Jane Hyphen
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Parcel for you - Part 31
There was a brief interval while The Hominids of Quasar set up and made a great play of testing the microphones. ‘I like Stuart’s bandana,’ Vanessa...
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Parcel for you...Part 30
‘There,’ Annie pulled the rim down so that it obscured his forehead, ’that’s better, you can’t see his face as much.’ Spencer stopped in his tracks...
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Parcel for you...Part 29
‘Has Annie sent you the tickets?’ Vanessa had just returned from work and she could see that Spencer had a look about him, a buzz which suggested he’...
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The Broken Lady
She doesn’t move The broken lady At least when the mortals are passing She may contemplate much From the bounds of her post She’s more than the...
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Parcel for you...Part 28
There was a sense of restored peace with Annie having left the house to stay with her father for a while. Vanessa placed all that young lady’s things...
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You do these surreal tales
Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2024
You do these surreal tales mixed with very real emotional elements so well, Paul. I knew I would enjoy it from the onset. Opening the message, clicking the link, it sounds so innocent but is increasing powerful and dangerous. The idea of having a...
Read full commentPosted in Ghostbot (Part One of Two)
Awful, Maxine, it's such a
Posted on Thu, 05 Sep 2024
Awful, Maxine, it's such a gut wrenching story. There appears to be an epidemic of crime involving young men, boys, and bladed weapons and we are being let down.
Read full commentPosted in WHY??? Part Two.
Wise and wonderful words,
Posted on Mon, 02 Sep 2024
Wise and wonderful words, Rhiannon. Beautiful photographs too. The last verse very calming.
Read full commentPosted in The Seasonal Years …
I admire the way which you
Posted on Sun, 01 Sep 2024
I admire the way which you describe sounds and the tone of voices so that they you can really hear them as you read. It's easy to imagine pirates being realy quite stupid. There's is so much detail in your story. I would love to see it in an...
Read full commentPosted in "Unwanted Magic" 8
Colouring outside the lines
Posted on Sun, 11 Aug 2024
Colouring outside the lines and writing in between them. When the fragments come together seamlessly. Brilliantly done.
Read full commentPosted in Leonard & Co-hen
This is so magical and
Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2024
This is so magical and charming, Jenny, it sounds like my ideal garden. I like to think these folk are hiding in the flowers. I know I've got hedgehogs and I'm very grateful for those but elves would be wonderful.
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Hi Di, that is absolutely
Posted on Thu, 08 Aug 2024
Hi Di, that is absolutely awful. I honestly think for some children, their bodies physically reject meat and fish and they're just not made to consume it. Having observed how some parents react dismissively to very fussy eaters, I can imagine how...
Read full commentPosted in Foods that make me feel sick.
This is moving tribute, Jenny
Posted on Tue, 30 Jul 2024
This is moving tribute, Jenny, sensitively done. It's been on my mind all week and can't help wondering what went wrong with this young man. The response of the public, I understand, it's based upon fear. Caring is your saving grace - it's true...
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I'd never heard of Tom Crean,
Posted on Wed, 31 Jul 2024
I'd never heard of Tom Crean, I love his name. You leave the reader with decisions to make about who is real and what really happened and the atmosphere of the pub and the old cottage is so well done.
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This is so clever, Rhiannon,
Posted on Fri, 26 Jul 2024
This is so clever, Rhiannon, the idea of a ballroom dress upon the dancefloor of their huge leaves. You've got Begonias spot on and they don't get tired either, do they.
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