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Parcel for you..Part 32

By Jane Hyphen on Sat, 10 Aug 2024

‘What on earth is happening over there?’ said Pat. Stu stood up taller on his cuban heels, like little hooves, they gave him an extra inch and a half...

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Foods that make me feel sick.

By Jane Hyphen on Thu, 08 Aug 2024

‘Jam tarts!’ She said, my mother in an excited, breathy voice, her dark eyes wide and shiny, the words hushed as if not permitted to be said out loud...

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Parcel for you - Part 31

By Jane Hyphen on Thu, 25 Jul 2024

There was a brief interval while The Hominids of Quasar set up and made a great play of testing the microphones. ‘I like Stuart’s bandana,’ Vanessa...

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Parcel for you...Part 30

By Jane Hyphen on Sun, 21 Jul 2024

‘There,’ Annie pulled the rim down so that it obscured his forehead, ’that’s better, you can’t see his face as much.’ Spencer stopped in his tracks...

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Autobuff - I could make a

Posted on Fri, 06 Sep 2024

Autobuff - I could make a fortune couldn't I. Poor Vanessa. I've been there many times with one of my children and I always felt that if even if I could afford whatever it is, I wouldn't be buying it anyway. Thank you so much for your comment Di...

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You do these surreal tales

Posted on Tue, 03 Sep 2024

You do these surreal tales mixed with very real emotional elements so well, Paul. I knew I would enjoy it from the onset. Opening the message, clicking the link, it sounds so innocent but is increasing powerful and dangerous. The idea of having a...

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Awful, Maxine, it's such a

Posted on Thu, 05 Sep 2024

Awful, Maxine, it's such a gut wrenching story. There appears to be an epidemic of crime involving young men, boys, and bladed weapons and we are being let down.

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Wise and wonderful words,

Posted on Mon, 02 Sep 2024

Wise and wonderful words, Rhiannon. Beautiful photographs too. The last verse very calming.

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I admire the way which you

Posted on Sun, 01 Sep 2024

I admire the way which you describe sounds and the tone of voices so that they you can really hear them as you read. It's easy to imagine pirates being realy quite stupid. There's is so much detail in your story. I would love to see it in an...

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Colouring outside the lines

Posted on Sun, 11 Aug 2024

Colouring outside the lines and writing in between them. When the fragments come together seamlessly. Brilliantly done.

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This is so magical and

Posted on Mon, 12 Aug 2024

This is so magical and charming, Jenny, it sounds like my ideal garden. I like to think these folk are hiding in the flowers. I know I've got hedgehogs and I'm very grateful for those but elves would be wonderful.

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Hi Di, that is absolutely

Posted on Thu, 08 Aug 2024

Hi Di, that is absolutely awful. I honestly think for some children, their bodies physically reject meat and fish and they're just not made to consume it. Having observed how some parents react dismissively to very fussy eaters, I can imagine how...

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This is moving tribute, Jenny

Posted on Tue, 30 Jul 2024

This is moving tribute, Jenny, sensitively done. It's been on my mind all week and can't help wondering what went wrong with this young man. The response of the public, I understand, it's based upon fear. Caring is your saving grace - it's true...

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I'd never heard of Tom Crean,

Posted on Wed, 31 Jul 2024

I'd never heard of Tom Crean, I love his name. You leave the reader with decisions to make about who is real and what really happened and the atmosphere of the pub and the old cottage is so well done.