can relate to the conflicted emotions in regard to people who are desperate but may also prey upon you, rob you etc. Not much has changed over the centuries, Jenny. How lucky Emily is to have a family and money to spend.
Read full commentPosted in A Victorian Lady's Memoirs Part Two
This is going to be very
Posted on Tue, 20 May 2025
This is going to be very interesting Jenny. Pure escapism from another era. I really like the descriptions of the house and objects from the time. A wealthy family who also care about those who struggle with less. Emily, a young lady with her...
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This is unique and startling,
Posted on Sat, 24 May 2025
This is unique and startling, frightening actually. I really enjoyed it. The way the museum is sleek and modern put me at ease initially and then everything bends and becomes distorted and personal.
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The ending was very
Posted on Sat, 17 May 2025
The ending was very unexpected and you left clever gaps for my own imagination to fill. The preachy guy was yearning to solve all the problems of the world but in the end he was satisfied with some Italian food.
Read full commentPosted in That's what my heart yearns for now
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